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by Bad Apple
Wed Jan 27, 2016 8:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cutter? [Hanako]
Replies: 1
Views: 1039

Re: Cutter? [Hanako]

And when you read a story that identifies with your present, even generally, it'll likewise feel more personal. Thanks for the piece, Doomish, always appreciate 'em. My playlist has no shortage of accompanying music, though the themes are so ambiguous that it could've been any of a million songs...
by Bad Apple
Thu Jan 01, 2015 5:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)
Replies: 102
Views: 142304

Re: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)

Holy shitballs, this happened. Holy flying pigs, Batman. All right, this is pretty amazing, and we're all happy for it, but I'm gonna be that guy and say it still needed a proofreading. I've proofread the Common Path and a bit of the Hisao Branch. It's a bit long for a post, so I attached what I've ...
by Bad Apple
Wed Oct 15, 2014 2:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 317
Views: 311558

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

I was a lurker when this was first published, so I'll just voice my thoughts this time around. First of all, the "Fanfic BGM" program is a pretty cool idea. Multimedia in fanworks is always fun. More authors should make use of it, in my opinion. I already listen to the soundtrack while reading KS fa...
by Bad Apple
Tue Oct 14, 2014 3:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 188511

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {UPDATED 2014-9-5!}

Slaughterhouse-Five Oh right, Vonnegut. Derp. Now I feel kind of silly not figuring that one out by description earlier during my first readthrough. http://i.somethingawful.com/forumsystem/emoticons/emot-sweatdrop.gif So it goes. What epiphany? That the Nurse is absolutely right despite the sternne...
by Bad Apple
Tue Sep 23, 2014 11:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 84258

Re: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)

Hey, congratulations on seeing this through. It's got some rough spots, but it was decent. The one point I can uniquely raise, as being possibly the only one who read it side-by-side with the VN, is that I noticed a "telepathy" in some passages throughout where Hanako thinks the same as Hisao word-f...
by Bad Apple
Tue Sep 23, 2014 11:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 188511

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {UPDATED 2014-9-5!}

I'm back, and so is this! I'm tardy so I'll try not to repeat earlier posts. The second book I pick up is about an agent of a depowered federal government in a dystopian future where corporations control the entirety of the western world, and it’s pretty bleak and unsettling throughout. I don’t deci...
by Bad Apple
Fri Feb 14, 2014 10:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blind Spots: Theory of Colours
Replies: 9
Views: 1720

Re: Blind Spots: Theory of Colours

Not quite... The Japanese do have a word for green - midori - but the "border" between blue and green is different... It's a bit complicated . Ah, I felt a bit queasy about that. Though I read that page a while ago, I wasn't quite sure how to properly express the sentiment, but I was expecting you ...
by Bad Apple
Fri Feb 14, 2014 4:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blind Spots: Theory of Colours
Replies: 9
Views: 1720

Blind Spots: Theory of Colours

Hello there, forum. I have never been one to read, much less write, fanfiction, but the last few years have changed that slightly for various reasons. One of those reasons has been my extensive stay in this community. I was just minding my own business when, one night, this idea hit me out of the b...
by Bad Apple
Tue Feb 11, 2014 11:58 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What if Rin had prosthetic arms?
Replies: 45
Views: 5166

Re: What if Rin had prosthetic arms?

In what universe? The one everyone else resides in, apparently. @Apple: How does living in Japan change that it'd cost a lot? That graph doesn't exactly show a big difference. :P And I don't see Rin ever having anything as regular as a 'career'. :lol: What. Are you incapable of math and commonsense...
by Bad Apple
Tue Feb 11, 2014 6:39 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What if Rin had prosthetic arms?
Replies: 45
Views: 5166

Re: What if Rin had prosthetic arms?

This kind. You know I was talking about this kind. This is actually the strongest argument for. Shirts and feminine hygiene. Eh... Rin is the least feminine of the five girls Hisao can romance. But whatever. I think you know what I meant. I don't think this is true. She ends up alone a lot, but I d...
by Bad Apple
Tue Feb 11, 2014 6:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 16151

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)

I'll have to join the choir on this one and say that ending passed me by all too fast. It was literally over before I knew it. If I may impart my knowledge of the craft, I believe that, due to storytelling conventions, most of us may have been expecting a climatic conflict to occur. In this case, fi...
by Bad Apple
Mon Feb 10, 2014 6:39 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What if Rin had prosthetic arms?
Replies: 45
Views: 5166

Re: What if Rin had prosthetic arms?

[...] However, if you feel like it read up Molyneux's Problem, which concerns the idea that somebody who can determine objects by feeling them may not necessarily be able to determine them by seeing them. My thanks. OT: Honestly, the question here isn't "would she?" but "could she?" As Rin hasn't e...
by Bad Apple
Mon Feb 10, 2014 12:35 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What if Rin had prosthetic arms?
Replies: 45
Views: 5166

Re: What if Rin had prosthetic arms?

AaronIsCrunchy wrote:There are cases of people going insane once they've been given vision after being blind their whole life.
This sounds apocryphal. Sources, if you please. (It's actually relevant to something I've been working on.)
by Bad Apple
Sun Feb 09, 2014 5:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)
Replies: 548
Views: 195121

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

For what it's worth, no one objects to fedoras properly worn (or they shouldn't, at least). They do. (Internet-savvy folk anyhow.) I know from experience. Your mistake must be putting them all together [...] The others are (at least partially) all courtesy of genuine conspiracy theories. Nah, I am ...
by Bad Apple
Fri Feb 07, 2014 9:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 84258

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 04/02/2014)

I've never noticed or heard of this Miki-on-Hanako business. My commonsense is telling me that it is undoubtedly nothing but crackfic , but I would be interested in the "evidence." Well, unless you call Hanako's non-canonical love for chocolate "evidence." Anyway, it looks like this is drawing to a ...