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by Feurox
Tue Sep 08, 2020 3:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 303127

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)

Quite an enjoyable read. Bry is right about the colours of this story, it’s actually really quite evocative. I don’t mind super rich Lilly as a concept that much, so honestly, this is an alround good read for me. Though a bit flowery at times.

Quite humorous seeing Aura and Cruds comments.
by Feurox
Mon Aug 24, 2020 6:58 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: I post things here occassionally.
Replies: 111
Views: 31581

Re: I post things here occassionally.

blood on the baton, slight smile on the lips. Molly really is best girl.

Great work as always.
by Feurox
Sun Aug 23, 2020 6:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 303127

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200824 Zade Wither)

I can never read stories like this without thinking back to the wonderful Munchenhausen’s “Josh-San.”

That being said, I’d love to get a beer with Zade. Him and Kenji seem like two really chill and down to earth guys, and I bet they’d be a pleasure to drink with.
by Feurox
Fri Jun 12, 2020 8:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#67—'A Bear Discovers Salt')
Replies: 315
Views: 97271

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#67—'A Bear Discovers Salt')

It always amazes me how your Jigoro can be both profoundly an impatient ass, and well, profound. That last line is oddly inspiring, (doubly so for readers who are familiar with your Jigoro!) As always, your SPAG is impeccable, and your mastery of the form is awe-inspiring. The lines drip with humour...
by Feurox
Tue Jun 09, 2020 7:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beauty and Other Stories by Scramblers and Shadows
Replies: 8
Views: 896

Re: Beauty and Other Stories by Scramblers and Shadows

Well, delightfully slice of life - not in such a way that it’s a piece of life to enjoy and ultimately meaningless, but in the way that I think we all have these “slices of life” in our own worlds. Rika’s frustration, whilst I think coming across a bit suddenly (Hell, I can’t expect everyone to writ...
by Feurox
Sun May 31, 2020 5:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band (Oneshot thread)
Replies: 54
Views: 5556

Re: Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band (Oneshot thread)

A delightful read. The flashback was a good moment, and helped to split up the Jigoro scenes so it wouldn’t send so obvious he changed, but really, I get the impression he was going to say yes even from the first scene. I think Jigoro opening up was a little hamfisted, but it’s a good premise I have...
by Feurox
Sun May 03, 2020 3:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beauty and Other Stories by Scramblers and Shadows
Replies: 8
Views: 896

Re: Beauty -- a minific after Lilly's neutral end

Wow, for a first foray into the forums, wow. Anyway, I usually preface first posts on the renai with a welcome! Welcome to this strange and peculiar little community of us, it's very good to see some new talent on the boards, and you clearly have some interesting thoughts on the game from your other...
by Feurox
Thu Apr 30, 2020 4:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: [OUTDATED]
Replies: 10
Views: 1071

Re: Hold my Mind - Main Thread

Welcome to the forums! Always good to see some new faces here! As always, first port of call for a new writer should be the 'Tips of Fanfic Writers' thread, great information and tips in there! 3) I won't tolerate any type of offensive behaviour and comments. I'll gladly accept feedback, but not ran...
by Feurox
Mon Apr 27, 2020 8:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#67—'A Bear Discovers Salt')
Replies: 315
Views: 97271

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#66—'Contrast')

How fitting, after all our (my) talk of monuments, you should choose the same as me. Memorial services are solemn, but somehow freeing affairs. Honestly, it's Mutou's silence that speaks volumes in this story. That final paragraph touched me immensely. Somehow, with the focus being on Saki's remembr...
by Feurox
Mon Apr 27, 2020 5:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Jun 7th, 2020: Path of Least Resistance)
Replies: 111
Views: 13541

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Apr 26th, 2020: The Slightest Nudge)

What a lovely story! The quotes from in game work wonders too to establish, 1) where are and 2) how these characters are circling one another. Of course, there’s a storm on the horizon for these two... but this is still an optimistic tale. The first section and second section are undoubtedly the str...
by Feurox
Sun Apr 26, 2020 4:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness [04/26/2020]
Replies: 94
Views: 10943

A Country Where the Thunder Goes Notes

This story was written in response to the YA server competition, where we are given pairings, locations, and modifiers to write a yarn. Below are my options for each, though I think really all the modifies apply in some way or another. https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/525122520651661312/696571...
by Feurox
Sun Apr 26, 2020 4:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness [04/26/2020]
Replies: 94
Views: 10943

A Country Where the Thunder Goes

A Country Where the Thunder Goes https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/335582610237685760/704062482217566339/1.jpg ______________________________________________________________________________________________________ It’s better to look at the sky than live there. Such an empty place; so vague. J...
by Feurox
Sun Apr 26, 2020 3:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness [04/26/2020]
Replies: 94
Views: 10943

Re: Feurox's Den of Sadness [02/18/2020]

I am Disappeared I read this story 50 days ago. I even kept some notes to help me write my review of it. Unfortunately, those notes weren't particularly detailed, and some combination of the usual reticence and real-life stuff got in the way. But here I am, quite a bit later, finally trying to type...
by Feurox
Wed Apr 22, 2020 6:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rin's Arc/Miki's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 115
Views: 40128

Re: After the Dream—Rin's Arc/Miki's Arc (Complete)

It's funny, really. Most of my work lately has involved the idea of monuments and then their conclusions. The things I find fascinating are ruins, those things we often find on this forum itself, as Nuke misquotes above, 'art is never finished...' well, we know that to be true. In fact, that's proba...