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by Numb
Wed Nov 25, 2015 7:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER
Replies: 15
Views: 3312

Re: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER

I'm sorry I have to be the one to say this, but this isn't good. That's not to say you can't improve, because you can, just not by doing this. Please don't take this personally, because I know it can be hard dealing with harsh constructive criticism for the first time. I'm going to list your major f...
by Numb
Sun Nov 01, 2015 6:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 251912

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumes—[Jigoro/Hideaki])

oh yes, Numb... errm, comments on already-written fics would be good; comments on yet-to-be-written fics are difficult because, well, no text for discussion. Sorry! Oh, right, yeah. Totally didn't forget the name of this thread for a while there. I have yet to read the listed fics, I'll try to get ...
by Numb
Sun Nov 01, 2015 1:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 251912

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumes—[Jigoro/Hideaki])

While I have yet to write something exploring the idea more eloquently, I have what I find to be an interesting view on Jigoro as a character. A lot of it boils down to Jigoro being a victim of injustice at the hands of the Satou family, and his attempts to fix the problem through less-than-legal me...
by Numb
Wed Oct 14, 2015 7:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 251912

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumes — [Shizune])

I guess I'll poke my head in for the general Shizune discussion (I haven't read the listed fics recently enough to comment on them). Shizune to me is a very interesting character, though not because of the characteristics directly displayed in the Katawa Shoujo canon. Shizune as a character can be s...
by Numb
Sat Sep 26, 2015 9:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 150794

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14

Blossom is aborted at 36,110 words. The last update was actually 2014-04-01. I'd put it into the code format and make things easier for you, but I can't see the template anywhere.
by Numb
Thu Jul 23, 2015 5:41 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2004
Views: 193797

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

Oddball wrote:Natsume only wears socks when she sleeps. It's not a sexual thing, it's just how she's most comfortable. Also her feet get cold easily.
Not sure if this means sleeping nude with socks on or not wearing socks during the day. Both are interesting ideas though.
by Numb
Wed Jun 24, 2015 9:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 251912

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Iwanako Rising)

On the topic of Leaty and the ever-elusive Iwanako route, consider reading this post . At the risk of going somewhat off-topic for a moment, Leaty raises a lot of good points in that post. I'd say I agree with 99% of what she said, the only thing I would disagree with is the ending remark that "nob...
by Numb
Sat Jun 06, 2015 6:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
Replies: 169
Views: 57540

Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)

If you're having trouble writing a character when you first start out, try writing a full history for them. Example: I'm currently working on a new project and struggled to get a solid grasp on what kind of character I want the romantic focus to be, so I've made a new document with details from thei...
by Numb
Tue Jan 27, 2015 7:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
Replies: 30
Views: 7957

Re: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]

I figure I might as well say it here now that this thread is back in main view. This isn't dead, it's just untouched as of right now. I recently left BCube for reasons I'll probably go into in another post over on their forums, which freed up some of my ideas for written work. However, I'm currently...
by Numb
Wed Oct 08, 2014 5:04 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 251290

Re: Random KS Discussion

True, though I honestly felt that it never meaningfully expanded on Shizune's character. Some conjecture can be made given what we see of Jigoro, but it just didn't really go in depth. Speaking of whom, seems more like a walking meme than a nuanced character. All in all, it just felt like a wasted ...
by Numb
Thu Sep 11, 2014 5:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bugger It, Oneshot Thread (Morse Update 10/4/16)
Replies: 161
Views: 29650

Re: Bugger It, I'll Make This A Oneshot Thread (Update 11/9/

Best one yet, I r8 it 8/8 m8 :lol:
by Numb
Tue Sep 09, 2014 5:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 196955

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {UPDATED 2014-9-5!}

How have I not posted here yet? You captured my interest a while ago, but this update has gotten me hooked. I'd post some log wall of praise, by I'm on my phone and the typing isn't exactly the best. All I can say without blabbering on and getting annoyed at the keyboard that doesn't register my key...
by Numb
Fri Aug 29, 2014 5:25 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2004
Views: 193797

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

Munch, that is fucking genius :shock:
by Numb
Fri Aug 29, 2014 12:25 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 251290

Re: Random KS Discussion

Another thing about Miki... why has it become fanon that she's friends with Suzu? Canonically , she "tends to get on better with guys", to the point that she doesn't even talk to Emi, her teammate , much. Because they sit next to each other in class. :) I always thought it was a case of opposites, ...
by Numb
Fri Aug 22, 2014 2:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68387

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 8/23)

"No friends?" Astute observation, Miki. She bends down slightly, her This is in the first chapter, just saw this today. Her what? It just ends off, I'm going to assume it's something to do with cleavage, or would've been but you cut it out. Suddenly, I notice Shizune re's eyeing me maliciously Shiz...