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by nahbutualright
Thu Dec 25, 2014 11:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 579
Views: 218145

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12-25-14)

I read this story a while ago and really loved it, but I can't remember many of the finer details, so I have a question. Was Hisao always such a... I'm trying to think of something less crude than "useless pussy" but nothing's really coming to me that matches how much I disliked him in this chapter....
by nahbutualright
Thu Nov 06, 2014 9:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 304750

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.53 posted 11/

One gripe in an otherwise awesome chapter, it felt like someone was getting nudged or winked at every other sentence. It got a bit distracting.
by nahbutualright
Sun Jan 19, 2014 2:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 579
Views: 218145

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

This was fantastic, but I'm disappointed in you for not including a "precious bodily fluids" line during Kenji's scene.