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by vampiricmalice
Wed Mar 27, 2013 11:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 38971

Re: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku fics

i think that the first sex scene in sisterhood was as meaningful as it was because we see Hanako's point of view during all of it. if we see her reasoning she can still have her "essential cuteness" through all of it.
still keep it up, its getting better :)
by vampiricmalice
Tue Mar 26, 2013 11:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 38971

Re: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku fics

sexual scenes are not really necessary in some fics, and i think this story can get away not having any if it becomes too problematic
by vampiricmalice
Tue Mar 12, 2013 11:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 38971

Re: Hanako/Hisao Mini-Fics

I'm hoping in future I can make Hanako a bit more independent. Constantly doing Hanako gets upset - needs comforting stories might get old after awhile.[/quote] i cant guarantee i will be the most dependable for proofreading but i think i can help if you want 8)[/quote] Thanks! I've got about 2/3rds...
by vampiricmalice
Tue Mar 12, 2013 10:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 38971

Re: Hanako/Hisao Mini-Fics

despite what you said, you really seem to have a knack for writing. its nice to see these kind of innocent story's every now and then. please keep it up :wink: Awww, that really means a lot man. Thanks. Of course any technical help/punctuation fixes any can help me with would be appreciated. Or hec...
by vampiricmalice
Mon Mar 11, 2013 8:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 38971

Re: Hanako/Hisao Mini-Fics

despite what you said, you really seem to have a knack for writing. its nice to see these kind of innocent story's every now and then. please keep it up :wink: