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by cake307
Wed Sep 24, 2014 1:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.50 posted 9/1

Dewelar does a decent Kenji. Obviously this is how we now that this will all turn out to be a Kenji Harem fic. Somehow.
by cake307
Tue Sep 09, 2014 12:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.49 posted 9/4

What bothers me the most is the hypocrisy. Did she go to Lilly because she genuinely wanted advice, or because she just wanted her to say what she wanted to hear? However rough and poorly worded Lilly's statement was, Hanako's reaction to it only served to prove a point. She chose to confide in som...
by cake307
Sun Jul 06, 2014 11:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 45 up 7/

Sorry I was gone so long, my computer broke and had to be sent in. So I just read all three overlapping chapters at once, which was an interesting experience. Once again, I agree with Mirage- I don't think Lilly is going to do permanent harm to herself. I think she'll be beating herself up for the s...
by cake307
Thu May 22, 2014 8:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 41 up 5/

I think I've got to agree with Mirage here. It looks, on the surface, like momentum is swinging Hanako's way, but once you look deeper it seems much less likely. Yes, Hisao felt his kiss with Hanako was good, but this chapter and the last time we saw him, He's clearly been fixated on Emi as a whole....
by cake307
Thu May 08, 2014 3:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 40 up 5/

That cliffhanger though. In serious mode, another great chapter, and I really liked how well you managed to capture Lilly's typical thought process. It seems like she's still the character who's changed least, but recent events have pushed her over that threshold and now she's muddling along trying ...
by cake307
Fri Apr 25, 2014 1:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 39 up 4/

I'm not sure why people would think less of Lilly for this chapter. Yes, Hanako asked her to open up, but as Hanako herself should know, that doesn't work. Hanako doesn't think Lilly's doing it to protect her, either; she's (probably correctly) interpreting it as not wanting to share her burden. She...
by cake307
Thu Apr 10, 2014 7:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 38 up 4/

Well, this chapter has made my hopes rely on Hisao, and that's never a good place to be, so that's troubling. Luckily there's still a lot of story to go, it seems, so I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Emi gets to where she was towards the good end of her route somehow!
by cake307
Thu Mar 20, 2014 11:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 36 up 3/

Ok, so, I'm kind of late to the party, and have been gone for a while, but I still love the story I swear! Anyways, as far as this chapter goes, I see the Lilly/Hanako relationship blowing up, but maybe not for the same reason as the general consensus. I think Hanako is intelligent enough to realize...
by cake307
Wed Feb 19, 2014 4:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 34 up 2/

While I understand the sentiment, if you were in Lilly's position wouldn't YOU do everything you could to try to fix the life altering mistake you made? I would, even if I felt a bit bad about not giving my friend a fair shot. There are no 'dibs' or 'turns' when it comes to matters of the heart. Su...
by cake307
Tue Feb 18, 2014 2:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 34 up 2/

I guess I'm the lone reader (so far, at least) that really feels Lilly and Hisao fixing things and figuring it out and getting back together isn't OMGEBUL. I mean, I understand it'll be tough on Hanako to get "backstabbed," an it'll also be tough on Emi when she may have finally found someone she ca...
by cake307
Thu Feb 13, 2014 3:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Interlude 3, 2/1

That's.... A pretty destructive attitude, actually. Yamaku has strong unwritten rules against prying for information, and reporting any and all gossip to the head of the paper seems blatantly mean spirited. Or it would, but coming from her perspective, it doesn't seem like she truly grasps the impa...
by cake307
Mon Feb 03, 2014 6:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch 33 added 2/3/

I agree with the general consensus that Emi just won, as long as she can get enough courage to take her win. Unless Hisao is some kind of hidden sadistic jerk looking to break everyone in this story, which seems to be very ooc. But yeah, I'm little concerned now that Emi reacted the way she did, eve...
by cake307
Thu Jan 23, 2014 3:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) [New chapter 1/22]

"That's I'm not letting you ask!" "that's I'm"? Why not a why? Anyways, argh at you for not burning that number! We KNOW that when Emi comes to help him put up those posters it's gonna be like "What's this number that's clearly for a booty call?" and then the world will explode (at least for Hisao)...
by cake307
Sat Jan 11, 2014 6:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 31 up 1/10]

I know she was returning, it's been out there for quite a while but I still haven't figured out a way for that to happen that doesn't make everything else just... so depressing. And plus, now I don't know who to cheer for! I personally still want him to end up with Emi before Hanako, but I don't kno...
by cake307
Fri Jan 03, 2014 1:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 312817

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 30 up 12/31]

"Seaweed Girl," as leaty calls her, is clearly what scientists classify as a "homeus wreckerus," which I most certainly didn't just make up and which is real latin I swear. It seems increasingly likely that Lilly will also be a "homeus wreckerus"... and maybe Shizune, too, indirectly. If the fabled ...