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by hyroglyphixs
Wed Sep 02, 2015 7:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/28)
Replies: 1039
Views: 279072

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New Art 8/29)

Well, I've took a hiatus on these forums for a few months, and I had the pleasure of reading all your newest chapters. All I have to say is that your writing is fantastic. That entire last chapter, I was so drawn into Saki and Hisao's conversation that it was as if I was in the corner listening in o...
by hyroglyphixs
Sat Feb 07, 2015 11:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Distance - A post-Lilly good end one shot.
Replies: 6
Views: 2261

Re: Distance - A post-Lilly good end one shot.

Yeah, I have no doubt that Hisao and Hanako would've liked to see Akira's face, but by the way you presented it it seemed like Lilly hadn't heard from Akira since she left when she could have called at any time. Anyways, if you want actual feedback on your writing I'm afraid I can't help you very mu...
by hyroglyphixs
Sat Feb 07, 2015 9:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Distance - A post-Lilly good end one shot.
Replies: 6
Views: 2261

Re: Distance - A post-Lilly good end one shot.

A very cute story! I can definitely see how Lilly would be very sad without having Akira around her after being together for her entire life.

My only issue is how is a Skype call any different than phoning her using the speakerphone?
by hyroglyphixs
Fri Dec 12, 2014 4:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 52896

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Dec 4th)

A week late to the party but that didn't make it any less good :wink:

Interesting to see that you had a branching off point, guess I'll have to see where you take it from here..
by hyroglyphixs
Fri Dec 12, 2014 4:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/28)
Replies: 1039
Views: 279072

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/17)

Eurobeatjester wrote:New chapter should be finished soon :) So far it's about half as long as the festival, so I may split it into two chapters and do a double update :D
Looking forward to it!
by hyroglyphixs
Thu Nov 13, 2014 3:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Vision
Replies: 68
Views: 16013

Re: Vision

This is a really cool concept! Loved the first installment and can't wait to see (hehe) Lilly's reaction to normal, everyday things that might potentially surprise her :wink:
by hyroglyphixs
Sat Nov 01, 2014 6:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 318
Views: 341910

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

In her mind, Hanako was stuck in a lose-lose situation. Causing a public disturbance in the lecture hall made her believe that if she'd attend the journalism faculty at Kasshoku, people would remember her and ridicule or even bully her. Suddenly, graduating and attending university became a bad opt...
by hyroglyphixs
Fri Oct 31, 2014 4:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 318
Views: 341910

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

So.. I finally got around to reading the whole thing! Where do I even start.. Last year when I read the original Sisterhood I was so happy that you gave Hanako's route some closure. The way you handled the situation with Hisao having a heart attack causing Hanako to have a panic attack was brilliant...
by hyroglyphixs
Sun Oct 05, 2014 5:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 296210

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.51 posted 10/

And there it is.. the home stretch is in sight. This story can come a long way, and I've enjoyed every bit of it.

In particular, the resolution with Hanako was really well done.. and I hope there will a chapter with the 3 in the tea room in the future for ole times sake :wink:
by hyroglyphixs
Tue Sep 23, 2014 6:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/28)
Replies: 1039
Views: 279072

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 9/20)

Wow, you've clearly done your research :D It really adds realism to the story.. giving me another reason to love your story! I'm curious on how this swimming thing will work out and I'm super excited on what you have in store for the city trip. I don't really have any critiques on the writing (it's ...
by hyroglyphixs
Wed Sep 10, 2014 4:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68448

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 9/7)

Decided to finally read all the chapters. I definitely like what you've written so far. A lot of elements are obviously taken from Scissorlips' Suzu route but that's fine with me :D

This love-triangle you set up definitely brings up a big plot point, I'm curious on what you make out of it..
by hyroglyphixs
Sun Sep 07, 2014 10:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 197114

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {UPDATED 2014-9-5!}

Finally got around to reading your new update! You cannot imagine how happy I was when I saw that there was not only 1, but 4 new chapters! :D Onto the actual story: I loved every bit of it. After reading about how much trouble you had with the Nurse scene, I'm really glad it turned out the way it d...
by hyroglyphixs
Fri Aug 22, 2014 2:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/28)
Replies: 1039
Views: 279072

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 8/21)

Again, a fantastic chapter! I love your writing and I'll be eagerly checking these forums for the next update :)
by hyroglyphixs
Sun Aug 10, 2014 10:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 52896

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Aug 10th)

Awesome installment. While I agree with bhtooefr on the silliness of Hisao not knowing how to buy clothes, everything else was fantastic. The whole Hisao thinking that he was not good enough for Yamaku is a very interesting angle into his emotions. Can't wait to see what Miki makes out of this in th...
by hyroglyphixs
Sat Aug 09, 2014 4:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 296210

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Interlude 4 up 8

And the nightmare begins..

Or maybe you're tricking us hmmm

Really though, the last 2 chapters have been fantastic, as always :D