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by dewelar
Wed Apr 17, 2019 12:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: syfy.com tags KS as one of the five sexiest visual novels out there
Replies: 7
Views: 424

Re: syfy.com tags KS as one of the five sexiest visual novels out there

Have seen neither the anime, nor the newer translation, nor the sorta-sequels, but have read the older fan translation of the first Grisaia VN. I enjoyed it quite a bit, but plot-wise your suspension of disbelief WILL be tested. The humour is probably not to everyone's taste, and a couple of the rou...
by dewelar
Tue Apr 16, 2019 9:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#57—'Unwritten Rules')
Replies: 264
Views: 70326

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#57—'Unwritten Rules')

Sure. Of course. I check one of your threads for the first time in ages, and this...THIS is what I find! I...j...qxklrbt...

(descends utterly into angrish for several minutes)

...GAH!

:lol:
by dewelar
Tue Apr 09, 2019 10:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 4/15/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 37
Views: 1250

Re: (Updated 4/9/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

Popped in for the first time in a few days to find a new update, and a pretty interesting one! Also current thanks to Dewelar since Leaty wrote it within his world and gave permission. Technically, I'd call it a shared world, since Iwanako and Mai in Bantamweights are canonically the same characters...
by dewelar
Tue Mar 26, 2019 11:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 4/15/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 37
Views: 1250

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/25/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

I really enjoyed this chapter -- I think it's your best one so far. Your first couple of chapters had some iffy moments, but you seem to be smoothing them out as you continue writing. The interplay between Emi and Hisao here is quite enjoyable, and while I'm not sure you've quite gotten Rin down it...
by dewelar
Mon Mar 25, 2019 10:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 4/15/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 37
Views: 1250

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/35/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

Wow, is it March 35th already? Spring is really flying by... :wink: I really enjoyed this chapter -- I think it's your best one so far. Your first couple of chapters had some iffy moments, but you seem to be smoothing them out as you continue writing. The interplay between Emi and Hisao here is quit...
by dewelar
Wed Mar 06, 2019 11:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 4/15/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 37
Views: 1250

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/5/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

Interesting story so far -- interesting enough to keep reading at least :) . I'm anxious to see who's in Misha's circle in this 'verse. Regarding some of the other points: yes, I know I didn't really describe Shin or Mai in Developments , but it probably would have improved it a bit if I had. I don'...
by dewelar
Sun Feb 24, 2019 7:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 269452

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

Done! I can officially say this is among the best of the fics I've read on the site, though I've only read about 20 on here so take that as you may. I will gladly take it as a compliment. There are a fair few excellent stories here. I'm not sure I would have been able to hold myself back like Hisao...
by dewelar
Tue Feb 19, 2019 7:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 269452

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

Welcome to Developments :D ! I smile earnestly at my companion. "In that case, I believe you've spotted our quarry, Miss Iwakuma." Developments Chapter 36, Hanako's last name is Ikezawa. I'm like 4 years late, but it greatly confused me. *looks at chapter* Ah, I see. Lilly isn't referring to Hanako ...
by dewelar
Sat May 05, 2018 11:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 269452

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

This was fantastic and I don’t think I give due credit in this review. The character development, the world-building, the sheer scale of this thing and how engaging each chapter was… a masterpiece. Many thanks! I'm honored you think so. It's always good to see and hear from new people discovering t...
by dewelar
Thu Mar 01, 2018 7:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190401 Silence Falls)
Replies: 1758
Views: 219035

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180225 'The Diary of Tezuka Rin…' by dewelar)

Only little tidbit I wondered about, that I haven't seen mentioned here, is the line "And that's who I actually am, at least right now." The romantic in me can't help but wonder: was there ever a plan to have the last entry in the diary of Tezuka Rin, and the first entry in the diary of Nakai Rin? ...
by dewelar
Wed Feb 28, 2018 9:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190401 Silence Falls)
Replies: 1758
Views: 219035

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180225 'The Diary of Tezuka Rin…' by dewelar)

Admittedly, this kind of falls under "Old Shame" for me. It was a work that didn't work. It was intended to take place some time after Rin's good ending, as an experiment for her as well as for me. Perhaps it was because it didn't work for her that it didn't work for me -- or maybe the other way aro...
by dewelar
Sat Feb 03, 2018 2:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 269452

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

Dewelar I am late to this post, but I feel I really have to say how immensely I have been enjoying reading this novel. Many thanks! It's good to know that this story continues to be enjoyed. I don't check these boards as often as I once did, or I would have replied sooner. Yes, because I only got t...
by dewelar
Sat May 13, 2017 3:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 269452

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

I see that I am very late to the party here. But I loved every word of Developments and couldn't have asked for something better to have binge read the past week. Thanks very much! I'm tempted to ask if there's a copy of this all in one file anywhere because I'd love to have a copy to keep around f...
by dewelar
Thu Jun 30, 2016 11:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 269452

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

Is it too late to post praise for this story? Well, I certainly don't think so :D. Seriously, though, this board doesn't really care if you necro a thread as long as you've got something to say about it. I've seen stuff that was buried for years pop back up. I buried it in my bookmarks looong ago, ...
by dewelar
Mon May 30, 2016 3:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-26) A Christmas Council
Replies: 131
Views: 22113

Re: The Blank Slate - (Updated 5-28) Defining Work

Not bad. This might seem odd for me to say, but if anything this could have been bleaker. Still, it feels a good deal Rinner than most of the stuff I've read on this board.
Blank Mage wrote:Mrs. Tezuka
So, Rin ended up marrying herself. Perfect. Never change this.