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by Ben KSTF
Wed Nov 05, 2014 11:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life doesn't loop like a musicbox tune (one shot)
Replies: 9
Views: 4817

Re: Life doesn't loop like a musicbox tune (one shot)

He had the airport heart attack but Lilly didn't hear him.
by Ben KSTF
Mon Nov 03, 2014 8:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin : Dreamy Encounters (UPDATE 10/30)
Replies: 18
Views: 11885

Re: Rin : Dreamy Encounters (UPDATE 10/30)

Interesting combination of characters, though that meeting would be hard canonically, since by the time Rin starts painting at Sae's Akira has already left for Scotland. There are two or three lines where your Rin is a bit too...normal. She's asking about stuff Rin wouldn't usually be interested in...
by Ben KSTF
Wed Oct 29, 2014 8:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin : Dreamy Encounters (UPDATE 10/30)
Replies: 18
Views: 11885

Re: Rin : Dreamy Encounters (UPDATE 10/30)

And here is chapter 5. This one wasn't originally planned but an idea formed into my mind while I was talking with a friend that plays a very good Akira. What we did is playing the scene out, co-writing it, me playing Rin and him Akira, then I rewrote everything from Rin's point of view. The result ...
by Ben KSTF
Tue Oct 28, 2014 8:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life doesn't loop like a musicbox tune (one shot)
Replies: 9
Views: 4817

Re: Life doesn't loop like a musicbox tune (one shot)

I'm pretty sure I read that somewhere already. Do you have a pastebin, by any chance ? As a fanfic, it's just nothing special, I'm afraid. Not bad, but not particularly good either, and as much as I love Lilly's route, this kind of continuation has been done to death and back. Honestly, I wrote it ...
by Ben KSTF
Mon Oct 27, 2014 8:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life doesn't loop like a musicbox tune (one shot)
Replies: 9
Views: 4817

Re: Life doesn't loop like a musicbox tune (one shot)

Well, Hisao ran after her but she didn't hear him.
by Ben KSTF
Sat Oct 25, 2014 5:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin : Dreamy Encounters (UPDATE 10/30)
Replies: 18
Views: 11885

Re: Rin : Dreamy Encounters

Yo! A few news. I edited chapters 1-3 (better late than never), taking your remarks into consideration. The biggest changes were on the second chapter. Nothing major, but I removed the uses of KS punchlines (all except the imaginary umbrella one), fixed some typos and things like that, so it should ...
by Ben KSTF
Sat Oct 25, 2014 4:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life doesn't loop like a musicbox tune (one shot)
Replies: 9
Views: 4817

Life doesn't loop like a musicbox tune (one shot)

Hello there! This is an alternate Lilly's route ending that I wrote a while ago. I hope you'll enjoy it. Everything was dark. Silence. Only the deep roar of the engines was breaking it. "... Please keep your seatbelts on while the sign is on and have a good flight." She sighed and tried to...
by Ben KSTF
Sat Aug 30, 2014 4:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin : Dreamy Encounters (UPDATE 10/30)
Replies: 18
Views: 11885

Re: Rin : Dreamy Encounters

A wild fanfic appeared! Wild fanfic used 'good stuff' It was super effective! I'm loving it how recently a lot of seemingly dead/dormant fics that I have no idea about are popping out from the blue to surprise me with some good, quality stuff. This is one of them. Writing Rin at her Rin-est is alwa...
by Ben KSTF
Thu Aug 28, 2014 9:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin : Dreamy Encounters (UPDATE 10/30)
Replies: 18
Views: 11885

Re: Rin : Dreamy Encounters

... I'm one freaking year late, but here's the fourth chapter, finally. This is the scene depicted by Kenji in Shizune's act 2. Given how he doesn't recognize Rin when he meets her in her own route, I assumed this happened during Shizune's act 2. CHAPTER 4 : HONEYMUFFIN, THE RETURN Sheep. There are ...
by Ben KSTF
Thu Jun 27, 2013 7:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin : Dreamy Encounters (UPDATE 10/30)
Replies: 18
Views: 11885

Re: Rin : Dreamy Encounters

Hi! Sorry for the delay. Here's the third chapter. CHAPTER 3 : FRIENDS? It's raining outside. Clouds are merged in one big cloud. Is it the king of the clouds ? My nose touches the window. I like rain. It makes everything less real. Blurry, like my thoughts. I turn back. This is my room, unless some...
by Ben KSTF
Tue Jan 22, 2013 4:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin : Dreamy Encounters (UPDATE 10/30)
Replies: 18
Views: 11885

Re: Rin : Dreamy Encounters

"Nice to meet you, delinquent Tezuka! I'm Misha Mikado, and this is Shizune Hakamichi, or Shicchan! You can call us Misha and Shizune, we don't mind, really! Wahahaha!" She's Shiina Mikado. There's nothing with with her introducing herself with her actual name or her nickname, but mixing ...
by Ben KSTF
Tue Jan 22, 2013 4:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin : Dreamy Encounters (UPDATE 10/30)
Replies: 18
Views: 11885

Re: Rin : Dreamy Encounters

CHAPTER 2 : MOVING HANDS I'm a giant butterfly. In the sky. Other butterflies. They are the same as me. They try to be seen, to be understood, but they're just hidden in the mass. We go through fluffy orange clouds. It feels good. I feel alive. I feel... SLAM! I open my eyes. Two people just entered...
by Ben KSTF
Thu Jan 17, 2013 10:10 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Facts about KS
Replies: 77
Views: 32583

Re: Facts about KS

Yeah right, forget it. Tchuss.
by Ben KSTF
Thu Jan 17, 2013 9:31 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Facts about KS
Replies: 77
Views: 32583

Re: Facts about KS

Fact During Rin's route, Hisao has a wristwatch. He talks about it in this route only. But there's way more than that. He's ALWAYS counting the time. You read lines like "I count the seconds passing" in a LOT of scenes, in Rin's route only. The passing of time is thought about in almost ev...
by Ben KSTF
Wed Jan 16, 2013 1:14 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Facts about KS
Replies: 77
Views: 32583

Re: Facts about KS

Okay, you want some mind blowing? Here goes.

Fact 5

Lilly's feet are on Hanako's lap. HA