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by centurion911
Sat Mar 09, 2013 5:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 146608

Re: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route

Thank you all for the nice comments. It makes me happy that people still read this, heh. I wish I could go and give highly detailed responses to all of the critiques that have been offered, but I think the story itself answers most of its own questions and I don't really want to ruin any of the mys...
by centurion911
Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)
Replies: 548
Views: 192432

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 2/14)

Just bumping to affirm that yes, there is still interest in this :)
by centurion911
Tue Mar 05, 2013 11:24 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What hurts the most?
Replies: 299
Views: 41148

Re: What hurts the most?

My girlfriend goes to school 350ish miles away from where I go to school. I visit her and she visits me all the time, but anytime either of us leave it gives me a double feel. One for real life, the other for the Hisao/Lilly route
by centurion911
Tue Mar 05, 2013 11:20 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa Shoujo: The Movie.
Replies: 120
Views: 7019

Re: Katawa Shoujo: The Movie.

Could always go with the 4chan idea.

Shia Labeouf as Hisao

Megan Fox as Hanako

It always makes me laugh picturing that
by centurion911
Fri Mar 01, 2013 7:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/28)
Replies: 77
Views: 12578

Re: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/28)

Well this part just confirmed that when you add to KS material, it's really good for me. The first few paragraphs were not that strong as the ones from Hisao waking up. But that as well may be because of the things we already discussed, so thanks for the work. I had a bit of trouble working that on...
by centurion911
Fri Mar 01, 2013 6:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Collateral Damage [Emi's accident]
Replies: 3
Views: 806

Re: Collateral Damage [Emi's accident]

I'm not sure where this is going but I'm interested You flatter me. This is just a short little one-shot that appeared in my head late last night. Inspired by KS, a colleague of mine and I took a page from their book and, in five months, created our own VN, Act I of which you may download here . I'...
by centurion911
Fri Mar 01, 2013 5:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Collateral Damage [Emi's accident]
Replies: 3
Views: 806

Re: Collateral Damage [Emi's accident]

I'm not sure where this is going but I'm interested
by centurion911
Fri Mar 01, 2013 2:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/28)
Replies: 77
Views: 12578

Re: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/28)

OtakuNinja wrote:What a nice conclusion. I got the feels and all that... :mrgreen:
"Why didn't you say that I wanted to go?"
I'm a little confused by this sentence. :?
My apologies, it should have been "Why didn't you say that you wanted to go?"

Fixed it :)
by centurion911
Thu Feb 28, 2013 11:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/28)
Replies: 77
Views: 12578

Saying Goodbye, part 2

By the time we arrived at the airport, I was able to collect my thoughts. I am going to miss Hisao dearly, truly I will. Every moment we spent together will be locked as a tender, priceless memory in my heart. He may not truly love me, he may not really want me, but Akira was right in what she said....
by centurion911
Thu Feb 28, 2013 12:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/28)
Replies: 77
Views: 12578

Re: Hokkaido+Finale-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/25) NEW I

Hmm, I can't say this last part is what I believe Lilly would be thinking, but it was entertaining. It's your interpretation, as well as your story. Write what you want, how you want. For something actually noteworthy, the part where Hideaki is questioning Lilly is a bit jumbled. Hideaki is talking...
by centurion911
Wed Feb 27, 2013 3:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 364856

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)

Can I say that this story endeared me to Suzu?

It was amazing, from the start to the finish, simply amazing.
by centurion911
Wed Feb 27, 2013 6:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/28)
Replies: 77
Views: 12578

Re: Hokkaido+Finale-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/25) NEW I

Sorry for not shutting up when I said I would, but I just noticed one of your previous posts, and I think you might have misunderstood me in one thing: I don't believe for one second that Lilly is as cold as some people make her out to be, I never once said or thought that Lilly was cold. I was jus...
by centurion911
Tue Feb 26, 2013 11:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/28)
Replies: 77
Views: 12578

Re: Hokkaido+Finale-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/25) NEW I

I have to say that I think this is a most plausible explanation for her behavior. I think I lean toward this opinion rather than Mirage's opinion. Otherwise, as Mirage said, Lilly's being a complete bitch. Are you sure you meant Akira reciprocating Lilly's feelings? I was referring to Akira solidif...
by centurion911
Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Shoujo. Repercussions of Feminism
Replies: 4
Views: 1018

Re: Katawa Shoujo. Repercussions of Feminism

Long time no see :) I'm afraid I have no idea what your intention with this piece is. I only know that usually your English is better than this so I assume you intentionally mangled it for some reason... It's a parody on DOOM: Repercussions of Evil, a notoriously "Bad" fan-fiction. http://knowyourm...
by centurion911
Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hokkaido-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/28)
Replies: 77
Views: 12578

Re: Hokkaido+Finale-Lilly's perspective (Updated 2/25) NEW I

Mirage_GSM wrote:Well, it seems like you have your view on events in the VN, and I have mine. Let's leave it at that.
Agreed