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by Doloni
Tue Sep 03, 2013 2:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]
Replies: 68
Views: 13719

Re: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]

Good to hear that you're continuing it, and to know that people still defy the Miki curse. Eagerly awaiting your next update, whenever you're able to release it.
by Doloni
Tue Jul 16, 2013 6:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 14220

Re: Once More [Update: 7/16]

I can't help but think of this poor fellow when I read your writing. Otherwise I find it quite hilarious and the story's good too, eagerly awaiting your next update!
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by Doloni
Mon May 20, 2013 4:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 391976

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/20]

I made sure to turn off my tv and lights while I read so I could get the full effect. Amazing as always. Nice to know I'm not alone in that little ritual. Honestly Hisao was getting on my nerves this update for trying way too damn hard to play the roll of "nice, supportive and understanding guy." C...
by Doloni
Sat Feb 23, 2013 4:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Persistence (OC Story)
Replies: 6
Views: 2500

Re: Persistence (OC Story)

Hi there! I'd like to leave some encouraging words, this chapter looks very promising and I'll surely check for updates regularly (I do hope you continue this). I don't have much experience giving criticism since I don't know anything formal about writing and literary expression (plus English's not ...
by Doloni
Tue Feb 19, 2013 4:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
Replies: 145
Views: 45717

Re: Miki Route (updated 7/17)

Has the author for this given up on this fanfic? Or is he just "brainstorming"? Apparently he hasn't given up, he even wrote a Miki one-short after his last released chapter in this thread (which is awesome , check it out http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=7021). Some information for those who...
by Doloni
Mon Feb 11, 2013 1:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Golden Slumbers [OC x Lilly] (UPDATED 04/02)
Replies: 57
Views: 8168

Re: Golden Slumbers [OC x Lilly] (UPDATED 02/10)

But for some unknowable reason, responding to some cosmic dictation, my legs carry me forward. One foot in front of the other. Left, left, left, right, left. Wut. Other than that little slip, good work man! This is already very promising, the style is good and it's quite comfortable to read. Keep i...
by Doloni
Wed Jan 23, 2013 1:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 391976

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 1/16]

I agree, please don't let this story die! This work is just too good to end up unfinished!
by Doloni
Wed Jan 16, 2013 1:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 391976

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 1/05]

Thanks for writing this. So far the story's awesome, it's one of the best fanfictions I've read. I like your writing style a lot, the way you portray Akira and describe things, and how you keep the story flowing. I find it very enjoyable and natural to read, good work on that. Perhaps the only thing...