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by JohnnyTruant
Sun Nov 23, 2014 10:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)

MAJOR UPDATE 11/23: Our editor has went AWOL, therefore I have to search for a new one. I have taken a hiatus to focus on my life, but I'm hoping to find a new editor soon and start back up. Since I have a less flexible schedule, I'm hoping to post 2 chapters a month. If you're interested in editin...
by JohnnyTruant
Wed May 14, 2014 11:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)

AFAIK the character isn't actually immortal, but he appears in, oh, about a 80-100 year timespan in Hanako's storyline without aging. And, yes, it's a dead Hanako and Hisao that write the letter. http://pastebin.com/i4pwk0SZ http://pastebin.com/J7pSYzTA I think he's too literal-minded to get this p...
by JohnnyTruant
Tue May 13, 2014 10:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)

Oh, are letters written by dead people and delivered by immortals a common occurrence for you? The letter was implied to be written while Hanako was still alive. The same character isn't supposed to be immortal. Just because he's featured in some of That Guy's other works doesn't mean the character...
by JohnnyTruant
Mon May 12, 2014 1:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)

The guy on the bench was dressed as a limousine driver. The same guy drove the ambulance later. In Hanako’s story, he was constantly seen an a limousine driver, through the generations. And at the end, he was somehow able to deliver a letter from Hanako, written after she was dead, to her children/...
by JohnnyTruant
Sun May 11, 2014 11:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)

Nooooo, some guy sitting on a park bench mentioned the possibility of ‘forgetting’ to use contraception to Emi and that guy was ‘the driver’. Regardless, I'm not sure what the "supernatural presence" you're talking about is. A stranger on a park bench isn't a supernatural presence. A supernatural p...
by JohnnyTruant
Sun May 11, 2014 5:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)

You're missing out if you arnt reading pseudo-routes, a select few are among the greatest pieces writing on this forum. Also if I could add a comment about Ascent, while it was quite good, it was very idiotball, carrying someone as light as emi would be with their weight divided among your front/ba...
by JohnnyTruant
Sun May 11, 2014 12:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)

brythain wrote:
dewelar wrote:It's not just Emi-logues. There just aren't a whole lot of good Emi stories out there, period. Fewer than any of the other girls, I'd wager.
It might be because she's so hard to make interesting. You can always try though, and it's fun to watch. :)
You sure you're not referring to Shizune?
by JohnnyTruant
Sun May 11, 2014 12:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)

It's not just Emi-logues. There just aren't a whole lot of good Emi stories out there, period . Fewer than any of the other girls, I'd wager. Well, not quite. There just aren't that many Emi stories. They all stand out. Hanako has like 12304u123958y234895y1234928375-09386-02358-0248934-023489205870...
by JohnnyTruant
Sat May 10, 2014 11:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)

That Guy’s Emilogue had what I considered a fatal flaw, discussed in his thread. I am willing to be proven wrong, but until he finishes the other stories, I stand by my position. Ascent depended too much on Idiot Ball for drama. It’s much easier to carry someone than depicted there. This one is a t...
by JohnnyTruant
Sat May 10, 2014 7:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)

Well, after three times of this being posted, I finally read it. It was better than I expected. Unfortunately, that might be because my opinion of previous Emilogues are so low. There are obvious mistakes, like both of Hisao’s parents getting out of the right side of the car. But the main problem t...
by JohnnyTruant
Sat May 10, 2014 6:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/8/14)

Endorphin Rush – An Emilougue Chapter 0 - “A New Constant” “What do you want to do today?” I ponder a few moments on my thoughts with a large grin on my face. “Well … I’ve met your parents now. I think it’s about time you meet mine. My mom would adore you!” “Can’t wait!” I stretch from the bed to g...
by JohnnyTruant
Sat May 10, 2014 5:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/8/14)

I've talked it about it to you in pm but yes I think it will serverly hurt the immersion, I don't know how much fan fiction you read but imagine the longest one you read in one sitting and how immersed it made you. Now I again every few paragraphs there was a question or link you had to click. It w...
by JohnnyTruant
Sat May 10, 2014 5:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/8/14)

QUICK POLL: Would creating two different sides to the story (a good and bad) disable the immersion in the story?
by JohnnyTruant
Sat May 10, 2014 3:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/8/14)

Okay, so the issue in the final version has been resolved. Chapter 0 scheduled to go up in a few hours (for the third time lol).
by JohnnyTruant
Sat May 10, 2014 3:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12863

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/8/14)

dewelar wrote:
But, like I said, everyone's style is going to be different :) .
Got it! Thanks so much! :) Chapter 0 will be re-posted soon enough! Coffee just has to get back with me about a question I have about the final version.