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by Herma123
Thu Mar 20, 2014 2:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 11354

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)

Wow, it's really been awhile since I got on the Renai. Is anyone still interested in me finishing this?
by Herma123
Thu Jan 17, 2013 8:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 11354

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)

Suox wrote:How dare you make a story so utterly cruel, yet immaculately written?!
Thanks, but I'm still learning. My writing has a lot of room for improvement.
by Herma123
Tue Jan 08, 2013 2:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 11354

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Lilly's Confession)

Fiandra wrote:Is Hanako doing something what I think she's doing ? Huh.
Uh, yeah.

There's a disclaimer for that.
by Herma123
Tue Jan 08, 2013 12:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 11354

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Lilly's Confession)

Two Hallways (Part Three) ~*~ I came here to cry, but It's no use. The anger has largely gone, and so has the despair. I'm left with this empty feeling, perhaps it's some defense mechanism in my mind that prevents me from going into shock. Maybe I am in shock. The bed I am laying on is very expensiv...
by Herma123
Mon Jan 07, 2013 12:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 11354

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Lilly's Confession)

Thanks for pointing out the typos and the fact that for some reason, my header was in the middle of the frigging post and not at the top. How embarrassing.

Also, there is no canon statement or dev comment that says Hanako did not speak with Lilly beforehand about Hisao.
by Herma123
Sun Jan 06, 2013 4:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 11354

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Lilly's Confession)

Very nicely written, but I think personally I'd leave it standing like this. I feel it's as strong as it is especially because it focuses so specifically on this brief moment, showing a flash of an otherwise unseen perspective. Make it more, and it becomes too normal (in the context of the story). ...
by Herma123
Sun Jan 06, 2013 7:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 11354

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Lilly's Confession)

Two Hallways (Part Two) ~*~ I attempt to further collect myself, and possibly drain the color from my cheeks. Lilly's face turns from excited to downcast, as she begins to open her mouth again. "I'm sorry for not telling you anything about it before. Things have been..." I shake my head, in more of ...
by Herma123
Sun Jan 06, 2013 7:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 11354

Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)

Hi, KS forums. I hail from KSG, and I was told by a couple of people that I should post my works so far for you lot. So, uh. Here. I've got the first two bits done, and the third one is on it's way. It will likely be a three-parter, maybe a four parter. **DISCLAIMER** SEXUAL CONTENT AHEAD I tried my...