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I wish I had some talent for drawing... you drew hanako very good

looks like the story format and tha narration has improved, good job!
I really liked the dialogs of lilly and akira, very funny and precise.
keep up the good work

looking good so far!
hisao is really hilarious in here, hope this will continue soon!

I think this is really cute!
The script format And descrptions are a little bit weird, but the characters are believable enough, Also be a little more carefull with the double space in the narration because it breaks the reading flow.

Other than that, nice fluffy story!

In my case to start writting And stop Being scared of life, because happiness is not going to fall from the sky.

Okay, somehow I feel this will get me banned or at least is gong to be deleted. Hi there!!! I just recently joined the forums And I will attempt to ask for some oppinions. So anyway, I am working on a crossover fic of KS And JAGS wonderland, anybody heard of that before??? If not, basically JAGS won...