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by imgurKnight
Wed Dec 17, 2014 4:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 398805

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.55 posted 12/

Hmmm...if you say this ... And unless your sex scene is doing one of those two things (which, as well-written as yours is, doesn't really change Emi or Hisao, nor does it put them in a particularly different place in their relationship) ...then I definitely failed here. Well, shit. Yeah...this is k...
by imgurKnight
Thu Nov 06, 2014 10:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 398805

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.53 posted 11/

Great chapter. I'm not sure how I feel about the rather blatant shout-out to the hair-changing tradition. Not that it wasn't relevant. It just seemed a bit off reading Hisao's leap of logic from why Rin wouldn't drastically change her hairstyle, particularly how he quickly connects the dots to Mish...
by imgurKnight
Sat Aug 16, 2014 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210215 You And I Both)
Replies: 1903
Views: 364195

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Constant Companion)

I actually really like Constant Companion, but there's some issues with it. I'd say first and foremost is one that a lot of stuff does, which is assuming everyone is deeply in love with Hisao from the first week he shows up. I really find it hard to believe that, for example, Rin would be that upset...
by imgurKnight
Tue Apr 01, 2014 12:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 287370

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

And as a final point, something which extends beyond this single thread: make your comments substantial . Everyone understands that it's hard to think of something to add, and you need to reply to subscribe, etc., etc., etc. That's irrelevant. Critical facilities are like muscles - you need to exer...
by imgurKnight
Mon Dec 30, 2013 7:14 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1318
Views: 328563

Re: Blooper Reel

Man, when did guest posting get turned off? Whatever, I found these on imgur and added a "not real" watermark so I could post them here. Original artist would prefer not to be named, says it was inspired by a fake sprite. http://i.imgur.com/JRA9IlV.png http://i.imgur.com/8OYucFk.png http://i.imgur.c...