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by edruil
Thu Oct 09, 2014 2:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Objects in Space [Hisao]
Replies: 3
Views: 1057

Re: Objects in Space [Hisao]

Very pleased to see you post again, Doomish. This had a very tangible melancholy to it - made me think back to days where I would spend evenings sitting in my chair, doing nothing but drinking whisky and listening to rain hammering on the windowsill. More questions than answers in this one, which I ...
by edruil
Mon Sep 15, 2014 2:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 203439

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/02/14 ~ Reactivated

Mournful3ch0 wrote:I've never dreaded dreading a Helbereth update.
Truth. It's like waiting for Christmas morning. Sometimes it takes about that long, too :)

I kid, of course.
by edruil
Tue Jul 29, 2014 2:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Book 6 complete 20190527)
Replies: 183
Views: 67192

Re: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Part 2-2 up 20140729)

So, I haven't read any of your other works. I picked this up this morning because I was bored at work and didn't have anything to do. Three hours later, I'm done reading it and goddamn has it hit me right in the feels. I was once in a relationship very like Kenji and Naomi's, and I too took a long t...
by edruil
Tue Jul 22, 2014 4:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 287558

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 46 up 7/

azumeow wrote:That would be the Grand Bad End, and end with Noriko pregnant, and Hisao a reluctant father wishing he could go back and die on that fucking roof like he was supposed to!
If that was the sole ending to this, I would probably ragequit fanfiction forever, not gonna lie.
by edruil
Fri Apr 11, 2014 12:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 287558

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 38 up 4/

Really hoping Emi gets a happy ending here. I don't want another Hisao/Hanako ending... This. So much this. I really hate you for putting Emi through the ringer like this, dewelar -_- I mean, I also love you, because this chapter is excellent beyond even your typically excellent standard, but still...
by edruil
Tue Apr 01, 2014 1:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 203439

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/01/14 ~ Abandoned

Given this fic's history of April Fool's jokes, I think I'm safe in assuming that's what's going on here...

....right?? :cry:
by edruil
Tue Mar 18, 2014 1:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Summer Update!
Replies: 197
Views: 38526

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! St. Pat Update

As always, this was a fun read. Definitely not the choice of films I would have expected for Paddy's Day, but it works. I do enjoy your universe, Hoitash. It may not be the easiest with which to maintain suspension of disbelief (is 40k even popular in Japan?) but it's always great fun. I'll raise a ...
by edruil
Tue Feb 18, 2014 12:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kenji Who? Part 3 - Feb 20, 2014
Replies: 14
Views: 2444

Re: Kenji Who?

The library at my school opened before classes started and stayed open through the day. My school was much the same. I often used the library for homework during free periods or during lunch break so I didn't actually have to do it at home. As to the story, I remember someone starting and never fin...
by edruil
Thu Feb 13, 2014 9:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Out Of The Blue" (Neko Book 4) Chapter 27e (20190620)
Replies: 358
Views: 64861

Re: The Neko Story: Book 1 (...And Nakai Makes Three) releas

I can't say I'm a huge fan of your Neutral Evil Miki, and the "all the wealthy families at Yamaku are involved in drug cartels" plot point has been taxing my suspension of disbelief. Those aside, the writing is significantly improved from the initial iterations of this story that you posted on the f...
by edruil
Sat Feb 01, 2014 11:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 203439

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 01/28/14 ~ C.43 - Mental Block

This is almost as good as the image someone posted of a road sign indicating that they were nearing 'Happy Valley'. That was me, and I guarantee - funny as it must have been for you, I probably endangered a few lives on the highway because I was cracking up so hard. It's just north of Phoenix if yo...
by edruil
Fri Nov 08, 2013 11:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 11738

Re: OC "Neko" - Route [cancelled]

I do hope you keep writing this, and I hope you post it here for us to read. What you gave us was only a short sample, to be fair, but I can already tell that the pacing and characterization seem to be much better than in the original route chapters. You might be right that this style will work much...
by edruil
Mon Nov 04, 2013 2:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 287558

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 23 up 11/3]

threesome pls. I can't handle the feels if one of them gets rejected. But for real, let me echo the sentiments already expressed by a few other readers. This is really well done, and despite my loyalty to Emi, I can't help but pull for both of them. I think no matter which girl Hisao chooses in the ...
by edruil
Sat Aug 17, 2013 11:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 203439

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 08/16/13 ~ C.40 - Summer Lull

First of all, I geeked out hard over all the Tolkien references. Nicely done, if a bit over the top. Second, I'm on a long distance drive across the US right now, and I drove by this yesterday on I-17 north of Phoenix only to arrive at my hotel and find a new chapter of this fic posted. http://i.img...
by edruil
Tue Jul 23, 2013 9:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 203439

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 7/22/13 ~ C.39 - The Loneliest Num

So, so happy to see this continued! Looking forward to the next chapter, and hopefully learning a bit more about Yoko's mysterious illness / overdose.
by edruil
Wed Jun 19, 2013 7:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 94293

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 6/18]

I had become afraid that this was deadfic - I'm very happy that isn't the case! Don't worry about taking your time with updates. This was, in my humble opinion, the best chapter you've posted yet, and if it takes some extra time between updates, I'm more than willing to wait.