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by Deadpool021
Fri Oct 10, 2014 10:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 95864

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 5/8]

How is exactly is Kagami's Amnesia? Is she not able to create new memories and catches up with her whole life in the morning or is she able to remember bits and pieces and fills in the gaps through her notes? It's probably somewhere in the story but I must have forgotten, maybe I have amnesia :shock...
by Deadpool021
Fri Oct 10, 2014 9:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 207273

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/02/14 ~ Reactivated

Put simply, yes, it's still in progress. Nobody wants to see it finished more than me. That said, I've come across the Great Wall of China in terms of writer's blocks. That plus life and more than a little writer's fatigue has resulted in a rather long break between chapter publications. That's nic...
by Deadpool021
Fri Oct 10, 2014 4:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 207273

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/02/14 ~ Reactivated

Alright so I read all the chapters in the past 5 days (I have nothing better to do on my free time, don't judge me). I really love the cast of characters and how the story progressed. I want to ask if this Fanfic is on hold? Don't get me wrong I am not requesting or asking when the next chapter will...
by Deadpool021
Wed Sep 24, 2014 9:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 318
Views: 340800

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Thanks. :) Yeah, others have brought up the fact that the story moved away from Hisao in the later chapters. This was both kind of intentional and kind of unavoidable. The first 18 chapters had two plotlines that moved side by side: Hanako and Hisao trying to develop their relationship as girlfrien...
by Deadpool021
Wed Sep 24, 2014 2:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 318
Views: 340800

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

I just finished reading all of it (yes I used most of my free time this past week on this) and oh man I don't even know where to start. This was simply amazing. I never thought that I would enjoy a fanfiction more than it's original thing. I am not exaggerating here and truly have enjoyed this story...
by Deadpool021
Fri Sep 05, 2014 2:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 295648

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.49 posted 9/4

I really didn't expect Hanako to blow up like that. I understand what Lily was trying to say and it was the right thing to say but I think she should have chosen her words more carefully given the state Hanako was in. Hanako also seems like she is at a point in which she does not trust anyone anymor...
by Deadpool021
Mon Aug 18, 2014 10:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87277

Re: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)

Congratulations Trivun! I really enjoyed the story and think you did a wonderful job portraying Hanako's perspective. Some may disagree with certain parts but we all need to remember that the VN never showed what she was thinking so everything would be each owns interpretation and I like yours. Re-r...
by Deadpool021
Mon Jul 21, 2014 2:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 295648

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 46 up 7/

I've got a bad feeling about this
by Deadpool021
Thu Jul 10, 2014 10:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 295648

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 45 up 7/

Reading the same scene but with a perspective from a different character is definitely what I like most about this fan fic. I'm now curious as to what Lilly is doing.
by Deadpool021
Sat Jun 21, 2014 1:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87277

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)

Trivun I am Brazilian and my country isn't satisfied with how we're playing either but I must admit we're not as bad as you guys haha. I thought the original chapter you submitted wasn't bad at all. The only things that seemed strange was the shower part and the practice kissing. Like it was comment...
by Deadpool021
Mon Jun 16, 2014 8:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87277

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)

I hope you get internet soon for your own sake. I was in a very similar situation a few years ago so I know how its like. I've never been to the library so many times lol. We'll definitely wait patiently. Good luck at your new place
by Deadpool021
Sat May 24, 2014 9:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 362836

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]

And so it ends. Great work man. I always looked forward to your new chapters and was never disappointed. I wish we could send you back in time to work with 4LS to make this one of the canon routes of the VN :lol: Congratulations! You must feel awesome in finally completing a project that took you ov...
by Deadpool021
Thu May 22, 2014 11:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 295648

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 41 up 5/

Noooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!! Liiiiiiiiilllllllllyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!! Although I am sad that Hisao doesn't have any feelings for Lily, I'm glad you made it in a way that they don't have a fallout. However I do think maybe Lily had more she wanted to say but chose not to. Great chapter as always and I am loo...
by Deadpool021
Sun May 11, 2014 8:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 362836

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/11]

Nice chapter! You do a splendid job in writing Akira's and HIsao's interaction, they're cute together :). Akira seems dead on not leaving the country but it seems that Mr. Satou isn't going to take no for an answer and may have a back up plan. I can't wait to see how everything turns out.
by Deadpool021
Wed May 07, 2014 11:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 295648

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 40 up 5/

Nice chapter. I loved the conversation between Lilly and Shizune as I also think a lot gets lost in translation with Misha which further fuels their arguments. Can't wait for the next update.