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by Blank Mage
Tue Jun 30, 2015 5:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 941820

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumed: July—Iwanako)

Bry, did anyone ever tell you you'd make a great Dungeon Master? I feel like this whole idea is already shaping up into something crazy-awesome, and we haven't even gotten to the main cast yet! I guess I'll go ahead and offer some light commentary on the four pieces so far. The Past Catches Up: As a...
by Blank Mage
Sun Jun 28, 2015 2:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-16) Class Reunion
Replies: 135
Views: 94897

Re: Firing Blanks - (Updated 6-27) Scrapped Routes

This is basically the reason I'm so fond of this thread: everything in it is really high-concept. I'm totally about that. I'm like the layman's Brythain. It's similar to "A World Much Like Our Own" though, in that I didn't fully understand what was going on during my first read-through. A...
by Blank Mage
Sat Jun 27, 2015 3:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rigor and Vigor
Replies: 6
Views: 3164

Re: Rigor and Vigor

RE3: Nemesis, huh? I know that game a little too well.
by Blank Mage
Sat Jun 27, 2015 1:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-16) Class Reunion
Replies: 135
Views: 94897

Firing Blanks - (Updated 6-27) Scrapped Routes

Scrapped Routes --------------------------------- I'm woken up by the sickening sensation that only comes from having rolled out of bed, the momentary loss of gravity pulling me from my sleep instantly. I brace for the impact of the floor, but instead find myself on something soft the moment I real...
by Blank Mage
Fri Jun 26, 2015 4:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 941820

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Iwanako Rising)

...it could be said that the different Hisaos are a result of Act 1 being the player deciding who Hisao is (and that there are in fact six mutually exclusive Hisaos in some kind of quantum superposition until we observe him and collapse the waveform...) ...Be right back, I have to go write somethin...
by Blank Mage
Fri Jun 26, 2015 1:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 941820

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Iwanako Rising)

If it please the court... I would like to address Question 3 in Chief Justice Brythain's instructions- http://cdn2.hubspot.net/hub/315483/file-567176249-jpg/objection.jpg?t=1435107133543 ....I... I don't actually have an objection. It's all pretty sound. It's just my base reaction when people do th...
by Blank Mage
Fri Jun 26, 2015 11:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Phantom Pains: Mirror Shoujo
Replies: 85
Views: 33965

Re: Phantom Pains: Mirror Shoujo [Updated 25/6/15]

Two problems, though: one, reading speed is going to be tough to manage, since there can be quite a difference in how long it takes people to make it through a sentence. More importantly, the sprites no longer match the characters. Emi acts more like Lilly, Lilly acts like Emi, Hanako isn't shy and ...
by Blank Mage
Thu Jun 25, 2015 9:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1207
Views: 1177253

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Eurobeatjester wrote:I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well :)
Lurker Blank Mage reads all the stories.
by Blank Mage
Wed Jun 24, 2015 4:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 941820

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Iwanako Rising)

I think what's interesting about Iwanako (and therefore Iwanako Month) is that at this point she's functionally Leaty's OC. I mean, I like Shizune, but I think Puncyclopedia likely has at least as good a handle on her as I do, probably better. There's Weekend at Hisao's or Megumeru's works. She's ha...
by Blank Mage
Mon Jun 22, 2015 11:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shorts by Ozymil (Updated 12/7/17)
Replies: 34
Views: 23717

Re: Shorts by Ozymil (Updated 6/19)

I don't drink tea, but apparently I friggen have to, because it sounds like the shit.
by Blank Mage
Thu Jun 18, 2015 11:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Phantom Pains: Mirror Shoujo
Replies: 85
Views: 33965

Re: Phantom Pains (Alternate Reality) [Updated 19/6/15]

I was a bit worried that you might make Emi a bit too 'Ye Olden' after the last segment, but I must say that I like how you wrote her here. Just formal enough to be unique, just friendly enough to be sincere, just awkward enough to show the uncertainty behind her statements and actions. It's also ho...
by Blank Mage
Thu Jun 18, 2015 10:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 99323

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 6/17!)

Don't worry, you can join Blank Mage, I'm pretty sure he hates me by now as he patiently waits for Shizune's first appearance in the story. xD aaaaaaaaggggghhhhh In all seriousness, though, I'm enjoying your Lilly quite a bit, mostly because she doesn't come across as the effortlessly perfect girl ...
by Blank Mage
Thu Jun 18, 2015 10:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re-imagining Fanfic: Fideism
Replies: 4
Views: 2755

Re: Re-imagining Fanfic: Fideism

I'd be more inclined to read this if it wasn't so dauntingly dense. I mean, that is one solid wall of text you have there.
by Blank Mage
Mon Jun 15, 2015 1:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 941820

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting/Hisao Final Week Approach)

brythain wrote:Next month (we might start a little earlier), it's Iwanako!
At which point we might as well make Leaty the Club President for a month.