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Grayest wrote: ↑

Sat Jan 09, 2021 8:48 pm

big talk coming from the writer of Shizune's path

Come on man.

A pleasure to (re)read! Seriously, a wonderfully sweet (not quite too sweet) story, and I mean, of all people, I LOVE seeing Molly get some, uh, love!

Happy New Year Lap and Psychicspy! Hopefully we see more brilliant stories from the two of you this year

That's a lovely story. So they went over the sea to Skye, eh? Aye, where the Sea meets the Skye I think Bry old boy. I can only echo Britain's sentiment, that is indeed a lovely story Scramblers. It reminds me why I reached out to you in the first place, your mastery is superb - one can feel every ...

Well, this was quite the crunch. And what a fun crunch it was. I tried really hard to do the best that I could with this prompt since it had so much potential. I really loved toying around with ideas for this and now all I can hope for is that the person it was meant for really enjoys it. Speaking ...

Mirage! You managed to squeeze in cats as well, and a White Christmas, and whisky. It's a great story, with lots of back-story and allusions to various other matters. Thank you very much. Christmas has indeed come early for me! (My only sorrow comes from not having much Lilly—and indeed hardly walk...

As always, a huge thank you to Lap for proofreading this Christmas tale. I hope you enjoy the finished product! And a million, million thanks to Umber! Your talent, friendship, and integrity humbles me - I cannot stress enough how beautiful I think that illustration is, and how remarkably talented I...

I don’t want just words. If that’s all you have for me, you’d better go. F. Scott Fitzgerald, The Beautiful and Damned Someone is shaking me. I don’t want to wake up. “H-Hisao.” I feel someone’s hands trail through my hair. It feels calming, and familiar. It’s another lazy Christmas morning, anothe...

ON THE NIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS, HISAO IS VISITED IN HIS DREAMS BY THE GHOSTS OF CHRISTMAS PAST, PRESENT, AND FUTURE - EACH A GIRL (OR PAIR/GROUP OF GIRLS) HE KNOWS AT YAMAKU. HOWEVER, ONE GIRL IN PARTICULAR IS NOTICEABLY ABSENT - UNTIL, THAT IS, HE WAKES UP. A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, La...

The chronology has always been difficult for me, what with flashbacks and all. Misha1 actually starts after Lilly leaves in late 2007, but is written in early 2008. It gets worse elsewhere, I think. Thanks for reminding me that I really should figure out what to do with all that. :) The good ol' Br...

I have to agree with Nuke about being unsure about Hisao’s thoughts - though rather than being boring, it’s more that they are perhaps a bit static. Hisao’s moping, (especially in the line Nuke quoted), is consistent. I expect that’s why Nuke finds it uninteresting, because there doesn’t appear to b...

Agreed! It was a charming little story, I didn’t know there was another contest? Anyway, it was nice! Other than some awkward phrases, and few places where a word has clearly been omitted, it was technically sound too!

Next time send it to me for a proofreading pass though!

A nice little updates. Of course, the greater shadows still loom. I like Rokuro, like a mini- Hisao. And actually it was really interesting reading your little note after the update, I didn’t know the consensus on cpr had changed!

It's a good thing I'm commenting now, rather then when you first started as I initially planned too. I don't need to give the usual warnings and welcomes, your writing surpasses most in technical ability, but I fear that sounds as If I'm accusing your writing of being somewhat 'impassionate'. That i...

Quite an enjoyable read. Bry is right about the colours of this story, it’s actually really quite evocative. I don’t mind super rich Lilly as a concept that much, so honestly, this is an alround good read for me. Though a bit flowery at times.

Quite humorous seeing Aura and Cruds comments.