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I promise I haven't forgotten or abandoned this. I'm trying a few different writing techniques, and it's taking quite a bit longer than anticipated. I'll post another update soon.

Okay, I hate to do this, but I'm going to delay again. It's apparent that I was rushing through this next part, and after hearing back from my proofreaders, I'm going to restructure what I've written, and clean it up quite a bit. It may take a bit, because I'm actually going to restructure all of 1....

Just wanted to give everyone an update. The next section is to the proofreaders, and once that is all sorted out it will be posted. Also Act 1.5 is going to be 3 parts, so yeah, cliffhanger.

Just a heads up. I had a personal emergency this weekend, and will miss my next scheduled update. At latest, I'll have it posted by next week. Sorry about this, just wasn't able to do my personal revisions and get it sent off to my proofreaders yet.

Mirage_GSM wrote:Hey, the last update was not even a week ago.
It's a bit soon to get impatient, isn't it?

Wait...did I post this a week early? Must...keep...expectations...low.

But seriously, life does intrude quite a bit, so I do have to space them out for sanity reasons.

I'm startled awake by a loud clattering sound. “Ah, dammit.” I'm laying back down flat, I wonder when that happened. I turn and look to the voice, and notice an orderly picking up a food tray that had dropped to the ground. “You alright?” I ask quietly. She looks up to me a smiles, “Fine, just dropp...

“Need help finding anything here?” My attention is pulled away from packing my bag by a bump to the shoulder. I quickly turn and notice Miki is standing beside me.  “I'm going to take Suzu to the lit club, and I have a few minutes before I have to head to track practice after that.” “Well, I was go...

I had forgotten about that box. It's still stuffed under my bed, unopened, probably. I suppose Kenji could have broken in.  My train of thought is interrupted by the door opening, the pale white light outside seeping in, before disappearing again with the closing of the door. “Ah, Mr. Nakai. How are...

...Beep...Beep...Beep... I know that sound. ...Beep...Beep...Beep... So I'm back here again, am I? I open my eyes and try to look around the room, but it's dark, save for a soft light emanating from one corner of my vision. As I try to turn my head towards the source of the light, my head begins th...

Well I was hoping to do this next part in one large chunk, but it's turning out a whole lot larger than I had thought, so I'll be splitting it up into 2 posts, possibly 3 if it keeps building the way it is. This is a prologue to Act 2, building a bit of history on what was glossed over in the first ...

Hmm. Well, I guess Miki's right. Shizune pretty clearly wants the D. But, being a Miki Route, that's not where this is headed. Too true, that was thrown in just to give Miki something to tease Hisao about. I was a little surprised that Hisao knew Miki's name, and very surprised that he knew Rika's....

Thanks for all, the input so far.

Forgot to mention this before, feel free to PM me the grammatical and spelling errors. With only one proofreader at the moment, it's easy for them to slip through. Also, if you'd be interested in proofreading, you could let me know through PM as well.

With that Shizune stands and waves as she starts to walk off. I wave goodbye to her then turn my attention back to Miki. She's walking along the backstretch of the track with her arms behind her head. I make my way down with the water bottle and clipboard, meeting her as she approaches the bleachers...

I start to think about this first week here at Yamaku. It has turned out pretty much exactly as I had assumed. I came into this school late in the year, and everyone else already has their lives settled, as it were. The few things I've looked into to occupy my time, like the literature club, are alr...

So here I find myself, wandering through the festival, bored out of my mind. With Shizune and Misha off dealing with that food shortage problem, I've got no one to hang out with. Maybe I should have joined the student council, then they might have accepted my help, instead of telling me to 'go have ...