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by NotSoClassy
Sun Mar 06, 2016 6:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 'Mistaking Identify'—A Class 3.4 Story (Ch14 up 20170725)
Replies: 29
Views: 12345

Re: 'Mistaking Identify' (A Class 3.4 Fiction) (Ch8 up 20160

This fic started cool and the main character was composed well but I really dont like how he got in love and became the standart hopeless depressed moron all of a sudden.

Also, last chapter was baffling, but im being too harsh. Hope you turn it around.
by NotSoClassy
Wed Mar 02, 2016 9:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52861

Re: Flutter - Level Four: Guard Break [1/3/16]

A Fanfic about Rika?

...


Count me in.
by NotSoClassy
Fri Sep 05, 2014 2:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 294324

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.49 posted 9/4

Great chapter, though I fear Hanako might be getting a bit over the board with her paranoia. Still rooting for Lilly, though I know Iwanako will win with some sort of an insane twist of fate.
by NotSoClassy
Tue Sep 02, 2014 6:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 294324

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.48 posted 8/1

I think, with Emi, there is not much moving on, nothing unexpected. It's almolst allways the same. Hisao wants to get closer to her, she runs away. Over. And. Over. Again. It's not even two steps forward, one step back. Its one step forward, one backwards. While other characters progress and grow pa...
by NotSoClassy
Wed Jun 04, 2014 6:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 294324

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 42 up 6/

Thing about Hisao is... Well, some games tend to make their main character as uninteresting and average as they can, so the audience may relate to him. Make someone with his own specific personality and some people will start to not feel "in tune" with their character. Lots of games suffer of this s...
by NotSoClassy
Mon Apr 21, 2014 1:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Start/Load/Extras
Replies: 7
Views: 1384

Re: Start/Load/Extras

So basically Hanako is a weeping angel and zapped Hisao back in time.

Nice.

EDIT: HO SHIT! THIS ALSO EXPLAINS WHY SHE COVERS HER FACE ALL THE TIME AND DOES NOT LIKE TO BE LOOKED AT! WE ARE ONTO SOMETHING RIGHT HERE!
by NotSoClassy
Sun Mar 30, 2014 9:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki's First Time
Replies: 28
Views: 5424

Re: Miki's First Time

Helbereth wrote:
NotSoClassy wrote:I Imagine what would someone think after skipping the whole thing and reading just the two last lines.
They would probably assume this fic was not so classy.
Ba dum tss
by NotSoClassy
Sun Mar 30, 2014 5:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki's First Time
Replies: 28
Views: 5424

Re: Miki's First Time

I Imagine what would someone think after skipping the whole thing and reading just the two last lines.
by NotSoClassy
Sun Mar 16, 2014 6:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 294324

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 36 up 3/

I agree with bhtooefr, a "bad ending" between Hanako and Lilly is probably inevitable. However, that may be a good thing, if it leads the two to restart their relationship on more equal footing (and with a better idea on how to deal with Mr. Hisao Clueless Nakai). One thing that worries me, is that...
by NotSoClassy
Sat Mar 15, 2014 3:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 294324

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 36 up 3/

The further we go in the more I keep thinking that some big conflict will happen soon.

That shopping event better not be just some peacefull shopping event...
by NotSoClassy
Sun Mar 09, 2014 11:32 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: If the girls were rpg characters
Replies: 92
Views: 15717

Re: If the girls were rpg characters

Not sure, but Having a priestess of the goddess of the arts in your party might be quite handy...

And to hell we go!
by NotSoClassy
Wed Mar 05, 2014 3:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 294324

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 35 up 3/

Epic buildup. But you can only build suspense for so long before it gets a bit annoying, just sayin.
by NotSoClassy
Wed Jan 29, 2014 5:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 294324

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) [New chapter 1/22]

Solistor wrote:None of the current proposed love interests will end up with Hisao in the end. Dewelar's gonna pull a fast one on us and have Hisao date Rin in the end. I can feel it in my spleen, man.
Or it's just gonna be the mythical harem ending.
by NotSoClassy
Thu Jan 23, 2014 6:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 52608

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jan 23rd)

timetravelzero wrote:
Sperance wrote:Another good chapter! Also, is... Is Miki a thrill seeker? She's... She's gonna end up boinking Hisao in a public place, isn't she
Heh. I approve of this idea.
Hisao's heart probably doesn't.
by NotSoClassy
Sun Jan 12, 2014 4:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meeting Lyle
Replies: 30
Views: 4495

Re: Meeting Lyle

Steinherz wrote: Look at other genderswap stories (the Fionna and Cake episodes of Adventure time are the best examples).
The character's personality is also changed accordingly to more fit the gender.

Yea, it has something to do with different glands, in my opinion.