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by Carighan
Wed Aug 06, 2014 8:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 275774

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 47 up 8/

Mahorfeus wrote:By god, a story in which Shizune's mother isn't dead?
Amazing, isn't it? I had to read it twice to realize that. :P
by Carighan
Mon Jul 21, 2014 4:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 275774

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 46 up 7/

I've got a bad feeling about this Yeah but no one since the last chapter seems to be willing to type it down that Lilly might end up killing herself. Though I'm not sure. dewelar writes really really well, but I'm not sure he (she?) wants to pick up something as big as an undertone of grief. So who...
by Carighan
Mon May 26, 2014 8:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 275774

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 41 up 5/

I agree with the sentiment that it seems to swing heavily in favour of either ending on a Hanako-Hisao relationship or at least ending on something hinting towards a future with that. But... much as I thought a few dozen pages back that I'd dislike a "happy ending" in that sense, I feel the way you'...
by Carighan
Mon May 26, 2014 7:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 913
Views: 342002

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]

Wow, and to think I followed this the entire time.

Very nice ending, and overall, amazing work. Now the real question is: what do you do with your storywriting experience now? ;)
by Carighan
Tue May 13, 2014 2:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 913
Views: 342002

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/11]

Squeeeeeeee!!

(that is all)
by Carighan
Sat Apr 26, 2014 6:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 275774

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 39 up 4/

Hrm, congrats. You're one of the first writers I see writing a vulnerable and broken Lilly (with her way of living behind a practices persona only being second to Misha in the VN) in a very consistent and believable manner.

Very awesome chapter. :D
by Carighan
Wed Apr 16, 2014 7:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Replies: 124
Views: 25916

Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}

Yes. You can't just stop on a teaser like that! :P
by Carighan
Mon Mar 31, 2014 4:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 275774

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 37 up 3/

You did push Noriko from obnoxious to really interesting rather quickly there, yes. Though personally I think she's good at what she is right now, because if she becomes more prominent it'd be too sudden. Ofc, you present her as someone who doesn't wait one second to act on her impulses, but still.....
by Carighan
Mon Mar 17, 2014 4:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 913
Views: 342002

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/6]

Really nicely done. Thank you.
I initially wanted to post about some minor details, but someone was faster than me. ;)
by Carighan
Sun Mar 16, 2014 4:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 275774

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 36 up 3/

Very interesting chapter. I was expecting you to have some sort of positive surprise plot change to Lilly's return.

And I'm quite happy - this being a post-neutral-end story - that there isn't, and you're continuing the plot as it is. :)
by Carighan
Tue Feb 18, 2014 6:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 275774

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 34 up 2/

"Hanako," she says, returning to her serious tone, "I hope your first confession turns out better than mine did." :'( (Shizune bad end was my natural play through) Very interesting chapter, especially how you wrote the panic Hanako shows and how Misha interacts with her. If I had to criticize somet...
by Carighan
Thu Feb 06, 2014 6:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 913
Views: 342002

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/4]

Very nice update. Thanks. :)
by Carighan
Tue Jan 28, 2014 6:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 913
Views: 342002

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 12/25]

I regret that I have to make a post like this, but there's going to be some delays on this coming chapter. More than what's already been suffered through ;___;. There's just a lot of stuff going on in my personal life at the moment. Too much drama, for one. I'm sorry, I'm still working on the next ...
by Carighan
Sat Jan 11, 2014 7:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 275774

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 31 up 1/10]

Now I'm sort of thinking that this being a post-bad-end story, it'll in itself not have a happy ending at all. Which would be mighty interesting if written really well. And so far the writing is top-notch. :o
by Carighan
Sat Dec 28, 2013 8:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira-pseudo route [12/21]
Replies: 26
Views: 4006

Re: Akira-pseudo route [12/21]

BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:Quite like myself. I had thought Thanatos' thread had updated when I saw this, actually, given the date in the title.
Same. I had a brief moment of panic when I thought Thanatos had deleted the thread, because I opened this and only saw two pages. :o