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by Minion of Chaos
Tue Jul 07, 2015 2:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 95512

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]

Wooo!!!! Happy to see an update!! And I'm interested in how everything is going to go down with the actual informing and now apparent meeting
by Minion of Chaos
Tue Dec 23, 2014 1:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 293845

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Int5 posted 12/2

Nice, I like the small setup here from Mei's POV here, it's flavorful (or at least quasi-preparatory if my gut is right).

That said,
"it might make a nice Christmas gift for us all"
isn't the current timeline in summer? Or would this simply be a "looking forward to" type of thing?
by Minion of Chaos
Wed Nov 12, 2014 10:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16322

Re: Act Two, Scene Five;

Welp, there goes the neighborhood....

Interested in seeing how things will be mended. My only critique would be that there are a few instances of "sunset" where I think you meant to put "sunrise"
by Minion of Chaos
Tue Nov 11, 2014 3:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 33231

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 14 up!

I admit it has strayed from KS itself I think being able to write a compelling story here WITHOUT essentially toeing the KS line is more often than not a good thing. It allows a wider story to be told which I find more entertaining (and most of the "straying" stories here are well done, a la the Ho...
by Minion of Chaos
Sun Nov 02, 2014 12:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 9198

Re: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]

Good luck with the rework and I anticipate the changes! Remember, make it right (in your opinion/desire)- time isn't an object
by Minion of Chaos
Thu Oct 23, 2014 1:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 33231

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 13 up!

Welp, I've officially tuned in, much to my advanced calc (think proving calculus) homework's dismay. I remember seeing this series pop up a while ago and didn't open it. Now am I glad that I have and I'm caught up. Good stuff here, man. Keep it up
by Minion of Chaos
Fri Sep 19, 2014 12:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 293845

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.50 posted 9/1

But yeah, you're probably right, I just didn't wanna watch this ship sink so miserably. It was a rather abrupt turn in the train of thought. The beginning of this Chapter had me thinking the circle would continue again. It is kind of true to life though- a lot of times, it only takes one sudden or ...
by Minion of Chaos
Fri Sep 12, 2014 12:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 67980

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 9/11)

General consensus dictates that I remove the kiss. And done. Yeah, and reader choices are usually frowned upon here, if I'm not mistaken (and I've been known to be wrong before). I think it's usually up to the admins or if there are an unreasonable number of instances with choices that affect the s...
by Minion of Chaos
Tue Aug 19, 2014 9:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 293845

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.49 posted 8/1

I know I've mentioned it before, but you do know that Takei's is the voice I have in my head for Nurse, right? This is something so many people would understand, but not many would actually get. Tip of the hat for the chapter and that gag lol EDIT: Wait, I was thinking of the wrong thing. Just know...
by Minion of Chaos
Tue Aug 05, 2014 2:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 293845

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 47 up 8/

Achievement Get: Add an Awesome New Wrinkle Agreed that the dialogue formatting between thoughts, phone, sign, and deaf-blind sign was a bit odd at first, but it can be adapted to quickly. Great work with this Shizune interpretation. I guess all the other reasons were stated or stated eloquently and...
by Minion of Chaos
Sun Jul 06, 2014 11:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 26240

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 7/03)

“Um, March 8,” I did have a life before Them, after all. “Okay, so you’d be a… Pisces, then. Hmm,” Come on, Hisao is a scientist (i.e. an astronomer rather than an astrologer). He would know that she's an Aquarius. Not to start an astrology (completely pseudo-science) argument, but Pisces (Feb 19-M...
by Minion of Chaos
Tue Jun 10, 2014 9:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 293845

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 43 up 6/

Dewelar, the fourth wall is on the line. It's calling for two shipments of mortar. That being said, I was wondering who would be up at bat next, since I didnt think an Emi chapter would be coming about right now and Hanako and Hisao just had chapters with Lilly in one of them. I liked the touch of R...
by Minion of Chaos
Wed Jun 04, 2014 3:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 293845

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 42 up 6/

Great addition here, Dewelar! I really enjoyed the chapter and surprise of Miss Yumi and the banter between her and Hanako- it really fit, in my opinion.
by Minion of Chaos
Sun May 25, 2014 4:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361232

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]

I've always considered endings to be bittersweet. That being said, I thoroughly enjoyed this psuedo-route and congrats!
by Minion of Chaos
Wed May 07, 2014 1:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rika/Mutou/Akira (Updated 20190704)
Replies: 106
Views: 41278

Re: After the Dream—Others (Rika done, Mutou3 up 20140506)

Your Mutou reminds me of one of my old astronomy professors (a path I still sometimes regret not taking) Yeah, I was going to go that route myself until I had to change my major this past November. While I love astronomy, not all of us are able to end up as the next Carl Sagan or NDT... I am enjoyi...