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- Thu Oct 24, 2013 6:11 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
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Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
To be fair, I did say one-shot and drabble. I agree that these aren't exactly one-shots, but they are drabbles. :) I'll start trying longer, more independent stuff once I've got this project complete. And if I ever expand any of these into a full story, those stories will get their own thread, and l...
- Wed Oct 23, 2013 10:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 44791
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Oh, I know. But, I'm setting a challenge for myself of doing drabbles (and sticking to 100 words each, no double drabbles) right now, to develop skills with concise yet believable plot development. I also want to complete the series (which spontaneously started as drabbles) for the sake of completin...
- Wed Oct 23, 2013 5:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 44791
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Decided to do something different for that one. I wanted to get a Kenji aftermath (that is, Act 1 bad end, yes) drabble out, and wasn't sure how to go about it. That was the seventh total rewrite (and that's going from versions that had enough progress to save - probably twice that were scrapped bef...
- Wed Oct 23, 2013 5:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 44791
Gravity
"Miyagi, could you please come to my office? It's about Setou." I walk into the director's office, and take a seat. "Do you think that Yamaku is the right place for Setou, Miyagi?" After last night, I know he's hinting towards expelling Setou for his actions. Normally, I'd argue ...
- Tue Oct 22, 2013 9:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 44791
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Lilly didn't. *rimshot* Might take a while before the next one's up, as I'm trying and failing to beat it into submission. Think I need to change what I'm doing with it, as I either have to go OOC or longer than 100 words to get it right. Hanako POV, especially when trying to follow Hanako's Story's...
- Tue Oct 22, 2013 9:04 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
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Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2
Hmm, I just read back through this whole thread again. Wonder who all's gonna visit. The Emi/Iwanako dynamic is gonna be quite interesting to read, that much is obvious. Why do I get this feeling that Emi will be visiting Iwanako of her own accord, and apologizing? (And it having legitimately nothin...
- Tue Oct 22, 2013 5:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 430083
Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2
You know, I wonder... in US schools, removal of athletic privileges is sometimes used as a punishment for academic or behavioral failings. Will Emi be removed from the track team, or maybe even banned from use of the track? I could see that as being EXTREMELY devastating for her. Hell, with expulsio...
- Tue Oct 22, 2013 5:31 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Zombies - Updated 17/12/13
- Replies: 80
- Views: 27186
Re: Zombies - Updated 20/10/13
I go for Occam's Razor here. That is, the zombie virus is simply a rabies variant that also causes gangrene, and "undeath" isn't actually occurring.
- Mon Oct 21, 2013 6:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 44791
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
I'll share some tips on how to build a good table of contents system, then. I didn't have the link to return to the TOC on Like Fire and Powder, due to the different nature of it (being chapters of the same story), but it shows how the system works on multiple forum pages. The trickiest part of doin...
- Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
- Replies: 515
- Views: 281922
Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
I can see why someone would think that, though.
It is the definition of awkward, although that's not exactly the usage I'd use for it. But, if I were trying to make a pun about Rin's disability...
It is the definition of awkward, although that's not exactly the usage I'd use for it. But, if I were trying to make a pun about Rin's disability...
- Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 44791
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
And, yes, I know this one looks like the start of a story, too, before anyone mentions that. (Honestly, if anyone DOES want to use one of these as the basis for a fic, I'd be honored.) Some things I couldn't get to work in the actual drabble: The physical therapist thing was Nurse's idea. I don't th...
- Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 44791
Propulsion
"Never look back. Keep moving forward." I tell myself that every day. Sometimes, it actually works. Like when I studied to become a physical therapist. Or when I won the gold in London. But right now, I'm looking back at the mistakes I made at Yamaku. I was too afraid of losing Hisao like ...
- Sun Oct 20, 2013 5:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
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Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 20 up 10/19]
Well, to quote "In Ruin" by Doomish: "No. No no no. You don't--" Lilly shuffles the phone even closer until her voice is clear as crystal. "You don't understand. When I tell Hisao I love him, I haven't meant it for months. I have had sex with SEVEN other men, more often tha...
- Sat Oct 19, 2013 3:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 44791
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Lilly has the tendency to hog people's burdens and try to shoulder as many of them as she can. Since Hanako's bad-end breakdown covered both mistakes by Hisao and by Lilly, I'd be extremely surprised if Lilly blamed Hisao for something that she also played a slight role in. More likely would be for...
- Sat Oct 19, 2013 10:12 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 44791
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Honestly, I don't actually have a headcanon for that one. There's at least one fic I liked that uses HisaoxLilly post-Hanako bad end to great effect. In that case, I could definitely see Lilly staying with Hisao in Japan, given the right circumstances. But, I don't think I've seen any fics that expl...