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by Feurox
Sun Nov 10, 2019 3:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Saturday in the Garden with Emi
Replies: 5
Views: 143

Re: Saturday in the Garden with Emi

A beautiful read Lap. You know I'm not a lover of the happy ending, but I still adore the optimistic ending of this story. Lilly and Emi grow throughout and it's truly heart-warming. I was lucky enough to read this way back when it was your prompt for the contest, (before I was judging them as well)...
by Feurox
Sat Nov 09, 2019 1:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Pablo Posts One-shots Here I Guess - Updated 10/26/2019
Replies: 6
Views: 232

Re: Pablo Posts One-shots Here I Guess - Updated 10/26/2019

A lovely read. I didn’t encounter anything problematic with spag etc, and it’s not my favourite area to linger on, so well done. For the story itself, I think it’s a fantastic idea and you implement it wonderfully. It’s a story that scratches at some really awful and terrifying concepts: I think eve...
by Feurox
Sat Nov 09, 2019 1:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (11/13/19 Update)
Replies: 9
Views: 304

Re: "I'm Here for You" One-Shot

Welcome to the forums, as Nuke said. Good to see new people joining. For a first story on the Renai, you've got a great story here. Short and self-contained, and generally optimistic, despite the sadness within it. I personally disagree with Nuke's, (and subsequently your own) assessment of the flas...
by Feurox
Thu Nov 07, 2019 9:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fallen Leaves & Broken Clocks/A Conversation on the Roof/A Fluke
Replies: 14
Views: 1490

Re: Fallen Leaves & Broken Clocks/A Conversation on the Roof/A Fluke

Heart-wrenching Chris, well done. Fate sure can be convoluted, the world sure can be an awful and sad and hopeless place. You touch on that, but you contrast it with Miki, with the faint hope that we have to carry on, with Saki's realisation that the dead don't want company. If you ever flesh out yo...
by Feurox
Sun Nov 03, 2019 1:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 113
Views: 28537

Observers PT2

Observers PT2 I take one last look around my room. Everything has been put away neatly. My bed is made, my clothes are all folded and tucked into their respective drawers, and the piles of letters that I’ve accumulated are no longer scattered all over my room, but are hidden beneath a jumper in my ...
by Feurox
Sun Nov 03, 2019 1:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 113
Views: 28537

Observers PT1

Observers PT1 …And if you need me, remember not to call. The facilities at Yamaku are open from very early until very late, because many people here have complicated schedules due to their conditions. It’d make sense for them to be open twenty-four hours a day, but it’s presumably quite difficult t...
by Feurox
Sun Nov 03, 2019 1:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 113
Views: 28537

Re: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 08/01/2019

Many thanks for the feedback Zere, and thank you to anyone still reading this. I hope you're enjoying the story. This next chapter was proofread by Scroff and Lap, thanks, as always.
by Feurox
Sat Nov 02, 2019 1:09 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: I post things here occassionally.
Replies: 104
Views: 25887

Re: I post things here occassionally.

Beautiful as always!
by Feurox
Mon Oct 28, 2019 7:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')
Replies: 283
Views: 80094

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')

This was a wonderful story, if actually quite heartbreaking. I’ve been thinking about doing another Saki story myself, and this certainly captures the trapped poetic beauty i’m aiming for. Suzu’s final act of reading the letter, and then drawing subconsciously, I can see them with Suzu gently crying...
by Feurox
Thu Oct 17, 2019 5:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-10-16)
Replies: 124
Views: 9733

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-10-16)

What a beautiful and spiritual story. Very poetic and wonderfully carthartic. I love the little ritual here, and can’t wait to see you inevitably do more with those little symbolic rituals in the future.
by Feurox
Sat Oct 05, 2019 1:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Spectral Letters and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 61
Views: 4501

Spectral Letters [10/05/2019]

This short letter was written in response to this week's book club meeting. You can see the conversation here: Book Club. I'd place this letter in my 'Requiem for a Heart-Song' timeline. Spectral Letters Dear Iwanako, I’m sorry this letter has taken so long to reach you; the truth is that your lette...
by Feurox
Fri Oct 04, 2019 6:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191111 Two Old & Colourful Pieces)
Replies: 1806
Views: 250128

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20191007 A reply to Iwanako)

It's a nice short piece. But I definitely prefer 'Hello' by BlackWaltzTheThird. Still, quite nice.
by Feurox
Fri Oct 04, 2019 3:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')
Replies: 283
Views: 80094

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#60—'Roofrunning')

Competition over. Congratulations Brythain. Truly. This story was some seriously good fun and I thoroughly enjoyed it. It's quite light-hearted, and if I'm honest, I doubt the practicality of running-blades for roof-running - and I'm sceptical of Roof-running as a form of exercise anyway, but the he...
by Feurox
Tue Oct 01, 2019 5:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (DISCONTINUED)
Replies: 15
Views: 677

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route

Okay. So, before anything else, welcome to the Renai. I know you've been working on this for a while from your comments on the discord. Still, I think it's a good idea to go over the usual warnings I post for anyone attempting a route. It's not something to be undertaken lightly. Pacing will always ...
by Feurox
Tue Oct 01, 2019 10:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miracles,Kilts and Lilys
Replies: 2
Views: 203

Re: Miracles,Kilts and Lilys

I feel it prudent to acknowledge that Synthetic Bruh's ‘Miracles, Kilts and Lilys' was written in response to the Yamaku Academy discord server competition, and that as such, they were assigned one of three potential judges to give feedback for their piece. It so happens that I was requested by Synt...