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by 13loop
Wed Jan 29, 2014 9:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 231080

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov

Judging from Yoko's description of phase 2, I'm expecting either sultry underwear shopping or public karaoke. I mean I did call it :) Glad to see you're still alive! Hisao being on a boat is a pretty good reason for him being MIA. I never doubted him cheating on her(ok maybe a little , but Aiko's a...
by 13loop
Fri Dec 27, 2013 2:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 28563

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)

Sad to see you go Semi, but do what you gotta go. Thanks for the entertainment you provided me. The ending seemed abrupt but yeah, probably the point. Still liked how it ended, bringing muh feels along with it. Best of luck to you bro, cheers! :D
by 13loop
Fri Nov 15, 2013 3:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 65820

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

This Shizune is much more affectionate that portrayed on the story, and I'm loving it! Good job, like always.
by 13loop
Tue Nov 12, 2013 1:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Negativedarke's Fanfic Shorts
Replies: 25
Views: 6970

Re: Negativedarke's Fanfic Shorts

Keep going man, I like the stories :D
by 13loop
Fri Nov 08, 2013 12:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 30640

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 11/07]

Just got to reading this, and it's looking pretty solid! Part of me wants him to play piano again, because piano is the instrument i really wanna learn but i'm terrible at it. I'm assuming that Shizune is the love interest and that's another reason why i like this story. She needs more lovin' and it...
by 13loop
Wed Nov 06, 2013 10:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 231080

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov

Welcome back Helbereth :D Thanks to you my 5 minute bathroom break turned into a 30 minute one, but it's all good. Glad to see Yoko coming out of her shell a lot, albeit a bit surprising. Think a lot of it has to do with her father's visit though. Also, Aiko in a tank top :D No wonder Yoko's dad had...
by 13loop
Tue Nov 05, 2013 8:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 14768

Re: OC "Neko" - Route

Hey there, i like your story. The pacing did go a bit too fast, but people have already bit your ear for that, so i won't. That ending hit me like a truck. I didn't expect it to be the bad end, but that just seemed a little bit too cold. I mean through out the story, i didn't get that kind of vibe f...
by 13loop
Wed Aug 21, 2013 10:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]
Replies: 69
Views: 20165

Re: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]

Ahh just as I check the forums in days, you make your comeback mocaw :) I'm stocked to see what happens in this happy-comedy!
by 13loop
Mon May 27, 2013 10:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 28563

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/26)

Well that was an eventful afternoon. I'm liking Ritsu so far. Looking forward to the next chapter!
by 13loop
Sat May 25, 2013 11:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond the Rain: (Hisao x Lilly) (18+) *Updated:11/11/13*
Replies: 21
Views: 7115

Re: Beyond the Rain: (Hisao x Lilly) (18+) *Updated:05/24/13

I didn't like the fact that Lilly still left Hisao behind, but I'm glad that Hisao is going to make the move. Looking forward to the next part.
by 13loop
Wed May 22, 2013 5:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 404543

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/20]

This is some really good stuff man! Looking forward to the final act of the story.
by 13loop
Wed May 15, 2013 12:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 231080

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 5/15/13 ~ C.36 - Morning Delight

Another good chapter! Seeing how comfortable Aiko and Hisao are with each other, i think that she'll tell him the big secret soon. I'd like to say that this as a good thing, but there's that evil thought in my head that says it might end badly for them. If this is the bad end, you've got a way with ...
by 13loop
Wed May 08, 2013 11:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 231080

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 05/08/2013 (Chapter 35 posted)

Once again you blow my mind with your writing! Been a long time lurker and your story was the first OC I read and it is no doubt my favorite OC/story. I've read this story about two and a half times(stopped because site crashed and new chapter) and I can't get enough of it. Your story is really some...