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by Po1ntBlank
Sun Dec 02, 2012 10:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 360928

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 12/1]

Where is Act 3 part 3? Or am I missing something? 3-1 started with class, 3-2 was texting, and now its 3-4? Is there actually a 3-3 or is this just a typo. I don't want to read ahead! haha 3-1 picked up in Akira's penthouse; check the table of contents in the opening post, it's got links to every p...
by Po1ntBlank
Sat Dec 01, 2012 5:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 360928

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 12/1]

Where is Act 3 part 3? Or am I missing something? 3-1 started with class, 3-2 was texting, and now its 3-4? Is there actually a 3-3 or is this just a typo. I don't want to read ahead! haha
by Po1ntBlank
Thu Nov 15, 2012 3:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 360928

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/8]

Really? I thought both middle and secondary education ran on a 3-part year. That's what all the sources I checked said, anyway. Correct. The Japanese school system has trimesters from elementary school to the end of high school. I'm not completely sure about college, but that's not relevant here. O...
by Po1ntBlank
Thu Nov 15, 2012 2:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 360928

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/8]

Haha Dimensional Analysis. I admit I hated it at first, but when you really understand why it's better than the other ways of converting, and you have a good scientific calculator, at least it makes sense. Is it weird that Hisao, who is so good at science, is learning as a Senior what I learned as a...
by Po1ntBlank
Mon Nov 12, 2012 1:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 56
Views: 16216

Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Doomish wrote:Whoops. In the original route Hisao was already learning sign language by the time Act 2 started, but I changed that and forgot to correct it in the parts I'd already written! It's fixed now, my bad! :V
Not trying to pester, but curious as to how much progress has been made on the next part
by Po1ntBlank
Fri Nov 09, 2012 11:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 360928

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/8]

Thanatos02 wrote:
Po1ntBlank wrote:This isnt the end of act 3 is it?
We're just gettin' started, mang.
Okay great! Keep in mind I arrived at the end of Act 2, so I wasn't sure how you released them. Keep em coming!
by Po1ntBlank
Fri Nov 09, 2012 2:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 360928

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/8]

Lovin it! Such a happy tone compared to some other fanfics I've read.

Only problem I had is that going from reading every other chapter at once, to just this update, it feels pretty short ;)

This isnt the end of act 3 is it? Act 2 had what, 8 parts, right?
by Po1ntBlank
Sun Nov 04, 2012 1:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
Replies: 145
Views: 43363

Re: Miki Route (updated 7/17)

Any progress on the new chapter?

Edit: Sorry Silentcook, just wanted to post here so I could subscribe to the thread
by Po1ntBlank
Sat Nov 03, 2012 5:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 360928

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/2]

Love this chapter. I for one don't really have a huge problem with the pool game. I'm pretty good myself, and I've seen some crazy games played at bars, etc. I've been played by my friends younger cousin who was like 16 years old. She played a perfect game as well, not suprised Akira can do it too
by Po1ntBlank
Fri Nov 02, 2012 1:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 360928

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/27]

Edit: On top of this, any idea when we can expect the next release? ;D I'm aiming for tomorrow or the day after. It's turning out a lot longer than I expected heh so it might be a bit. I'm still in the process of getting it all written out, and hopefully I'll do a decent job of proofreading/editing...
by Po1ntBlank
Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 360928

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/27]

Wall of text Just something I want to point out. I've been following a good amount of fanfics here. My two favorite styles being Epilogues and Pseudo-Routes, as they bring me back to the feeling of the original game. You say a lot of things like, "I've written myself into a corner" (which may be so...
by Po1ntBlank
Thu Nov 01, 2012 8:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 360928

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/27]

Just a few opinions I'd like to share, after catching up with the story. Get rid of the choices. Instead of " 'I don't know...' [Comfort her] [Don't comfort her] I decide to comfort Misha" Just get rid of the brackets. Or, if you are really hell bent on using the brackets, check out Rikabro's Rika r...
by Po1ntBlank
Wed Oct 31, 2012 10:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 56
Views: 16216

Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

She gives me a wink. "Shicchan says I'd be more aero-dy-namic if my hair were in a ponytail, so now it is~!" She pronounces 'aerodynamic' like the word has never left her lips before. I wonder if she knows what it means. This is what I LOVE about your writing. The little nitty-gritty things that yo...
by Po1ntBlank
Wed Oct 31, 2012 1:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 152941

Re: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route

I bear down with the stubbornness of the Fastest Things On No Legs, sweat dripping from the tip of my chin. Haha this is funny. My older bro went to University of Arizona, and their "motto" of sorts is Bear Down. I have a hat with that printed on it, I wear almost every day, and it's kinda become m...
by Po1ntBlank
Tue Oct 30, 2012 11:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 56
Views: 16216

Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Hoitash wrote:This post not an endoresement of drug abuse. Please abuse responsabily.
Oh god I almost fell out of my chair