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by Harrison
Sat Oct 05, 2013 10:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 50
Views: 9454

Re: _

Sad to see this go as well :( I completely understand about not having enough time to write though, as I find it increasingly difficult to find time to write as well. Just whatever you do, don't give up completely. I'll still be happy to proof-read anything that you might want proofread in the futur...
by Harrison
Mon Sep 16, 2013 3:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 50
Views: 9454

Re: [Hanako] Rebirth *UPDATED Part 2 15/9

I definitely see improvement when comparing part one to part 2, which is obviously good. Only a couple comments/typos. -You used the word "I" 72 times in total, so you should try to cut those down a bit. A good idea is to just write the part with whatever words comes to mind, and then go back and re...
by Harrison
Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 50
Views: 9454

Re: [Hanako] Rebirth

Maybe it's late on a Friday, Hanako is locked in her room with a laptop and a case of Red Bull, trying to write an essay for her Abnormal Psychology class, while Hisao repeatedly attempts to coax her into abandoning her futile efforts and join him for a movie. It's a plausible situation involving a...
by Harrison
Sat Sep 14, 2013 8:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 49380

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!

I enjoyed this thoroughly my good sir. Thank you for writing it. :)
by Harrison
Sat Sep 14, 2013 8:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 50
Views: 9454

Re: [Hanako] Rebirth

For a first fan fic, I think you did pretty well. If you're planning on continuing (which it sounds like you are), then I think it has potential to turn into a great story line. Also, I get the feeling that you're "telling" the story, rather than "showing" it. By "showing" your story (Better word ch...
by Harrison
Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bizarrer and Surrealier (Inside Hanako's head)
Replies: 11
Views: 3386

Re: Bizarrer and Surrealier (Inside Hanako's head)

I really enjoyed reading this. Are you planning on continuing this in the future? If so, I will gladly read it! :)
by Harrison
Fri Aug 23, 2013 6:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 35437

Re: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku fics (Updated 6/3/13)

Sea wrote:All fics should be written in Cherokee. Much more understandable.
I completely agree. :)
by Harrison
Fri Jul 12, 2013 11:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 35437

Re: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku fics (Updated 6/3/13)

Just finished reading all that's posted. Thanks for helping me get here, and I really like what I've read. I can't wait for the next pats. Also, the dialog seems to be realistic, so good job.
by Harrison
Wed Jul 10, 2013 3:09 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Birthday!
Replies: 927
Views: 102179

Re: Birthday!

Happy birthday Hanako! Anyone know what she's turning? Sorry I lost track.
by Harrison
Sun Jul 07, 2013 2:07 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which song moved you the most?
Replies: 136
Views: 28169

Re: Which song moved you the most?

The songs that moved me the most probably include: Jitter Breathlessly Romance in Andante Moment of Decision Painful History I also really enjoyed: Red Velvet Ah eh I oh you Air Guitar ...and pretty much every other song of the soundtrack :P On a side note, I'm ironically listening to the soundtrack...
by Harrison
Tue Jun 18, 2013 12:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 162202

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

I don't have words for how good that was. I really like how it's not just about Hanako and Hisao having sex like rabbits, and it also shows the perspective of many characters. Terrific Job. :)
by Harrison
Thu Jun 13, 2013 2:42 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What scene made you "cry" the most
Replies: 677
Views: 81107

Re: What scene made you "cry" the most

Before reading KS, I hardly cried about anything. Sadly, when someone at a nearby school was killed in a car crash, I felt somewhat unemotional about it. It's not that I didn't think it was worth crying about, I just didn't really know how to respond to it. At the final scene of Hanako's good ending...
by Harrison
Wed Jun 05, 2013 11:44 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2402
Views: 224836

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

After completing the game, I obsessed over learning every song on both guitar and piano. I've only got about 7 more songs to go!