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by YutoTheOrc
Sat Oct 13, 2018 10:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 24691

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14

Story Progress Notification* Sorry for not being able to post much of the story in the time I have been on this forum and sadly that is unlikely to change. As the years go by I find myself having less and less time to sit down and write, least of all having the drive to write. Which is a shame as I ...
by YutoTheOrc
Wed May 09, 2018 4:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 24691

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2016-10-31

Act 2: Out of Shadows Scene 7: When Sea Birds Fly A few weeks laze past since Yuuto and Miki have officially started dating, which doesn’t really amount to much considering everyone’s been relatively busy studying for exams. All of us are eagerly anticipating Tanabata, more so as a break from the st...
by YutoTheOrc
Wed May 09, 2018 4:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bells of Life Side Stories
Replies: 6
Views: 1682

Re: Bells of Life Side Stories

A Little Taste of Nori Tlink The sound of the metal bat colliding with the ball rings throughout the field like a firework in the night. The team stops what they’re doing and watches as the ball soars across the sky, their eyes intently fixed on its trajectory. A loud metal crash followed by the rat...
by YutoTheOrc
Mon Jan 09, 2017 7:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 24691

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2016-10-31

Took a lot longer than I expected, but I'm finally happy enough to release it. I hope you all enjoy! **************************************** Act 2: Out of Shadows Scene 6: Stand up to the Feet of Giants I wince as I rub my forearm gently, groping at the bruise hidden underneath the bandage. My fore...
by YutoTheOrc
Mon Jan 09, 2017 7:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 24691

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2016-10-31

Edible_Funk wrote:Hooray more Kirino! Really enjoying the story so far, looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Thanks buddy, good to hear! Appreciate you reading! :D
by YutoTheOrc
Mon Oct 31, 2016 1:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 24691

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2016-06-19

Loving the story so far my man. Keep it up! Thank you very much, that means a lot to me! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it! :D As always thank you Mirage for the help with editing and the opinion, it certainly has helped improve this story from what it was. The next chapter is currently planned s...
by YutoTheOrc
Mon Oct 31, 2016 1:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 24691

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2016-06-19

Act 2: Out of Shadows Scene 5: Squinted Eyes in Curiosity The winged vermin continues to stare at me, tilting its feathered head towards me, as if I were the one polluting the city it calls home. Its orange eyes stare at me unblinkingly— a fact that I find most disturbing. The flying rodent cooes an...
by YutoTheOrc
Sat Aug 13, 2016 11:32 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: The Inane Doodlings of an Attention Deficit
Replies: 169
Views: 43818

Re: The Inane Doodlings of an Attention Deficit

Brilliant, not what I was expecting, that's for sure! :lol:
by YutoTheOrc
Sat Aug 13, 2016 11:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 24691

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2016-06-19

Act 2: Scene 4: Not sure whether I’m going forwards or backwards Do you ever wonder how you got yourself into certain situations? As if you were merely watching your life unfold before your eyes then suddenly the reins are thrust into your sweaty palms and your first thought is ‘What the hell’? I’ve...
by YutoTheOrc
Sat Aug 13, 2016 11:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 24691

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2016-06-19

Great chapter! Two or three typos but nothing worth mentioning. Your writing has come a long way since you began this story! Thanks a lot! I'm glad that you've read all the chapters I continually put out, it means a lot and the help is certainly appreciated. :D So it looks pretty good, except for 2...
by YutoTheOrc
Sun Jun 19, 2016 1:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 24691

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2016-05-24

Act 2: Out of Shadows Scene 3: Sweet Drops Would have liked to update earlier, but work has been giving me some really weird shifts and has made it hard to edit and write. Hope you all enjoy the newest scene, I ceratinly enjoyed returning to Yamaku even if it was briefly. ***************** I shake m...
by YutoTheOrc
Mon May 30, 2016 10:24 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Kyuu's Artdump of Dumpy Art
Replies: 11
Views: 3581

Re: Kyuu's Artdump of Dumpy Art

You're the first person to respond positively to anything I've done outside of the Broken Heart thread. You don't know how much this encourages me. I'm glad that you feel that way, sorry about the fact that nobody has responded positively to more of your stuff. Just continue to do what you like and...
by YutoTheOrc
Tue May 24, 2016 4:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Helping People
Replies: 7
Views: 1521

Re: Helping People

Holy Shit ... :shock: I enjoyed that more than I expected to, to be honest. I had a feeling about Hisao when he was first introduced, but wondered if maybe I was being too sceptical and dark. Regardless I'm glad to have read that, it's...humbling...maybe. Makes you think about yourself in a differen...
by YutoTheOrc
Tue May 24, 2016 4:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 'Mistaking Identify'—A Class 3.4 Story (Ch14 up 20170725)
Replies: 29
Views: 12345

Re: 'Mistaking Identify' (A Class 3.4 Fiction) (Ch9 up 20160

My parents have washed my hands of me long ago(Chapter 1) I think you mean to say they washed their hands of me He might even worse than that(Chapter 2) I think you're missing a word in there Why is it that whenever I read your work, It reminds me so much of a haiku or other forms of poetry? :D Sti...
by YutoTheOrc
Tue May 24, 2016 11:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 24691

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2016-05-24

Nice chapter, though personally I think there is only a very limited reason to write dream scenes, and this once felt unnecessary and too long for me. Might just be my personal preference, though. Haha, no, no I understand. I usually hate dream sequences myself, but I always liked the cryptic ones ...