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The newspaper girls left me with the same vibe as the Don Henley song Dirty Laundry. But, they do have a point -- Shizune and Yuuto would be a good match (provided they don't kill each other ).

Small grammatical question:

I thought I had recognized the colorful display its presenting right now

Should the its be an it's

Otherwise, another great chapter.

Also, reading Lilly's parents like this almost feels like non-canon. It does go against the traditional portrayal of Lilly's parents (or at least her father); however, this interpretation does fit quite well with the image of two parents who want their daughters to become leaders, not followers. On...

IMHO, if the Satous (and a certain Nakai, for that matter) were capable of good communication, then this whole mess would never have started. Even in the good end route, it took Hisao nearly dying (again) to clear up the misunderstandings. ~~~ As far as as Lilly returning, I can imaging Hisao ending...

I gotta say, I like the characterization of Lilly's parents here. That's definitely an interesting take on why they might have asked Lilly to come back to Scotland. I second this. In fact, I've been tempted to write something like that (before the departure of a coworker made my free time fall vict...

It looks pretty good now format wise. And as far as old text editors go, I was always partial to "vi" myself... On windows platforms, I've used a number of ASCII text editors over the years, and I found Ultraedit to be best feature wise. It's not freeware, but if you work with text files m...

What have I gotten myself into?

The train equivalent of the mile high club?

The moral of this chapter is : Never go into a battle of wits unarmed.

Unless she's just THAT oblivious. Or trolling. You forget the most dangerous entity in the universe -- the oblivious troll. :) What I forgot to mention in my earlier reply, I found it curious that Emi didn't seem part of Hisao's mind after their initial talk about all that. Like, in the narration H...

bhtooefr wrote:This could be very bad for Hanako if he gets back together with Lilly. May even be seen as a betrayal.

Which may not rule out a "Katawa Yandere" ending yet.

Anyways, I'll think I'll end my final 2013 forum post with a wish that somebody mug Hisao with a Big Foam Cluebat....

I wanted to comment that I had liked what you've written so far; although, the way it's written, I wondered if you meant to start it during the earlier Yamaku Festival instead of the later Tanabata. Then again, I may be so used to these things starting around the Yamaku Festival, my brain is skippin...

I've dealt with with EDS in my life as well, so I can ditto what ProfAllister has said.

But, on topic of the Miki route. I like this one. I also like Numb's Miki route. Hopefully 2014 will be the year of the Miki.

Zombie concept aside, I like how this fic gives focus to some of the "other" members of class 3-3.

On the zombie concept, why are they always made out to be the bad guys? Is there no love for the "metabolically challenged"?

English really needs something similar to a Temherte Slaqî.

bhtooefr wrote:...Emi Power Grid requirements...

Are you an an engineer by any chance?

On the story, it's been keeping me very interested...

One thought I did have is that if Hisao waits too long out of concern of hurting either Hanako or Emi, he may end up hurting both.

Quick note: The link you use above seems to eat your first two posts. However, they're still there if you go in the regular way. Very interesting...