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by Feurox
Thu Sep 19, 2019 6:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Out Of The Blue" (Neko Book 4) *ABANDONED* Summary posted.
Replies: 361
Views: 65134

Re: "Out Of The Blue" (Neko Book 4) *ABANDONED* Summary posted.

I haven't followed your story for many years, for that I apologise. When I get the time, I'll probably go through and have a read to see how things have changed along the way. I just wanted to say that whilst I haven't been able to follow the story much, I do appreciate how much effort and work you'...
by Feurox
Thu Sep 19, 2019 9:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 59
Views: 3768

Re: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]

Your mastery—of the form of writing you're using—is improving. One can linger over the sentences and paragraphs, because they are beautiful. Thank you very much for the praise in the dedication. As I told you before I do not believe I deserve half of it. As expected it was a beautiful story. It was...
by Feurox
Thu Sep 19, 2019 8:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190916 Yields Six Servings)
Replies: 1796
Views: 242790

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190916 Yields Six Servings)

A fascinating and peculiar story. It seems to capture the essence of Rin quite well. I love the ending too. It's not exactly what I would call a 'deep' or thoughtful piece, but it's a very lovingly written story. Really, it's what isn't said that I'm most fascinated by. Rin is cooking for Hisao, sim...
by Feurox
Tue Sep 17, 2019 10:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fate/Shattered Wish (A Katawa Shoujo/Fate crossover fic) UPDATED 21/9/2019
Replies: 8
Views: 128

Re: Fate/Shattered Wish (A Katawa Shoujo/Fate crossover fic)

Cook has already said the point I was going to make about the relevance to KS, so I'll leave that. I have no idea what Fate is and KS is the only fandom I'm a part of, so I highly doubt I'm the target audience. Despite that, I'm willing to give your story a chance to impress me. What I would stress,...
by Feurox
Fri Sep 13, 2019 6:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 9/20/2019)
Replies: 16
Views: 542

Re: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route

Okay, so welcome to the forum! Always good to see some new people! I'm on the discord, so if something I said isn't clear, or anything else, you can reach me here or there. The usual warnings apply with regards to starting your writing with a route here, like it's a big commitment, it's hard to pace...
by Feurox
Tue Sep 10, 2019 11:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 59
Views: 3768

Re: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]

Edit 1 ( won’t call it the last, you never know)

PT 2 has an extra scene I missed during the uploading process. Whoops, my bad. Hope this hasn’t affected anything too much, and if you read it before the fix, it should make sense now.
by Feurox
Tue Sep 10, 2019 1:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 59
Views: 3768

Music Suggestions for 'The Kintsugi Club'

Okay, if you got through all that, well done - I hope you enjoyed the read. Thanks again go to Lap - my appreciation is unending I assure you. If you like listening to music to reflect on a story, I have a few pieces here that I think you might enjoy. Do let me know what you think, if this is your k...
by Feurox
Tue Sep 10, 2019 1:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 59
Views: 3768

The Kintsugi Club PT6

The Kintsugi Club PT6 I used to advertise my loyalty and I don't believe there is a single person I loved that I didn't eventually betray. Albert Camus, The Fall. * The walk to class is quiet this morning. It’s empty. Most of the stalls have been disassembled and stripped already, but a few still s...
by Feurox
Tue Sep 10, 2019 1:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 59
Views: 3768

The Kintsugi Club PT5

The Kintsugi Club PT5 To live is the rarest thing in the world. Most people exist, that is all. Oscar Wilde. * The walk to class is quiet this morning. It feels serene and peaceful, but it also feels a bit lonely. Part of me wishes that Saki was walking to class with me, or maybe Ritsu. I’m looking...
by Feurox
Tue Sep 10, 2019 1:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 59
Views: 3768

The Kintsugi Club PT4

The Kintsugi Club PT4 How dreadful the knowledge of the truth can be, When there’s no help in truth[.] Sophocles, Oedipus Rex * The walk to class is quiet this morning, and I actually spot a butterfly this time. It doesn’t land on me though. It’s Saturday, which means there’s only a half day of cla...
by Feurox
Tue Sep 10, 2019 1:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 59
Views: 3768

The Kintsugi Club PT3

The Kintsugi Club PT3 Because, don’t you see, what I know is what I am? And I can’t tell you that. You have to find it out for yourself. I’m like a book you have to read. A book can’t read itself to you. It doesn’t even know what it’s about. I don’t know what I’m about[…] Christopher Isherwood, A S...
by Feurox
Tue Sep 10, 2019 1:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 59
Views: 3768

The Kintsugi Club PT2

The Kintsugi Club PT2 There are all kinds of truth ... but behind all of them there is only one truth and that is that there's no truth. Flannery O’Connor, Wise blood. * The walk to class is quiet this morning, but it’s significantly colder than yesterday. I don’t see any butterflies. That girl fro...
by Feurox
Tue Sep 10, 2019 1:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 59
Views: 3768

The Kintsugi Club P1

The Kintsugi Club That was when I learned that words are no good; that words don’t ever fit even what they are trying to say at […] He had a word, too. Love, he called it. But I had been used to words for a long time. I knew that that word was like the others: just a shape to fill a lack[.] William...
by Feurox
Tue Sep 10, 2019 1:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 59
Views: 3768

The Kintsugi Club - A Tribute to Mirage_GSM, Brythain, and Craftyatom.

As always, my thanks go out to everyone who read and enjoyed Time is Dancing . Thank you so much for reading, and for your thoughtful feedback. I believe I’ve responded to most in Discord. My thanks, as always. Moving on… The following story is dedicated to three members of this community. Three mem...
by Feurox
Mon Sep 09, 2019 10:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)
Replies: 120
Views: 8885

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)

God this one is heart-breaking. I can very much see it happening in the timeline of events too, with Lilly diving into her work to avoid confronting the issues of their relationship! Rough!

I also don't think any set-up was required. Part of the fun is recognising what went wrong, how we got here.