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by Jestarr
Sat Sep 07, 2013 12:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Disheveled [Ch. 3, 9/18] (undergoing revisions)
Replies: 50
Views: 25913

Re: Disheveled [Ch. 1, 6/6]

Awesome start, very much looking forward to the second chapter when you finally decide to grace us with its presence :P
by Jestarr
Thu Sep 05, 2013 6:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
Replies: 32
Views: 11789

Re: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 2 posted 21/8/13

Sorry this update took a little longer than usual but these last two weeks have been hectic for me. But enough excuses, here's chapter three. Act 1, Chapter 3: Fire and Moonlight The high noon sun has taken up its rightful place in the centre of the sky. It’s golden rays gently warm the soft breeze ...
by Jestarr
Sun Sep 01, 2013 12:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
Replies: 32
Views: 11789

Re: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 2 posted 21/8/13

One thing about the ages though: Rika is eighteen, just like Hisao, Shizune, Lilly, and Rin (Emi is nineteen, while Hanako turns eighteen during the story). Rika missed a year of school for reasons related to her disability. You are free to ignore this of course; it's your fanfic. The reason the ag...
by Jestarr
Tue Aug 27, 2013 10:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
Replies: 32
Views: 11789

Re: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 2 posted 21/8/13

Mirage i think you're right i have been Westernising this a bit too much so I'll try and tone it down for the rest of the chapters. Speaking of chapters this week has been hectic for me so i haven't been able to get any writing done, I'll try and get the next one out as soon as possible
by Jestarr
Wed Aug 21, 2013 5:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
Replies: 32
Views: 11789

Re: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 2 posted 21/8/13

I will be stalking this thread in the future. I see immense potential and may pester you with requests of advice on how to write for the fanfic I'm working on o3o. Blimey mate that is some immense praise indeed and i'd be more than happy to help but there are much better writers than me on this for...
by Jestarr
Wed Aug 21, 2013 1:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
Replies: 32
Views: 11789

Re: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC)

Act 1,Chapter 2- Third times a charm “So… hey” “Yeah… hi” Well would you look at that, it is awkward after all. Hisao and I stand a few feet apart, myself rooted to the spot by nerves, but I don’t know what’s keeping him so still. At least we have spoken to each other now and there is no longer an ...
by Jestarr
Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
Replies: 32
Views: 11789

Re: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC)

Cheers man ill remember that. I've always thought it was just "______ and I" in all situations but that's a good way of explaining it, thanks :)
by Jestarr
Sat Aug 17, 2013 6:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
Replies: 32
Views: 11789

Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13

Hello all, this is my first time posting here so if i've done anything wrong just let me know and ill do what i can to fix it. As for the story in question it is told through the eyes of my OC Yumi Goto, a second year student at Yamaku academy who upon meeting with a new transfer student finds her q...