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by Craftyatom
Sat Jan 04, 2020 9:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness [01/05/2019]
Replies: 71
Views: 5543

Re: Feurox's Den of Sadness [01/05/2019]

Up to the usual standards of quality and depression I've come to expect from you! Definitely had a few SpaG issues, but nothing too horrid. I messaged you with a list. A pretty good take on the scenario. I think Mutou's internal monologue was well-portrayed - there are one or two moments where his c...
by Craftyatom
Wed Dec 25, 2019 12:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 43
Views: 2176

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

I use my one-shot thread for all my secret santa posts, but I figured I'd make a post on this thread as well, for consistency (and to make Mirage's job easier):

From Craftyatom for Oddball - The Waiting Games
by Craftyatom
Wed Dec 25, 2019 12:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2019: The Waiting Games)
Replies: 85
Views: 6833

The Waiting Games - No More Can Be Done Today

It’s okay, mom - I found someone to pass the time with for today. See you tomorrow! 5 - No More Can Be Done Today Molly yawned. “Alright, I think that’ll be my last one. I should get to sleep soon.” “Aww. Are you sure?” Emi had lost track of how many times they had played this game, but she felt li...
by Craftyatom
Wed Dec 25, 2019 12:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2019: The Waiting Games)
Replies: 85
Views: 6833

The Waiting Games - AEMILIA REGINA

I’m really sorry, Emi. I know you were excited to come home. I’ll pick you up as soon as I can tomorrow, okay? 4 - AEMILIA REGINA Down in the valley, what remained of the First Royal Army was almost trapped. Almost . On the east end of the valley stood the Eighth Imperial Infantry Corps, and on the...
by Craftyatom
Wed Dec 25, 2019 12:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2019: The Waiting Games)
Replies: 85
Views: 6833

The Waiting Games - With Apologies to Conway

I might not be able to pick you up today. They just issued a blizzard warning, and said nobody should use the roads until they’re cleared, which might not be until tomorrow morning. 3 - With Apologies to Conway This red light seemed to go on forever. Emi had sat at it many times since learning to d...
by Craftyatom
Wed Dec 25, 2019 12:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2019: The Waiting Games)
Replies: 85
Views: 6833

The Waiting Games - Fleet in Being

The weather forecast looks pretty bad, so I might be a bit late picking you up this afternoon. Just a heads up. 2 - Fleet in Being Out in the pitch black of a moonless night, a long line of flame burned, parallel to the horizon. Its smoke billowed high into the sky, though it was difficult to see; ...
by Craftyatom
Wed Dec 25, 2019 12:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2019: The Waiting Games)
Replies: 85
Views: 6833

The Waiting Games - Trust

The Waiting Games I’ll be there around noon to pick you up. Can’t wait to see my favorite little girl again! 1 - Trust Emi slowed to a halt, breathing heavily, and took in her surroundings. The sky was a brilliant orange, but it wouldn’t remain that way for long - she needed to settle in for the ni...
by Craftyatom
Wed Dec 25, 2019 12:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2019: The Waiting Games)
Replies: 85
Views: 6833

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Oct 26th, 2019: Someone Part 2)

It’s December 25th (in most parts of the world), and you know what that means! It’s time to publish my entry for this year’s forum secret santa , colloquially dubbed SX ! My victim was Oddball , who gave me the prompt Emi and Molly have a nice pleasant time together. Just the two of them. Now, I’ll ...
by Craftyatom
Tue Dec 24, 2019 7:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 43
Views: 2176

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

Almost Home For Christmas Thank you for tackling my prompt! Your story's short, but sweet. The interaction between Saki and Hisao is fluid and believable, and their relationship is set up well, given how little exposition we get. It sometimes feels like the pacing is a bit fast, but I suppose that'...
by Craftyatom
Tue Dec 24, 2019 6:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 'Writing on the Wall' - SX for Cpl_Crud (Mature Content)
Replies: 13
Views: 699

Re: 'Writing on the Wall' - SX for Cpl_Crud (Mature Content)

Well, I've already shared my opinion on this story with Feurox, having proofread it, but I should post here, too. I really liked the first half of the story. The characters played off of each other really well, and the interactions were really sweet. Rin, Miki, and the main pair all felt really soli...
by Craftyatom
Wed Nov 06, 2019 1:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200113 Project Indigo)
Replies: 1815
Views: 255775

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20191021 Inkyukasu—A Horror Fic)

A Reply to Iwanako As a story, I kind of enjoyed this one.  I mean, there's not much there to discuss, but I think it was good, overall.  The characterization seemed a bit stilted - to me, it was the second paragraph that didn't seem to match Hisao's style - but really, his writing style could be v...
by Craftyatom
Sat Oct 26, 2019 10:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2019: The Waiting Games)
Replies: 85
Views: 6833

Someone Part 2 (2/2)

Ordinarily, Emi and Rin would come to the roof of the academic building to eat lunch. It wasn’t lunchtime, though. It was still early morning, and classes had only started a few minutes ago. Rin was probably in class, as Emi had tried - with some difficulty - to help her get ready this morning. It w...
by Craftyatom
Sat Oct 26, 2019 10:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2019: The Waiting Games)
Replies: 85
Views: 6833

Someone Part 2 (1/2)

Someone Part 2 It wasn't often that Emi saw someone during her morning runs. The track was out of the way of most of the buildings on campus, and besides, it was too early for students to be going to class. Most of them probably weren't even up yet. That had always been his complaint - the boy who ...
by Craftyatom
Sat Oct 26, 2019 10:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2019: The Waiting Games)
Replies: 85
Views: 6833

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Sep 21st, 2019: Someone)

The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. There were a limited set of options available to participants in the contest and it may be that this ...
by Craftyatom
Mon Sep 30, 2019 12:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 53536

Local Dawn (2/2)

The bell rings, and I get ready to head to lunch. It’ll be nice to just talk with Hisao and Suzu after sitting in class all morning. It seems I’ll have to wait a bit longer, though, as Mutou’s voice follows the bell. “Nakai, Miura, see me for a minute.” I sigh. It’s probably nothing bad, but having ...