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Comrade wrote: I should write one with all of the above traits just to piss off everyone.

Needs to show up at school in a Hawaiian Shirt. Don't forget that.

For this reader, the perspective switch worked well. And as far as the race between Hanako and Emi for Hisao's heart goes, I'm reminded of the fable of the tortoise and the hare -- it's too early to take bets. (Besides, who knows, maybe Rin will come in and sweep Hisao off his feet with one well tim...

By traditional Japanese standards, a daughter being "locked" into a management position is actually pretty gracious, seeing that lots of working Japanese women never advance past the "Office Lady" status, whose main job is to clean, copy documents, make coffee for the male colle...

Akira did not seem to notice anything out of the ordinary (you'd think that a guy having a heart attack in a crowd would cause a commotion), so I'm wondering if Lilly is having some wishful thinking going on in her head. Wishful thinking on Lilly's part is the impression I'm left with as well. Unle...

Cute story. Misha's thought process seemed a bit off, but Rin's dialog did seem rather true to her character. Maybe that's what I get for trying to write under the influence of allergy medicine. :D I may play about with it a little bit to see if I can make it a bit more Misha-ish. Once the meds wea...

I've been thinking about writing lately, and this little short piece of fluff popped out my head as result. It features Misha and Rin communicating using one of the few universal languages: ice cream! (By the way, I have tried all the flavors mentioned in the story, and all are quite tasty -- especi...

Let's get back to constructive feedback! :mrgreen: We shared lunch, the same way we always had. We talked about the careers work-cards we had been given in classes, and how she simply put down “Pirate”. Should that be career work-cards ? Also, (just my personal opinion here), adding a few more line ...

I placing my bets on Shizune & Misha getting Hisao, in the parlor, with a candlestick.

Taking a third road on the "condition" thing: When I read the term in the context in which is was presented, I was struck with a sense of sarcasm about the whole matter. To be more specific, she was using her father's terminology for her deafness, not her own, as a way to throw his words b...

Anyway, hope you all continue to enjoy this as much as I'm continuing to enjoy writing it.

Yep. Two paws up!

Mirage_GSM wrote:I always thought drabbles were a way of limiting one's writing needlessly, but it can be a challenge nevertheless.
Now let's wait to see what Shizune's plan is...

I like the artform of the drabble, myself.
I find it interesting that Shizune considered HisaoxLilly a failure on her part....

I hope nobody's too disappointed.

Nope. I'm not at least. (Although, I do want to see Hisao, Hanako, and Emi skipping to "We're Off to See the Wizard" at some point. )

Lost In The Fire wrote:...Emi, Hisao and Hanako go[ing] as a group...

Now, wouldn't that be an interesting development...

Go Emi!

I would say something more insightful -- but my allergies have been preventing useful thoughts from escaping my head the last few days.

But, wow. To wait to the last second to tell Hanako about the move, and only because Hisao had already heard about it from Akira. Then Lily complains about Hisao not opening up? Can we say "hypocrite?" Obviously, this is an assumption on my part as well. I do believe that had she told Han...