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by octovaitor
Thu Jan 23, 2014 12:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Octo's Story Time 2: La Villa Strangiato
Replies: 6
Views: 1489

Re: Octo's Story Time 2: La Villa Strangiato

There is a point, I assure you. I am not merely a loony Rush fan that writes bad KS fanfiction.

No, wait a sec. Thats exactly what I am.
by octovaitor
Thu Jan 23, 2014 1:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Octo's Story Time 2: La Villa Strangiato
Replies: 6
Views: 1489

Re: Octo's Story Time 2: La Villa Strangiato

This one is different tonally than the other two. It probably won't have any more parts. Much Too Real The bed feels cold. I stir in my sheets before finally finding the drive to sit up. The hospital is it’s usual self. Blank walls, paintings of flowers, nondescript and easily manageable furniture. ...
by octovaitor
Thu Jan 23, 2014 1:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Octo's Story Time 2: La Villa Strangiato
Replies: 6
Views: 1489

Re: Octo's Story Time 2: La Villa Strangiato

A Rin in Wonderland (part 1) It’s cloudy out today. I don’t remember Emi saying anything about it being cloudy today. It must have crept up on her this afternoon; otherwise, she’d have said something. I’m painting something. I don’t really know what. Emi might know, and if she doesn’t know, then Hi...
by octovaitor
Thu Jan 23, 2014 1:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Octo's Story Time 2: La Villa Strangiato
Replies: 6
Views: 1489

Octo's Story Time 2: La Villa Strangiato

Greetings denizens of the KS forum. I'm trying my hand at some short fiction, again. This is going to be weird. Sex probably won't happen. I have some different short story ideas and I'm going to write them over the course of a few days. Here's the first parts of the first three. As usual, criticism...
by octovaitor
Wed Oct 02, 2013 4:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 89343

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 28/09/2013)

Painful to read. In that good way where you don't wanna stop reading. I love it, can't wait for the Tears of Joy to come.
by octovaitor
Tue Sep 03, 2013 2:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 50403

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!

Wooooo! Excellent read. Good fanfiction is a hell of a drug! Keep writing, for all of our sakes!
by octovaitor
Mon Sep 02, 2013 12:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)
Replies: 24
Views: 4591

Re: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)

Whilst the lovely tunes of Crush 40 play, let's actually get some new content in here! I am your (hardly) humble storyteller, Octovaitor (or Octoman to Shail). No (poorly written} porn today, but some plot. As per usual, I'm happy to take comments and criticism, and I encourage any feedback you wish...
by octovaitor
Sat Aug 31, 2013 8:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 43422

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1

Good work. I still don't necessarily buy that Hanako would ever do this to Hisao, and I don't like her explanation of how she made that decision. I could buy her having a one-night stand after too much alcohol to a sleazebag in a bar, but to have her keep going back specifically for the sex over His...
by octovaitor
Sat Aug 31, 2013 6:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 371968

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 8/31]

Best thing about this story: it gets better the further we go. Great work
by octovaitor
Thu Aug 22, 2013 10:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)
Replies: 24
Views: 4591

Re: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)

Doesn't it? Imagine having a secret sex dungeon IN THE DAMN SCHOOL, and you're in it, DURING SCHOOL, having freaky bondage sex with your same-sex friend and translator IN SCHOOL, and suddenly you hear someone say "Your freckles look like a butterfly", I would personally lay a brick on the spot and ...
by octovaitor
Thu Aug 22, 2013 10:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)
Replies: 24
Views: 4591

Re: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)

Hello, Readers! I know it got weird, and decidedly unsexy for about 99% of you, and any enjoyment you got out of it probably came from riffing at it. But thanks for reading, all of you. I want to get better at this whole fanfiction game, so I appreciate your criticism as much as I do any praise. Ple...
by octovaitor
Thu Aug 22, 2013 10:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)
Replies: 24
Views: 4591

Re: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)

I can't help but wonder what Rin would do if she walked into the student council sex room <_< .. Rin, Kenji, and Akira have some interesting reactions to situations xD Rin would sit there and stare or make a completely unrelated comment(While they are having sex, Rin says "Are you aware the freckle...
by octovaitor
Thu Aug 22, 2013 10:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)
Replies: 24
Views: 4591

Re: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)

Yay for Anachronism Screw. Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull was released a year after KS takes place. Also: I can't seem to read this fic without breaking out into laughter. Probably because it's so out there :lol: Thanks for reading. As for the anachronism, I apologize, but I tho...
by octovaitor
Thu Aug 22, 2013 9:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)
Replies: 24
Views: 4591

Re: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)

I- .... Wha-... The fuck..? WHY DOES EVERYONE ASSUME SHIZUNE IS A BONDAGE/SEXUAL MANIAC!? Good lulz btw, not my #1 choice for erotic reading material though Thanks for reading. I'm glad I at least provided entertainment in some variety. As for "why bondage?", it's the vibe I think most people got f...
by octovaitor
Thu Aug 22, 2013 9:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)
Replies: 24
Views: 4591

Re: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)

Oddball wrote: I hesitate to call this either good or erotic. I will, however, say this is certainly "What the hell?"
Holy Shit. I love your work! Thanks for reading!