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by geolord11
Thu May 02, 2013 2:28 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4861
Views: 460890

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

yep im back Hard to think the last couple of days destroyed me true I gave up on girl A now shes just a really good mate. But girl B. Im crazy for. But on top of that a person who i used to call a friend dropped in and decided "huh this girls fit shes mine." Now hes going for her knowing that i have...
by geolord11
Sun Apr 28, 2013 4:32 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4861
Views: 460890

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

If this discussions still up i'd like to add my problems. Recently I've become friends with two beautiful girls (I'm gonna call them girl A and girl B) who have changed me completely. I've known them for less then a month and yet I get depressed and sad when their not around. I also stupidly made t...
by geolord11
Sun Apr 28, 2013 3:55 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4861
Views: 460890

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

If this discussions still up i'd like to add my problems. Recently I've become friends with two beautiful girls (I'm gonna call them girl A and girl B) who have changed me completely. I've known them for less then a month and yet I get depressed and sad when their not around. I also stupidly made th...
by geolord11
Sun Apr 28, 2013 3:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 5060

Re: Brand new Emi route

I'm really sad in saying this but i'm giving up on this fic, I can't find the time nor the inspiration to do it. Recently life and girls have been getting me down so I've tried to find ways to cheer myself up. But this is no place to complain i'm gonna be doing that in Hanako's broken heart club :) ...
by geolord11
Mon Jan 21, 2013 3:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 5060

Re: Brand new Emi route

If mirage wouldn't mind helping me out then I'll choose him but thanks for helping suox
by geolord11
Sun Jan 20, 2013 4:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 5060

Re: Brand new Emi route

And we're back onto another part of the story all the thanks to Suox (my new profeader) for your help. I wake to find myself in the Nurse’s room with a headache which could slay a walrus. What happend. Ohh wait. My competitive spirit got the better of me and i passed out. Great job George. Second da...
by geolord11
Sat Jan 19, 2013 6:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 5060

Re: Brand new Emi route

Suox wrote:I'll happily proofread for you. Do you have Steam?
yes im called geolord121
by geolord11
Fri Jan 18, 2013 11:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 5060

Re: Brand new Emi route

Can someone do me a favour and put the link for the proofreader bellow cheers :) New to the fanfiction word, I see. That's okay. We all start somewhere. A proofreader isn't a thing you can link to. It's a person. The idea is that you write your story and before posting, you give it to this person a...
by geolord11
Fri Jan 18, 2013 6:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 5060

Re: Brand new Emi route

Can someone do me a favour and put the link for the proofreader bellow cheers :)
by geolord11
Thu Jan 17, 2013 5:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 5060

Re: Brand new Emi route

Right start of the next day here we go, and once again thanks to everyone for the advice. The sound of my alarm wakes me from a restless night. Wait what time is it? I lean over to my alarm to see that it is 7.00am. Why on earth did I set it this early? Just above my alarm is a note stuck down on it...
by geolord11
Tue Jan 15, 2013 3:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 5060

Re: Brand new Emi route

Just another short chapter to finish the first day My room seems to be a lot like my room at home with a bed in the corner, a window next to the bed, two wardrobes and a desk. The walls are a nice creamy colour and the floor is a blue carpet. I notice a rather large television across from my bed als...
by geolord11
Mon Jan 14, 2013 3:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 5060

Re: Brand new Emi route

this one will be a bit longer because I didn't really know how to end the paragraph. (I know stupid me) But I want to thank people viewing my story hitting 500 people really cheered me up. Apparently yes, it was torture, I slam my head on the table which leaves a huge bang and a fuzzy feeling on my ...
by geolord11
Sun Jan 13, 2013 8:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 5060

Re: Brand new Emi route

before I start ive changed my character so he does not have dyspraxia :) hope that makes people happy The end of lunch bell interrupted our conversation and in all honesty it bummed me out, I really was enjoying myself. I later learnt that Rin paints believe it or not. Emi earlier ramblings consiste...
by geolord11
Thu Jan 10, 2013 2:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 5060

Re: Brand new Emi route

Alright a scene with Rin please don't criticise me too much thanks I open the door to the rooftop to be assaulted with a big bright light known as the sun beaming into my eyes. “Hello.” Says a voice but I can’t see what they look like curtsey of the sun. Emi squishes past me and says. “Hey Rin sorry...
by geolord11
Wed Jan 09, 2013 4:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 5060

Re: Brand new Emi route

Yep, proofreader. Don't worry, I've had Silentcook on my ass plenty of times for shit in my stories; it's nothing to be ashamed of. Not saying you are , but, yeah, I'll just stop talking now. to be an honest I'm ashamed a bit but hearing someone else have the same problem makes me feel a bit better...