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by 651
Tue Aug 18, 2015 6:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Ch7] [updated 13 Aug]

I press the card from Nurse into a slightly elevated square of the wall where, according to the theory, the call button once was, and our dead elevator proves to be perfectly operable in a second. A weird one it is, sure, but nothing regular will get me where needed. “Close Sesame,” I whisper. It cl...
by 651
Tue Aug 18, 2015 6:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Ch7] [updated 13 Aug]

“A-Ok, joker.” Shizune signs something with a slightly more concerned look and gets a smack on the back of the head for an answer. Of course, Daigo receives an immediate punch to the kidneys. These two will make an exemplary family one day. Parting myself from the wall and finding my way to an empty...
by 651
Tue Aug 18, 2015 6:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Ch7] [updated 13 Aug]

Here goes the second half. ==== ◄ Previous | Index | Next ► ==== Somewhere far away in the mountains, the silence is heavy like a forging press tonight. Not an insect dares to pierce the chill air with its ever-cheerful screech under the black star-laden sky, not a wind makes a noise in the grass. ...
by 651
Sun Aug 16, 2015 2:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Ch7] [updated 13 Aug]

brythain wrote:Nice to have you back, I'm sure Mirage_GSM will be along soon to point out the typos. :)
I'm quite sure he's long since given up on-
Mirage_GSM wrote:Actually I kind stopped reading this story
Yup. Pretty sure every reader shares his sentiment.
by 651
Thu Aug 13, 2015 4:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Act I complete] [Also, it's dead]

Oh Lord Jesus On A Stick. “You guys conspired to gang up on me with your lectures today.” “Hey, I’m just saying. No need to get your nuts rustled.” “Innocent little girl, anyone?” I make a weak attempt to derail the conversation. “Listen. ‘away’ is no destination. This road leads nowhere.” “Does it ...
by 651
Thu Aug 13, 2015 4:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Act I complete] [Also, it's dead]

The melting track greets me with a pouty little girl’s face looking up at me. “Remember out promise?” “No late arrivals,” I recite as a sacred oath of some sort. “Ran here on the double.” Emi Ibarazaki, a legless runner. Our school has a whole special category of these rule breakers, often successfu...
by 651
Thu Aug 13, 2015 4:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Act I complete] [Also, it's dead]

After a critical evaluation of everything written so far, I've decided that a total rewrite rewrite of the current "Act I" cutting about 60% of its total volume (which would salvage it) was something beyond my ability. Or rather, it was beyond my ability to grit my teeth and do it. This piece of fi...
by 651
Wed Jul 22, 2015 10:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Updated Mar 14th] [Act I complete]

Had to divide the previous chapter to pad the thread until it hits the next page again, or the page would crash. On the topic, though; I knew dividing the thing in acts was an artificial thing to do right from the start, but managed to divide the story into four logically separated chunks. However,...
by 651
Thu Dec 25, 2014 8:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)
Replies: 103
Views: 171077

Re: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)

Posting in a thread.
by 651
Sun May 25, 2014 6:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Updated Mar 14th] [Act I complete]

Told you, idiot. Overall volume grows again, this time with determined desperation instead of anger floating in the air. Whoever’s there behind the mic puts her all in the music, just listen to these stretched ‘youu’s filled with different emotion each inserted in an otherwise indifferent song. “No ...
by 651
Sun May 25, 2014 6:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Updated Mar 14th] [Act I complete]

An earpiece flies my way, clicks as it turns on and momentarily explodes with crowd noises. I check the monitor to find out that 2-4 are already off stage, and the filler’s about to end. “All right, team. List goes unchanged, Life-Love-Special-Music. Forget about the audience, it’s just you against ...
by 651
Sun May 25, 2014 6:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Updated Mar 14th] [Act I complete]

“Never know when it hits ya,” he answers with visible misappreciation of my evasiveness and curiosity. I want to say their performance is what matters right now, but the harpy’s noticed me by some magic and is coming my way. Right, we have something to do. “Come here, Hanako!” There’s another table ...
by 651
Sun May 25, 2014 6:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Updated Mar 14th] [Act I complete]

“We don’t have the time.” “Oh. Then we’re screwed.” “Not really, I was thinking of a crude method.” “Like what?” “Alcohol.” Total amount of bullshit said in the last thirty seconds approaches a metric ton. Thankfully, it’s crazy enough to convince Kenji. “What do I get from it?” he pulls the last ca...
by 651
Sun May 25, 2014 6:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Updated Mar 14th] [Act I complete]

Want to know another reason we’re in trouble? 2-4 are second to last on the list, meaning our guys will headline, a fact no amount of Shizune’s influence could change. The outcome will be amplified, that’s good news for a good band. In our case, take a guess. To my surprise, the head nurse himself i...
by 651
Sun May 25, 2014 6:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 24327

Re: Come In, Yeti Actual [Updated Mar 14th] [Act I complete]

Can we do it? Furious sun wakes me up on Tuesday, and the question starts drilling my head again. Miki compliments my dedication: neither of the two Mi showed up yesterday due to feeling too good. She gets slightly pissed when all her attempts to spark conversation are shot down. Misha helps though,...