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Something that has bugged me with all the zombie fics out for a while now is I guess the elephant in the room. How do you realistically expect most of the Katawa cast to survive any "after the end" type of story, much less zombies? That's kind of the point, actually. "Can you die wel...

I usually don't nit pick but one thing in this fic really bothered me. Why did they take the girl with crutches that could run less then Hisao yet leave Hisao for mobility and heath reasons? Bad writing on my part. I thought it would be obvious that she was being *left*; clearly it wasn't. Thanks a...

EPILOG - HOW THESE ZOMBIES WORK The zombie bacteria does not kill. Instead, it infects the brain and radically changes behavior. The subject wants to bite open flesh, transmitting the virus. The subject also wants to rip clothes to expose more skin, grab victims so they can’t get away, and punch vi...

Chapter 6: THE MANLY APOCALYPSE Soundtrack: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e9TmQQQGddQ Day four. There’s not much to say. A bunch of people sitting in a big room, waiting for either deliverance or destruction. At least the restrooms are OK. We can’t drink the water in the pool but we can use it to ...

Chapter 5: MISHA AGONISTES Soundtrack: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0J2QdDbelmY “BAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAA~!” Misha cries like she laughs, with everything she’s got. Her sobs ring out, echoing in the gymnasium. Everybody always teased Misha about her laugh but I would give so much to here that laugh righ...

I'm just catching up with this and I like the premise a lot.

Hanako has a lot of reasons to be angry in her life, and she's clearly gotten very good at repressing her anger. Handling that anger when it finally comes out is going to be very messy.

Sea wrote:Well this rapidly devolved into madness.
I shall be watching with interest.

Oh, this thing is flooring it with madness in the rearview mirror.

Chapter 4: FASTEST THING ON NO LEGS Soundtrack: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DdcOk7NuEsQ Midway through the morning, the lights finally go out. I check my cell phone -- no signal. The walls are starting to close in. We've got some skylights and a few boarded-up windows, but it's not much. A few h...

Aww, Emi. I *liked* Emi.

No, I am not worthy to write Rin.

Chapter 3: HER FINEST HOUR Soundtrack: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4JqoHZKPtpY Misha’s voice boomed out. “Nakai is right! Whatever they are they are bad news and Yamaku will stand firm against the threat!” Shizune and Mish had jumped up on a table and are shouting out directions to the students....

..., and hanako went a little to bad ass at the end, but hey. That's just my opinion. Hanako went absolutely screaming beserk. Absolutely nutzo. Bad ending Hanazilla turned to eleven. Is there a way I could have gotten the point across in the story better? Perhaps describing wild eyes, things like ...

Chapter 2 - A LITTLE BATTY? Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WYeDsa4Tw0c I run and come to the track. Emi’s pounding out laps faster than anybody with legs. She sees me and stops. “Hisao! How’s it going? Are … you … OK?” Her voice changes from her usual chipper nature to a more serious tone as ...

Thanks for the comments! It took me a couple of hours to work up the nerve to post the thing, worrying that people would hate it. I finally decided I'd feel really silly not posting after actually having written it. @LorSquirrel: This work isn't that long, ~7000 words, and I'm going to be making dai...

Notes:
No, I hadn't read Comrade's zombie stuff before writing this. I finished it and then found out about it. Fortunately, the two stories are *really* different.