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by Maradar
Thu May 22, 2014 5:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 285585

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 41 up 5/

Again, thank you for brightening up my day and making me hate you a little bit more each time you post. I have NO clue at all as to where this is going and it's frustrating. Thanks for the good content and always putting effort into it. Keep up the good work!
by Maradar
Mon May 12, 2014 5:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 352894

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/11]

I'm equally excited and disappointed for the next chapter and the ending of this route. This is one of my favourite things to read and I really enjoy the improvements you've made in your writing since you began this. Thanks for all the happiness and good times and good writings.
by Maradar
Mon May 12, 2014 4:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 93946

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 5/8]

Wow, really enjoying this story. Keep up the good work! Not much to comment on recent chapters other then good job and I'm glad you're updating more.
by Maradar
Sun Jan 19, 2014 4:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 562
Views: 199362

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Well. the wait was absolutely worth it. This is your best chapter yet. Very well done, and I love the way you subtly added the basis of another character into the story and took Shizune and the student council out of it, making it a Hisao-Shiina chapter just about entirely. Also There was one point ...
by Maradar
Sun Jan 12, 2014 1:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 285585

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) [Ch 31 up 1/10]

My reaction after reading. http://i.imgur.com/bhKp2.gif Well. This is an insane piece of fiction, in a good way of course. I absolutely love the clusterfuck of what-the-fuckness going on in this story. I really enjoyed the way you portrayed the Satous in a non-assholeish way. Also the conversation b...
by Maradar
Mon Dec 16, 2013 12:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Living (Rin Route)
Replies: 96
Views: 16341

Re: Living (Rin Route)

Wow this is really well done! I really really hope you finish this. It's good and I love the fresh take on the school.
by Maradar
Wed Dec 11, 2013 9:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Replies: 51
Views: 9172

Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13

I'm excited to see where this goes! It's pretty interesting so far, but Suzu seems a little OOC from her pseudo-route.
by Maradar
Sat Nov 16, 2013 1:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 285585

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

I have zero ideas as to how this is going to pan out, and I really don't want to wait for you to finish writing to read it all. Also I think that perhaps some more description or other such things when it comes to Lilly would be beneficial, but I really don't know. Keep up the great work! :D
by Maradar
Tue Nov 12, 2013 10:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 85311

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 12/11/2013)

I just re-read the entire story and I enjoyed it just as much the second time as I did the first time. Great writing and I'm really excited to see where this is going!
by Maradar
Mon Nov 11, 2013 10:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 93946

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 11/11]

Excellent as always! I must admit that the dream scene was awfully confusing... Also I like the introduction of Kagami's aunt and uncle, they seem to be great additions so far.
by Maradar
Sun Nov 10, 2013 10:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 285585

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 24 up 11/10]

Shizune and Misha seemed to be really well done, considering Shizune's anger at visiting. I'm excited to see if Yoshi becomes a major part of the story. Also Lilly. Hooo boy man all I could do was smile and laugh at the cliff hanger. Well done as always. Also again, I've been seriously down recently...
by Maradar
Wed Nov 06, 2013 3:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Restocked and Out of Order
Replies: 13
Views: 1874

Re: Restocked and Out of Order

Loeloe95 wrote:I may or may not use you're name as the basis for a character in the story.... I like the name Mara. XD
Whatever floats your boat man, feel free to do it!
by Maradar
Wed Nov 06, 2013 2:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 11646

Re: OC "Neko" - Route

Wow. What the fuck? I have no idea where this is going, but I'm greatly interested in it.
by Maradar
Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 11646

Re: OC "Neko" - Route

Wow. This shit is crazy. But that's okay, cause this is great writing. I don't see many problems with the writing, but if that's cause I'm getting too engrossed in the actually story, so be it. I'm not complaining. I thoroughly enjoy this!
by Maradar
Wed Nov 06, 2013 12:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Restocked and Out of Order
Replies: 13
Views: 1874

Re: Restocked and Out of Order

This is good! It's quite different from the normal stuff on here and I'm quite looking forward to more. Keep up the good work!