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by Heartless Wanderer
Mon Nov 05, 2012 10:44 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Design your character!
Replies: 126
Views: 63761

Re: Design your character!

Why not class 3-1? I never see 3-1 ever get so much as a mention in anything. Yet it must exist, why else would there be a 3-2? I read somewhere that 3-1 is the deaf class. I can't remember if that was pre-release info or just something from fanfic though. I'm pretty sure it's not mentioned in the ...
by Heartless Wanderer
Mon Nov 05, 2012 10:10 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Design your character!
Replies: 126
Views: 63761

Re: Design your character!

Arriving at Yamaku during the late winter, he was placed into class 3-3. You might want to rethink this. Winter months in Japan are December, January, and February. The school year ends in March. Yes, yes, yes, please account for the difference in schoolyear structure. Mind you, I'm only even aware...
by Heartless Wanderer
Mon Nov 05, 2012 8:24 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Emi inspired running/workout
Replies: 2704
Views: 1613011

Re: Emi inspired running/workout

Haven't been running much these past few days. It's either the heat or my laziness not letting me do a full 30 minutes run. Also my legs get sore, but that's just an excuse too. At first I thought "What, heat? It's November." Then I noticed you live in Brazil and felt like an ass for not ...
by Heartless Wanderer
Sun Nov 04, 2012 3:28 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Emi inspired running/workout
Replies: 2704
Views: 1613011

Re: Emi inspired running/workout

They work your entire arm, but the bulk of it is in the chest-to-arm connection. The pectoralis major muscle ends at the shoulder, originating from the sternum and clavicle. It's all one big sheet of muscle ;) the connection you speak of is your chest muscle I know that. But I like to speak in laym...
by Heartless Wanderer
Sun Nov 04, 2012 2:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 281992

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

EDIT: Oh yeah, I wanted to say that this story is really awesomesauce. Seriously, good work. Is it available on FanFiction.Net? I wanna favorite it. (Eh, it has some adult scenes, so probably not if you're actually obeying the TOS...) Would kind of prefer thoughts/inner monologues to be in italics r...
by Heartless Wanderer
Sun Nov 04, 2012 2:09 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: If Katawa Shoujo were more of and H-Game (Adult Content)
Replies: 95
Views: 68712

Re: If Katawa Shoujo were more of and H-Game (Adult Content)

An alternate for Hanako would be that under her clothes, she's got tattoos and Piercings. Since she has no control of her scars, she tries to comphensate buy doing body mod. ...Bleh. Piercings and tattoos. Can't stand them. Please do not pollute my beloved Hanako with such meh-ness. Wait, no, I'm n...
by Heartless Wanderer
Sun Nov 04, 2012 2:06 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Emi inspired running/workout
Replies: 2704
Views: 1613011

Re: Emi inspired running/workout

Push-ups focus on your chest muscles How's that? The chest isn't even involved aside from it being the thing that's pushed up. It's the muscles that connect the chest to the shoulders and so forth. I just started a pushup regimen the other day actually, and I definitely noticed some soreness there....
by Heartless Wanderer
Sun Nov 04, 2012 1:16 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: POLL: First girl you went for
Replies: 416
Views: 136556

Re: POLL: First girl you went for

Strange...this was exactly the reason why I *liked* her. Shizune's route had a particular appeal because I'm what I like to call a 'reluctant introvert'. I'm actually a very sensitive, sociable person on the inside - I like interacting with people, getting to know them, helping them out and making ...
by Heartless Wanderer
Sat Nov 03, 2012 2:58 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Design your character!
Replies: 126
Views: 63761

Re: Design your character!

Well, thanks. I'm still working out the details, though, and even what I've come up with so far is subject to change at this point. I'm relieved that what I've got so far is workable, though, I was a bit worried about it. Indeed. Is the character someone you thought of, or is it supposed to be you ...
by Heartless Wanderer
Sat Nov 03, 2012 1:10 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Design your character!
Replies: 126
Views: 63761

Re: Design your character!

Well, thanks. I'm still working out the details, though, and even what I've come up with so far is subject to change at this point. I'm relieved that what I've got so far is workable, though, I was a bit worried about it.
by Heartless Wanderer
Sat Nov 03, 2012 12:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
Replies: 169
Views: 1923204

Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)

One thing that happens commonly in fanfiction, which is a major pet peeve of mine, is that people have a tendency to Gary Stu-ify or Mary Stu-ify (depending upon gender) existing characters within a fandom, often the protagonist. This isn't even as simple as under-emphasizing their flaws because the...
by Heartless Wanderer
Sat Nov 03, 2012 9:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life vs. Living [OC x Hanako/post Lilly-good end/18+] Ch. 4
Replies: 27
Views: 12889

Re: Life vs. Living [OC x Hanako/post Lilly-good end/18+] Ch

It's true that it doesn't add anything to the story, but it was never meant to add something in the first place. It should merely show that their relationship is still working or rather that their love is still there. I understand what you're getting at here, but at this early stage of the story, w...
by Heartless Wanderer
Sat Nov 03, 2012 1:34 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Design your character!
Replies: 126
Views: 63761

Re: Design your character!

The only limits are the tuition costs and the fact that Yamaku doesn't accept students with learning disabilities. Fixed. Too many people make this mistake. I think they take things too literally to realise Lilly didn't want to just go out and say "Yamaku won't take retarded kids". I thou...
by Heartless Wanderer
Sat Nov 03, 2012 1:14 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Design your character!
Replies: 126
Views: 63761

Re: Design your character!

-lolsnip- That's certainly interesting. I don't know how easy it would be to just up and transfer into a place like Yamako, but that's not really the point. You've managed to create a character without a disability (which is kind of a defining point for characters who would go to Yamako) who still ...
by Heartless Wanderer
Fri Nov 02, 2012 11:14 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Design your character!
Replies: 126
Views: 63761

Re: Design your character!

This is a rough overview of a character idea I haven't quite finished fine-tuning yet, who exists primarily as a Social Link character for my crossover fanfiction, Katawa Shoujo: Persona . A male student in his senior year at Yamaku (let's call him Subject A for now) who has been attending the schoo...