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by Feurox
Sat Jan 09, 2021 8:57 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Post-PhD, I spent a year writing this 60,000 word KS Essay
Replies: 31
Views: 1230

Re: Post-PhD, I spent a year writing this 60,000 word KS Essay

Grayest wrote:
Sat Jan 09, 2021 8:48 pm
big talk coming from the writer of Shizune's path :P
Come on man.
by Feurox
Sat Jan 02, 2021 9:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New Entry 12-30-2020
Replies: 23
Views: 3556

Re: Lap's One shots & misc - New Entry 12-30-2020

A pleasure to (re)read! Seriously, a wonderfully sweet (not quite too sweet) story, and I mean, of all people, I LOVE seeing Molly get some, uh, love!

Happy New Year Lap and Psychicspy! Hopefully we see more brilliant stories from the two of you this year :D
by Feurox
Sat Jan 02, 2021 9:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
Replies: 36
Views: 2246

Re: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection

That's a lovely story. So they went over the sea to Skye, eh? Aye, where the Sea meets the Skye I think Bry old boy. I can only echo Britain's sentiment, that is indeed a lovely story Scramblers. It reminds me why I reached out to you in the first place, your mastery is superb - one can feel every ...
by Feurox
Mon Dec 28, 2020 1:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
Replies: 36
Views: 2246

Re: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection

Well, this was quite the crunch. And what a fun crunch it was. I tried really hard to do the best that I could with this prompt since it had so much potential. I really loved toying around with ideas for this and now all I can hope for is that the person it was meant for really enjoys it. Speaking ...
by Feurox
Tue Dec 08, 2020 10:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
Replies: 36
Views: 2246

Re: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection

Mirage! You managed to squeeze in cats as well, and a White Christmas, and whisky. It's a great story, with lots of back-story and allusions to various other matters. Thank you very much. Christmas has indeed come early for me! (My only sorrow comes from not having much Lilly—and indeed hardly walk...
by Feurox
Sun Nov 15, 2020 3:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, Late, S9 for Craftyatom.
Replies: 13
Views: 891

With Thanks, A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, Late, S9 for Craftyatom.

As always, a huge thank you to Lap for proofreading this Christmas tale. I hope you enjoy the finished product! And a million, million thanks to Umber! Your talent, friendship, and integrity humbles me - I cannot stress enough how beautiful I think that illustration is, and how remarkably talented I...
by Feurox
Sun Nov 15, 2020 3:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, Late, S9 for Craftyatom.
Replies: 13
Views: 891

A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, Late, S9 for Craftyatom.

I don’t want just words. If that’s all you have for me, you’d better go. F. Scott Fitzgerald, The Beautiful and Damned Someone is shaking me. I don’t want to wake up. “H-Hisao.” I feel someone’s hands trail through my hair. It feels calming, and familiar. It’s another lazy Christmas morning, anothe...
by Feurox
Sun Nov 15, 2020 3:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, Late, S9 for Craftyatom.
Replies: 13
Views: 891

A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, Late, S9 for Craftyatom.

ON THE NIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS, HISAO IS VISITED IN HIS DREAMS BY THE GHOSTS OF CHRISTMAS PAST, PRESENT, AND FUTURE - EACH A GIRL (OR PAIR/GROUP OF GIRLS) HE KNOWS AT YAMAKU. HOWEVER, ONE GIRL IN PARTICULAR IS NOTICEABLY ABSENT - UNTIL, THAT IS, HE WAKES UP. A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, La...
by Feurox
Sat Nov 14, 2020 10:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After The Dream—MAIN INDEX (and secret Hisao arc)
Replies: 163
Views: 101064

Re: After The Dream—MAIN INDEX (and secret Hisao arc)

The chronology has always been difficult for me, what with flashbacks and all. Misha1 actually starts after Lilly leaves in late 2007, but is written in early 2008. It gets worse elsewhere, I think. Thanks for reminding me that I really should figure out what to do with all that. :) The good ol' Br...
by Feurox
Thu Oct 01, 2020 4:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 93
Views: 9866

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

I have to agree with Nuke about being unsure about Hisao’s thoughts - though rather than being boring, it’s more that they are perhaps a bit static. Hisao’s moping, (especially in the line Nuke quoted), is consistent. I expect that’s why Nuke finds it uninteresting, because there doesn’t appear to b...
by Feurox
Wed Sep 30, 2020 5:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (9/29/20 Update)
Replies: 34
Views: 5376

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (9/29/20 Update)

Agreed! It was a charming little story, I didn’t know there was another contest? Anyway, it was nice! Other than some awkward phrases, and few places where a word has clearly been omitted, it was technically sound too! :)

Next time send it to me for a proofreading pass though! ;)
by Feurox
Mon Sep 28, 2020 3:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 215
Views: 67915

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)

A nice little updates. Of course, the greater shadows still loom. I like Rokuro, like a mini- Hisao. And actually it was really interesting reading your little note after the update, I didn’t know the consensus on cpr had changed!
by Feurox
Fri Sep 25, 2020 3:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 93
Views: 9866

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

It's a good thing I'm commenting now, rather then when you first started as I initially planned too. I don't need to give the usual warnings and welcomes, your writing surpasses most in technical ability, but I fear that sounds as If I'm accusing your writing of being somewhat 'impassionate'. That i...
by Feurox
Tue Sep 08, 2020 3:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210125 A Runner's Afternoon)
Replies: 1897
Views: 350079

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)

Quite an enjoyable read. Bry is right about the colours of this story, it’s actually really quite evocative. I don’t mind super rich Lilly as a concept that much, so honestly, this is an alround good read for me. Though a bit flowery at times.

Quite humorous seeing Aura and Cruds comments.