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by BestTerribleApe
Tue Jan 14, 2014 4:39 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?
Replies: 175
Views: 22474

Re: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?

One of Hisao's definitive faults is that he takes people at face value. He's clearly been used to relatively shallow relationships, both with his friends and his parents, and has no idea that genuine friendship can leave many things unsaid. In every route save Emi's (where he experiences first hand ...
by BestTerribleApe
Mon Jan 13, 2014 1:54 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?
Replies: 175
Views: 22474

Re: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?

Barring the Kenji ending, they can be divided into two major categories. In the first one, intense pain is had, but that may eventually lead to character growth. Or not. The most feelsy, but not necessarily the end of the world if you keep in this mind that this is late teenagers we're talking about...
by BestTerribleApe
Sat Aug 31, 2013 3:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 381368

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 8/31]

This is the best thing. Thanatos is the hero KS deserves.

Also, goddamnit, Hisao, did you have to think unsexy thoughts before the deed?
by BestTerribleApe
Thu Aug 29, 2013 10:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 91419

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 18/08/2013)

Trivun wrote:Is that a song lyric by any chance? If so, where from? I've not heard it before and I'm curious...
Never seen Drive?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9K7rmxjk5RQ
by BestTerribleApe
Sun Aug 18, 2013 6:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 91419

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 18/08/2013)

I can't eat, I can't sleep, though I can't stay awake, and whatever I do I find myself reminded of him. He keeps her under his spell, he keeps her under his spell... :P *last two chapters* Well, that escalated quickly. Not to say it's bad , but you seems determined to quickly get this out of the wa...
by BestTerribleApe
Tue Jun 18, 2013 5:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 381368

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 6/18]

Thanatos02 uploaded another chapter for his Akira's route.

From Akira's perspective, to match.

Today is going to be a good day, after all.
by BestTerribleApe
Wed May 22, 2013 6:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 381368

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/20]

I don't claim to be a master or even an experienced writer when it comes to story development, so I'll be sure to take your criticism into mind when it comes to future events. Heh, as you've said yourself, those little coincidences were a necessary evil. Akira and Hisao's relationship evolution alr...
by BestTerribleApe
Tue May 21, 2013 3:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 381368

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/20]

My two cents: A neat, fun pseudo-route, that's for sure. And yes, Hisao being more outspoken is a nice addition, though that could have painfully backfired. Generally speaking, it seems that Hisao has been, to an extant, blessed by "some kind of divine forces" in this fanfiction. Nothing stretching ...