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by Fanuilos
Sat May 24, 2014 3:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 355955

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]

This fic has been a source of pleasure during a not so great year for me. Thank you Thanatos for seeing it to the end!
by Fanuilos
Sat Aug 31, 2013 11:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 355955

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 8/31]

WHOO!! This is a great chapter. It was enjoyable to read how Jigoro and Akira interact and the growing romance is amazing!
by Fanuilos
Fri Aug 30, 2013 12:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 355955

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 7/28]

Thanks for the update! I'm looking forward to reading it.
by Fanuilos
Sat Jul 27, 2013 12:29 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Orchestrated - Katawa Symphony
Replies: 21
Views: 5015

Re: Katawa Shoujo Orchestrated - Katawa Symphony

Hmm, Parity is a tricky one and I'm not sure it would work well in an orchestral setting anyways. Maybe a jazz combo?
by Fanuilos
Thu Jul 25, 2013 6:21 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Orchestrated - Katawa Symphony
Replies: 21
Views: 5015

Re: Katawa Shoujo Orchestrated - Katawa Symphony

There are some really nice moments in these! There was a low brass entrance with a chord in Three Stars that was really great, and I like the stylistic choices with Jitter.
by Fanuilos
Wed Jul 24, 2013 12:32 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Orchestrated - Katawa Symphony
Replies: 21
Views: 5015

Re: Katawa Shoujo Orchestrated - Katawa Symphony

I like it! It has a much more fuller sound, and I like the choices you made in giving solos to different instruments. There's a lot more meat to this tune so I think it lends itself better to an orchestra. I'm not sure if it's intentional, but it sounds like there's some extra crunchiness in the cho...
by Fanuilos
Sun Jul 21, 2013 3:06 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Orchestrated - Katawa Symphony
Replies: 21
Views: 5015

Re: Katawa Shoujo Orchestrated - Katawa Symphony

Right, it's pretty iconic for the piece. I'm looking at it from an audience perspective listening to an orchestra. It wouldn't really be heard over the other instruments, and since this is an orchestration project it's cool to experiment and see what does work.
by Fanuilos
Sun Jul 21, 2013 2:29 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Orchestrated - Katawa Symphony
Replies: 21
Views: 5015

Re: Katawa Shoujo Orchestrated - Katawa Symphony

You're relying on the piano too much, especially in the bass parts. Try expanding it out more. Cellos can play the moving eighth pattern, low brass can be used to emphasize certain points and the melody can be pass more frequently between strings, woodwinds, and high brass I feel. The nice thing abo...
by Fanuilos
Fri Jul 19, 2013 2:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A preview to my gender bend story
Replies: 12
Views: 1647

Re: A preview to my gender bend story

Yeah I know I stuck a bit too much to the actual story, but in my defense it was only a mock up, and it was just a preview on how Misao will meet some of the characters I can't really change too much at that point however things WILL be different in terms of story and in some characters personality...
by Fanuilos
Fri Jul 19, 2013 9:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A preview to my gender bend story
Replies: 12
Views: 1647

Re: A preview to my gender bend story

I agree about the script format: Don't do it. Also, try not to lift all the dialogue verbatim from the story. I don't need to read a story where all that changes from the VN is the names and the pronouns. I can do that by rereading the VN and doing the substitutions in my head. If you just want to ...
by Fanuilos
Wed Jul 17, 2013 7:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 355955

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 6/18]

It's all good dude. Things like work, friends, and college are important to take care. This summer I had to appeal for more financial aid since I've taken so many credit hours. Are you able to appeal for financial aid? Hope things take a turn for the better for you.
by Fanuilos
Sun Jun 16, 2013 6:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 202371

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 6/15)

(I do appreciate the feedback, and certainly hope that I'm not scaring anyone off with my essays on why I'm right. I'll try to cut back if people feel it's distracting or otherwise detrimental to the story.) I think it helps us understand the what and why for your thoughts. Personally I don't mind ...
by Fanuilos
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:52 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: POLL: First girl you went for
Replies: 416
Views: 47720

Re: POLL: First girl you went for

I was going to go for Hanako, but ended up going for Lilly instead.
by Fanuilos
Thu Jun 06, 2013 12:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]
Replies: 68
Views: 12459

Re: Miki Psuedo Route [New work, added 6/5/13]

Oooo, nice! I especially liked the interaction between Kenji and Miki. Looking forward to the next chapter!
by Fanuilos
Sat May 04, 2013 5:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 355955

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/3]

Oh man, I got to the end of the chapter and I was leaning halfway off my chair with my face about half a foot from my screen. Great writing man!