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by Thor Odinsson
Sat Aug 10, 2013 7:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rain. A Hanako Fic
Replies: 12
Views: 7517

Re: Rain. A Hanako Fic

“It’s okay” she whispers “You don’t h-have to say yes. I… I won’t break” seems to be enough to let him analyze her entire character. I'm still not sure about what kind of logic made him draw conclusions like that from this. Also, while he seems to conclude that Hanako isn't fragile and doesn't need...
by Thor Odinsson
Sat Aug 10, 2013 2:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rain. A Hanako Fic
Replies: 12
Views: 7517

Re: Rain. A Hanako Fic

For a second I thought Hisao was gonna say no, and I woulda been all like "Damn, Hisao, you one crazy son of a gun." But I liked this. There were some minor grammatical mistakes, but they never broke my immersion, so that's good. So yeah, nice story. I figured there'd be a few, yeah. Good...
by Thor Odinsson
Fri Aug 09, 2013 7:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rain. A Hanako Fic
Replies: 12
Views: 7517

Rain. A Hanako Fic

Another old one I found lurking in my writing folder, feedback always appreciated. Enjoy~ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “Great.” I mutter, harshly, staring at the scene outside my window; people f...
by Thor Odinsson
Sun Aug 04, 2013 8:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Remembrance [Hanako POV]
Replies: 10
Views: 4713

Re: Remembrance [Hanako POV]

This is a nice little fic. Was expecting an epilogue or a piece of the original route in her eyes. But I've always wondered what would happen if she went back to her old house, or to her parent's graves. It's nice to see your take on what would happen. Glad you enjoyed it. Not sure how well I'd han...
by Thor Odinsson
Sun Aug 04, 2013 8:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hyacinth [18+] (Lilly Neutral End) UPDATE 4/22
Replies: 82
Views: 35867

Re: Hyacinth [18+] (Lilly Neutral End) UPDATE 4/22

Vekter wrote:
Thor Odinsson wrote:God damnit, Vekter. Why you do dis to me?

So many feels ;__;
What, the story or going on hiatus?
Both, I guess. you have simultaneously made me both sad and morbidly curious. But I shall endure. I shall wait for you like a chaste maiden.

...

Please get back into your groove soon ;____;
by Thor Odinsson
Sun Aug 04, 2013 8:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hyacinth [18+] (Lilly Neutral End) UPDATE 4/22
Replies: 82
Views: 35867

Re: Hyacinth [18+] (Lilly Neutral End) UPDATE 4/22

God damnit, Vekter. Why you do dis to me?

So many feels ;__;
by Thor Odinsson
Fri Aug 02, 2013 6:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Remembrance [Hanako POV]
Replies: 10
Views: 4713

Re: Remembrance [Hanako POV]

Sea wrote:Welp, those are my feels for the day

Glad I could oblige.
by Thor Odinsson
Fri Aug 02, 2013 6:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Remembrance [Hanako POV]
Replies: 10
Views: 4713

Re: Remembrance [Hanako POV]

Interesting little fic. Hanako going to visit her parents grave. I would have figured it'd had her take Hisao, but it definitly worked to have Hanako do it alone. Although If I remember correctly Japan's rail service is very punctual. From what I understand the trains being two minutes late is high...
by Thor Odinsson
Thu Aug 01, 2013 7:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Remembrance [Hanako POV]
Replies: 10
Views: 4713

Remembrance [Hanako POV]

First actual post here. figured I'd put up one of my better fics, idk. Feedback is definitely appreciated. If this work is similar in any way to anyone else's, I retain that it is purely coincidental. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________...