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by motokid108
Thu Nov 20, 2014 10:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alone Time in the Library (Heavy on the smut)
Replies: 11
Views: 5431

Re: Alone Time in the Library (Heavy on the smut)

All the yes! Great first chapter, looking forward to a continuation if it's still to come
by motokid108
Sun Aug 03, 2014 2:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Future (Complete Version)
Replies: 32
Views: 10590

Re: A Future (Complete Version)

A great story and a short read. Bravo good sir/maddam. You've made a truly great story with excellent detail
by motokid108
Mon Jun 02, 2014 8:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 63089

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

Dam glad to see this story back. And another great chapter!
by motokid108
Sat Mar 22, 2014 1:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 63089

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

Another great chapter my friend. I love the back and forth dialogue and parents crude joke at the beginning. Also i dont remember exactly where, but i noticed a missing closing bracket. Just throwing that out there
by motokid108
Tue Mar 18, 2014 1:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Look Back (Chapter One Complete, 7/15)
Replies: 7
Views: 2669

Re: Look Back (Chapter One, Part Two 3/16)

You have my attention... I like this
by motokid108
Sat Mar 15, 2014 12:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Waiting (Chapter Ten, 7/15)
Replies: 72
Views: 17201

Re: Waiting (Chapter Nine, 3/7)

I love this story. Looking forward to the continuation
by motokid108
Thu Mar 06, 2014 7:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Complete: Hisao X OC 25/2/14
Replies: 15
Views: 3032

Re: Complete: Hisao X OC 25/2/14

I like it. Would be nice to see it continue from there
by motokid108
Thu Mar 06, 2014 7:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gray Outlook - A Hanako Epilogue
Replies: 5
Views: 1777

Re: Gray Outlook - A Hanako Epilogue

Great one shot, though to be honest, the "fatal" thing bothers me too
by motokid108
Thu Mar 06, 2014 7:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Disheveled [Ch. 3, 9/18] (undergoing revisions)
Replies: 50
Views: 14968

Re: Disheveled [Ch. 2, 3/5]

Glad to see this fic return! If you're looking for edits, you put face instead of fact in the second full paragraph. If you weren't looking for them, well too bad, you got one.
by motokid108
Sun Feb 02, 2014 6:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 9027

Re: Bad Hanako

Wow. Such story. So suspense. Much feelings. I like
by motokid108
Mon Jan 06, 2014 12:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 63089

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

WHY CAN'T I WRITE LIKE A PRO LIKE YOU?! Great chapter good sir/maddam. I eagerly await the next installment!
by motokid108
Sun Jan 05, 2014 4:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 38309

Re: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku fics (Updated 10/12/13)

Sex would be boring, Sex is never boring! Now as for the story... It's great. I'm digging the way it's progressing, and how you're adding a little wrinkle in their ever-smoothing life. I look forward to the next chapter. I understand you're not much for writing sex scenes, but lets face it, sex is ...
by motokid108
Thu Jan 02, 2014 2:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 41616

Re: Freaks and Friends

And here i was worrying this was a forgotten thread.. Glad to see another chapter
by motokid108
Wed Dec 11, 2013 11:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Ooe Way: A Natsume fic*CH.II 30/11*
Replies: 12
Views: 3322

Re: The Ooe Way: A Natsume fic*CH.II 30/11*

Thanks for the feedback. Now i know what to look out for better. Negative criticism good, tells me what i need to fix. As far as Noami and Natsume being so forward, I think of it as their character. I see Naomi is being sort of like Akira. Both personality and looks (though i have nothing to do with...
by motokid108
Wed Dec 11, 2013 9:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Ooe Way: A Natsume fic*CH.II 30/11*
Replies: 12
Views: 3322

Re: The Ooe Way: A Natsume fic*CH.II 30/11*

I find this lack of feedback disturbing