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by dewelar
Sat Mar 11, 2023 11:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1195
Views: 886016

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)

I'd been meaning to read this story for, literally, years, and after StealthyWolf mentioned it in the Developments thread I thought it was finally time to do so. In fact, I believe I did read it in its early stages and think it had potential. It seems I was right, and the process of living up to it ...
by dewelar
Wed Feb 22, 2023 1:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 727386

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

Wow...been two-plus years since this thread's been active... *brushes off cobwebs* Nevertheless, it's always great to see new folks finding and enjoying this story. So what have we got that's awakened the behemoth? *looks at StealthyWolf's post* Hm. Seems to be a behemoth all unto itself. Well, I'm ...
by dewelar
Sat Sep 17, 2022 8:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch20@13/3/24]
Replies: 103
Views: 100619

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch64@13/9/22: Absolutely Rinsane!]

I'm still working my way through the story, and just finished Chapter 37. It made me wonder if Miki has ever heard of Pete Gray . Also, I strangely find myself hoping Hisao winds up with her instead of Shizune -- probably because she's my favorite character in this story to this point. I did have so...
by dewelar
Tue Sep 13, 2022 1:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch20@13/3/24]
Replies: 103
Views: 100619

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch63@18/8/22: Most unpredictable Fanfic Ever?]

Chapter 65: Air Wind Ground Track This could be Quite Interesting... I'll go through it One More Time Round and make the reference when the chapter comes out. 60 Chapters Will Not Hold (me) Back! Indeed. This chapter was quite Rintense...or perhaps Rintensive? Admittedly, while I've struggled somew...
by dewelar
Fri Sep 09, 2022 11:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Part 2 Complete; Rewritten Ch20@13/3/24]
Replies: 103
Views: 100619

Re: Precious Friendships (Shizune BE, Sisterhood plot) [Ch63@18/8/22: Most unpredictable Fanfic Ever?]

ShizuneFan2019 wrote: Fri Mar 20, 2020 12:25 amChapter 65: Air Wind Ground Track
This could be Quite Interesting...
by dewelar
Thu Aug 27, 2020 8:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 727386

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

Honestly, Chatty, if you want to post additional long-form reviews like this to some of the other major works on here, I think the writers, old guard, and us newbies would all enjoy reading the fresh perspective! Seconded. By the way, Dewelar, good to see you're still around, man! Thanks! I may not...
by dewelar
Wed Aug 26, 2020 5:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 727386

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

Good day to all who might be reading to this! I just finished reading Developments and there’s a lot that I want to get off my chest, so I’ve decided to try my hand at making a post. Here goes! Welcome! I’m still quite new around these parts—I only discovered Katawa Shoujo a couple months back—and ...
by dewelar
Wed Apr 17, 2019 12:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: syfy.com tags KS as one of the five sexiest visual novels out there
Replies: 10
Views: 9882

Re: syfy.com tags KS as one of the five sexiest visual novels out there

Have seen neither the anime, nor the newer translation, nor the sorta-sequels, but have read the older fan translation of the first Grisaia VN. I enjoyed it quite a bit, but plot-wise your suspension of disbelief WILL be tested. The humour is probably not to everyone's taste, and a couple of the rou...
by dewelar
Tue Apr 16, 2019 9:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#73—'Stripping')
Replies: 324
Views: 277523

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#57—'Unwritten Rules')

Sure. Of course. I check one of your threads for the first time in ages, and this...THIS is what I find! I...j...qxklrbt...

(descends utterly into angrish for several minutes)

...GAH!

:lol:
by dewelar
Tue Apr 09, 2019 10:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 46
Views: 35053

Re: (Updated 4/9/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Popped in for the first time in a few days to find a new update, and a pretty interesting one! Also current thanks to Dewelar since Leaty wrote it within his world and gave permission. Technically, I'd call it a shared world, since Iwanako and Mai in Bantamweights are canonically the same characters...
by dewelar
Tue Mar 26, 2019 11:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 46
Views: 35053

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/25/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

I really enjoyed this chapter -- I think it's your best one so far. Your first couple of chapters had some iffy moments, but you seem to be smoothing them out as you continue writing. The interplay between Emi and Hisao here is quite enjoyable, and while I'm not sure you've quite gotten Rin down it...
by dewelar
Mon Mar 25, 2019 10:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 46
Views: 35053

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/35/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

Wow, is it March 35th already? Spring is really flying by... :wink: I really enjoyed this chapter -- I think it's your best one so far. Your first couple of chapters had some iffy moments, but you seem to be smoothing them out as you continue writing. The interplay between Emi and Hisao here is quit...
by dewelar
Wed Mar 06, 2019 11:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 46
Views: 35053

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/5/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

Interesting story so far -- interesting enough to keep reading at least :) . I'm anxious to see who's in Misha's circle in this 'verse. Regarding some of the other points: yes, I know I didn't really describe Shin or Mai in Developments , but it probably would have improved it a bit if I had. I don'...
by dewelar
Sun Feb 24, 2019 7:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 727386

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

Done! I can officially say this is among the best of the fics I've read on the site, though I've only read about 20 on here so take that as you may. I will gladly take it as a compliment. There are a fair few excellent stories here. I'm not sure I would have been able to hold myself back like Hisao...
by dewelar
Tue Feb 19, 2019 7:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 727386

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

Welcome to Developments :D ! I smile earnestly at my companion. "In that case, I believe you've spotted our quarry, Miss Iwakuma." Developments Chapter 36, Hanako's last name is Ikezawa. I'm like 4 years late, but it greatly confused me. *looks at chapter* Ah, I see. Lilly isn't referring ...