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by Blasphemy
Thu Jun 04, 2015 6:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 282146

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.59 posted 6/1

Too long, didn't read! Nah, great job once again! You know, Lilly tutoring Emi seemed like too much of an awkward idea but this way, with Lilly trying out different methods as well figuring out if whether it's really the right profession for, it may just work out for them. Without 'ulterior motives'...
by Blasphemy
Wed Apr 29, 2015 4:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)
Replies: 102
Views: 142620

Re: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)

Damn that's so much more pleasant, kinda wish I didn't read it yet :/

Either way, great job and thanks.
by Blasphemy
Mon Apr 27, 2015 6:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 282146

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.58 posted 4/1

...on another website I meant, of course!

Alright, alright. I somewhat forgot there isn't an actual off-topic section here and I recalled the VN recommendations thread, which, of course, has more relevance.
by Blasphemy
Mon Apr 27, 2015 4:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 282146

Re: Developments, Chapter 58 (Part 2)

And here we are with Hanako deciding to initiate a conversation with a slightly isolated classmate. A wonderful development truly. Indeed. It's funny, but despite being the one writing this story, I feel a little bit of pride in Hanako for making it to this point. I'm not entirely sure what to make...
by Blasphemy
Sun Apr 26, 2015 7:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 282146

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.58 posted 4/1

And here we are with Hanako deciding to initiate a conversation with a slightly isolated classmate. A wonderful development truly. So yeh, I haven't been commenting lately and I do feel bad for it. Often times I just felt like I had little adequate to say, especially when there's already pages of re...
by Blasphemy
Sat Jan 24, 2015 10:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 282146

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.56 posted 1/2

I don't really see how you get Misha x Hanako shipping out of this chapter. If anything I felt like dewelar tried to get the two a bit closer without already treading some yuri direction. Of course Misha does love girls and they just grew a bit closer, but really, give me some solid indications that...
by Blasphemy
Thu Nov 06, 2014 9:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 282146

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.53 posted 11/

IIRC, you can see that she's shaved when she's destroying herself. Which, in her case, given the obvious difficulties with hygiene... Aye, thanks. Looks like I more or less guessed correctly with that last assumption. With that being the case everything about that in this chapters makes perfect sen...
by Blasphemy
Thu Nov 06, 2014 8:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 282146

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.53 posted 11/

That was nice. Kinda glad the larger who's-it-gonna-be issue is dealt with now and (some of) our characters can simply enjoy themselves. Really felt like there's good chemistry between Hisao and Emi and the nurse visit as well as town trip seemed simply fun. Was a bit surprised about Rin getting her...
by Blasphemy
Wed Oct 22, 2014 12:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 282146

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.52 posted 10/

Isn't it nice to be finally able to smile for the characters again? Was nice knowing that something good would be in store for Emi at the end of this chapter after seeing her worry so much. I don't think any H-scene could be anything BUT gratuitious at this point... Not sure if I can agree with that...
by Blasphemy
Thu Oct 09, 2014 6:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 317
Views: 312424

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

About ending up in a bad place: Brythain recently posted an article about orphans in Japan. Let's just say it wasn't exactly uplifting stuff, even when disfigurements and mental baggage weren't part of the equation. I felt Hanako gaining a small network of people was the best way to make her gradua...
by Blasphemy
Mon Oct 06, 2014 8:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 317
Views: 312424

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

So here are further thoughts of mine. Going into the new chapters I was curious about the timeline scope this would encompass as I felt like the previous edition had a nice conclusive chapter. Turned out we'd simply get the following weeks in close detail until we get closer to the end and larger le...
by Blasphemy
Sun Sep 28, 2014 7:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 317
Views: 312424

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Slow reader chiming in! Took my time with this peace and can't read very fast either way but I'm finally done; hats off to those of you who finish(ed) this behemoth in only a few sessions. A big thanks to you Guest Poster, the amount of work you must have put into this is greatly appreciated and res...
by Blasphemy
Thu Sep 25, 2014 5:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#58—'Compromise')
Replies: 267
Views: 75007

Re: Alternate Dreams

Huh, interesting. I think you did a good job holding back information just long enough to leave me guessing and "ah" a few times. Am also thinking about this for quite while now, which is a nice accomplishment with such a short...well short. edit: Not that could you now but, don't worry Shinichi...H...
by Blasphemy
Fri Sep 19, 2014 12:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 317
Views: 312424

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

This just made my day so much. I squealed with glee! My tablet will join me in bed tonight and I'll probably sleep in way later than appropriate. I've cried during quite a few sad moments in several KS fanfics; however, the make up conversation between Lilly and Hanako near the end, where Hanako als...
by Blasphemy
Fri Sep 19, 2014 12:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 282146

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.50 posted 9/1

Oh boy, I can't wait for the next chapter. I've always been particularly fond about your Hanako (PoV) chapters and there's probably something great in store. While this story has definitely hinted more towards Emi and I'm perfectly happy with all that I do feel a bit bad for Hanako considering this ...