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by LegyPlegy
Wed Sep 11, 2013 3:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 219306

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 09/11/13 ~ C.41 - Phone Tag

Woo update! The suspense is killing me, man. I'm sure Hisao would never cheat on Aiko. Right? Right? D:
BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:
Helbereth wrote:Shizune's mother and mine were sisters
As I recall, it was Shizune's mother and Lilly's father that were siblings.
I thought their fathers were siblings. I'm not quite sure either. :L
by LegyPlegy
Fri Sep 06, 2013 3:26 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa General (Poem/Song)
Replies: 4
Views: 2604

Re: Katawa General (Poem/Song)

All the yes. Now I just need to memorize this and we'll all be good :D
by LegyPlegy
Wed Aug 28, 2013 4:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 52638

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!

But...but... nobody was shot... I thought I would find out what happened between Hisao and Kenji in Tokyo ;n; I'd be disappointed but the great story makes up for it! :P
by LegyPlegy
Tue Jun 18, 2013 10:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 389962

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/20]

Excellent chapter! c: I just wanted to point out one thing I noticed.. I don't know what Mom's deal is, but he's definitely petty enough to do something like that. “I haven't even bothered calling him ever since. Give him time to boil it off, I'm sure he's just a little pissed off that someone refus...
by LegyPlegy
Thu Jun 13, 2013 5:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 219306

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 6/02/13 ~ C.38 - Departure

What is the update schedule, anyway? I thought it was wednesdays, for some reason, if there is a schedule at all :P

I love this series, it's probably my favorite KS writing! (as implied by my signature, lol)
by LegyPlegy
Tue May 28, 2013 8:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers in Your Hair [Original Characters] 5/28
Replies: 7
Views: 1273

Re: Flowers in Your Hair [Original Characters] 5/28

It's decent, although the writing style was kind of jarring. It didn't really ~flow~, it was more like "This happened. Then this happened. Now i feel this way. And then suddenly". You should try to "connect" the sentences more, maybe add some new vocab to it as well. Other than that small nuisance, ...
by LegyPlegy
Wed May 01, 2013 8:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 14108

Re: Once More [Hisao x OC] [Update: 4/30]

I couldn't help but grin like a smug bastard during the movie scene with Emi XD
Man, Katsuo has to be pretty damn lucky.

I love the story, especially the fact that there's a cool, relatable, and not-insane bro for Hisao. Can't wait for the next parts! :D
by LegyPlegy
Thu Apr 25, 2013 8:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 56171

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 25th April)

That's a nice song, but you should mention that it's a hotel california cover at the top or in the title. I hadn't realized it until I finished reading the entire thing, then I had to re-read it in tune :P It wasn't rape she wanted it, but they just can't face the facts, I actually laughed out loud ...
by LegyPlegy
Tue Apr 09, 2013 9:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: One Wish (Hanako, post neutral) [Updated, 10/8]
Replies: 30
Views: 15298

Re: One Wish (Hanako, post neutral) [Updated, 10/8]

I enjoyed this story quite a bit, it's great! You're certainly good at writing, that's for sure.

Also, to jump on the bandwagon, that goatee :P (Although it wasn't as impressive as The Kilt .-.)
by LegyPlegy
Tue Mar 12, 2013 6:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 91468

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 3/9

(someone recommended a Nakai/Setou dinner party, which sounds like a fine Thanksgiving Special to me :)) Wooooooooooooooo! oh wait, thanksgiving. Darn, that's far. D: This was an awesome ending for the series. I'm really glad you wrote this, as looking forward to the updates was always something I'...
by LegyPlegy
Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Zade Wither (My own KS story) *Chapter 3 uploaded*
Replies: 15
Views: 2425

Re: Zade Wither (My own KS story)

Very interesting prologue, although the formatting is a bit weird and monotonous. Since you're using 1st person, to make it easier for the reader, I'd suggest using something akin to script format or prose (Sorry, I don't know much about writing), and separating the character's thoughts from the act...
by LegyPlegy
Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 91468

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 3/5 Update

Kenji sighed, “After three Secret Societies, a werewolf, an alien, and the Mafiya, do you really think we’re worried over a couple of two-bit mobsters with no power?” Mafia, right? Unless it's the name of a group, which i'm sure it's not. right?!?! D: Don't worry! I still read every single update, ...
by LegyPlegy
Mon Feb 25, 2013 8:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Kijo
Replies: 146
Views: 56316

Re: Katawa Kijo

griffon8 wrote:Yes, all the chapter titles are Disney songs.
No..no that can't be right...

*checks the chapter titles*

...how did I miss that. :o
by LegyPlegy
Mon Feb 25, 2013 8:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 91468

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 2/23

:wink: I hope that makes us even. At least in another universe. Oh feel free to keep posting your story this is not an act of war move along. I demand satisfaction! We shall fight upon the dueling field at dawn with flint-lock pistols and a bottle of lemon flavored lubricant. COMBUSTIBLE lemon flav...
by LegyPlegy
Fri Feb 22, 2013 8:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 56171

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 21st Feb)

Ranger296 wrote:I'm disappointed that I enjoyed this so much.
This practically sums up a ton of people's feelings (including mine :C), lmao