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by sidorak26
Tue Aug 20, 2013 6:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: One Wish (Hanako, post neutral) [Updated, 10/8]
Replies: 30
Views: 30027

Re: One Wish (Hanako, post neutral) [Updated, 10/8]

If the streams of tears on my face are any indication, I'd say you did a pretty fine job there lad.
by sidorak26
Tue Aug 20, 2013 5:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 182780

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 18/08/2013)

I don't wish for my own humble interpretation to be mistaken for whatever the author intends, but it is my opinion that Hanako's self-esteem issues and general mental instability have been repeatedly shown and built up during the course of this story. I do agree it feels sudden if you read this in ...
by sidorak26
Mon Aug 19, 2013 6:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 182780

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 18/08/2013)

You lost me a bit there. Why did Hanako get so mad so fast? Why does "I don't want to go out" equal "I have no feeling for you" to her? And so suddenly too.
by sidorak26
Sun Jul 28, 2013 12:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Ball Z Kai condensed
Replies: 8
Views: 5198

Re: Katawa Ball Z Kai condensed

Well, I liked it. It's not so bad for what it is. The best part was trying to figure who each is supposed to be, even though it would be better if you gave a name to Yamcha(Yuuko?) and the... sword... guy(Hideaki?). So let me get this straight. Raditz is gohan's little brother. Then you said kenji-k...