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by monkeywitha6pack
Sat Mar 23, 2019 11:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Replies: 52
Views: 4960

Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection

My very late post for BristerXD with the prompt Rins snowfort. I had a lot of personal issues over the last few months, and every so often I tried to sit down and work on it a bit and I'd rather not keep him waiting any longer, so heres what I pulled off It's not too often we get more than a small a...
by monkeywitha6pack
Fri Jul 20, 2018 11:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Oct 15th, 2018)
Replies: 196
Views: 48196

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jul 20th, 2018)

Normally I don't comment unless I feel I have something useful to say, but honestly I just love this fic, and the way you write these characters. Specifically Hisao. He comes off as calm and funny, this fic never fails to make me smile :D
by monkeywitha6pack
Mon Jun 25, 2018 11:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two halves make a whole. Definitive edition (Updated 6/24)
Replies: 13
Views: 1498

Re: Two halves make a whole. Definitive edition (Updated 6/24)

ext up you have a lot of stylistic issues, like a lot, with grammar and sentence structure. Last and maybe most important.... don't make us wait another year before chapter 3! Yeah, the stylistic issue was bound to happen, I wrote chapter one and half of chapter two a few years ago (I sat on it for...
by monkeywitha6pack
Sun Jun 24, 2018 1:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two halves make a whole. Definitive edition (Updated 6/24)
Replies: 13
Views: 1498

Re: Two halves make a whole. Definitive edition (Updated 6/24)

I always viewed Hisao as extremely dense, and it seemed that was the general consensus form the people I asked. The separation was referring to the amount of time she visited him in the hospital, before giving up causing the separation. Personally I feel some time between the two of them would be ne...
by monkeywitha6pack
Sun Jun 24, 2018 12:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two halves make a whole. Definitive edition (Updated 6/24)
Replies: 13
Views: 1498

Re: Two halves make a whole. Definitive edition

Chapter 2 I’m brought back from my daydream by the bell ringing. I managed to finish my work a few minutes early and scored myself some relaxation. As usual I have to sit and wait for the crowd to disperse, seeing as I have to avoid blows to the chest, shoving my way through a crowd all rushing to g...
by monkeywitha6pack
Thu Jan 18, 2018 11:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Just Live
Replies: 8
Views: 1082

Re: Just Live

Sorry, I mentally swaped the two names for some reason
by monkeywitha6pack
Tue Jan 16, 2018 11:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Just Live
Replies: 8
Views: 1082

Re: Just Live

Gotta say, this is a really good fic. Brings up some nice thought processes, and it includes saki who I think has great potential as a character. Over all great job!
by monkeywitha6pack
Sat Dec 30, 2017 11:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2017 - Story collection
Replies: 19
Views: 3797

Re: Secret Santa 2017 - Story collection

Im gonna toss mine in this thread since I feel its not long enough to justify its own thread. Hey guys, I took a bit of a break from my usual fics to join the secret Santa! My prompt was from Feurox and it was “Shizune’s silent night” I feel bad that it's not super long, but I had a tough time comin...
by monkeywitha6pack
Wed Sep 13, 2017 11:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Oct 15th, 2018)
Replies: 196
Views: 48196

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 5th, 2017)

Haven't read any fics in well over a year, I chose a good one to come back to! I remember reading chapter one the day it was posted, time flies!
by monkeywitha6pack
Mon Jul 10, 2017 9:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two halves make a whole. Definitive edition (Updated 6/24)
Replies: 13
Views: 1498

Re: Two halves make a whole. Definitive edition

IIrc the pacing is quite a lot faster than in your first version... If we're talking about the unreleased google doc, it should be pretty similar since I used it as a base, if we're talking first version, I haven't looked at that in years If this is supposed to be tuesday, Hisao hasn't run with Emi...
by monkeywitha6pack
Mon Jul 10, 2017 2:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two halves make a whole. Definitive edition (Updated 6/24)
Replies: 13
Views: 1498

Re: Two halves make a whole. Definitive edition. Chapter 1

Chapter 1 I’ve only been here a short time and yet I’ve already fallen into a rhythm. I wake up, take my pills, go to class, eat dinner, do homework, some reading, then sleep. That’s how my new life has gone, and that’s probably how it’s going to go for the rest of the semester I really haven’t mad...
by monkeywitha6pack
Mon Jul 10, 2017 2:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two halves make a whole. Definitive edition (Updated 6/24)
Replies: 13
Views: 1498

Two halves make a whole. Definitive edition (Updated 6/24)

Hey guys! Its monkey back 4 years later with what I hope is a much better version of that fic I posted long long ago. I've been working on this on and off for four years and because of that the further I got into the fic the more my writing style changed and the earlier parts didn't match the later ...
by monkeywitha6pack
Thu Oct 27, 2016 4:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Black and white (updated 10/18/16)
Replies: 26
Views: 7178

Re: Black and white (updated 10/18/16)

Theres more coming. My and brythain are back and planning on finishing this :D I had a lot of issues that pretty much prevented me from writing for a long time. Between having a rough patch in life and having no computer I didn't have much of a way to read or write, but now I have a shiny new pc and...
by monkeywitha6pack
Tue Oct 18, 2016 8:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Black and white (updated 10/18/16)
Replies: 26
Views: 7178

Re: Black and white

Hey guys, we arent dead! After over a year heres chapter 3! This chapters written by me, with edits from brythain Chapter 3: Stuck in a Rut It’s been a few weeks since she left and I’ve gotten myself stuck in a rut. I rarely see Hanako anymore let alone anyone outside of the student council. I talk ...
by monkeywitha6pack
Thu Jun 11, 2015 10:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Black and white (updated 10/18/16)
Replies: 26
Views: 7178

Re: Black and white

Sadly the writing itself has only been going on for about 2 months tops. It was very difficult to try to organize 6-8 different people all working on one fic, ironically most of this writing took place after the numbers started dropping