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by Trivun
Mon Sep 08, 2014 5:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)

That's lovely. And it's finally done. And I will indeed read it at leisure again. Thanks! You're welcome, happy to see you enjoyed it :D Any attempt at conversation will no doubt be doomed to failure, to stuttering and awkward silences worse than the one we'd be trying to fill. But the silence now ...
by Trivun
Mon Aug 18, 2014 2:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (COMPLETE 18/08/2014)

It's time now, then, for what everyone's been waiting for... the final chapter of Hanako's Story! I would like to both apologise and thank everyone for this - an apology for taking so long to finish, and for such a wait between this and my previous update, and a thank you to everyone who's read thi...
by Trivun
Tue Aug 05, 2014 1:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 20/06/2014)

I know there's been nothing new posted here for over a month, but I am working now on the final chapter, so an update will be forthcoming! Story isn't dead yet, though it would be a cruel irony if I made it all the way to the end then did a George RR Martin on everyone at the very last step... ;)
by Trivun
Tue Jul 01, 2014 6:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 20/06/2014)

For once, I've avoided replying to each message individually, but it's nice to see a chapter instilling a reasonable debate into the comments now that the revised chapter is (at least a bit) better than the original version I uploaded. End of the day, everyone has different opinions on the scene, an...
by Trivun
Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)

Okay, I've edited this now with the updated version. Most of the pre-sex section is unchanged, except for removing the more awkward bits (like the references to Misha/Miki), while I've tried to change the sex section to show the awkwardness nearer the start, and display more of how Hanako is conflic...
by Trivun
Fri Jun 20, 2014 8:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)

I'll be honest, after posting I expected this. Three comments so far, two critical and one positive, and even as the author I find myself leaning more towards the critical comments (which I expect there'll probably be more of soon enough). When I get some time I plan to go right through this chapter...
by Trivun
Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 20/06/2014)

I knew this chapter would be pretty polarising, and it was awkward as hell to write since I'm not great (read: experienced) at writing about intimate encounters like this. At any rate, I can always go back and edit bits when my internet connectivity is fully restored... a certain pink haired loudspe...
by Trivun
Fri Jun 20, 2014 5:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 20/06/2014)

Right then, I'll admit that I didn't expect to write this so soon after my previous announcement, but I had a lot of time on my hands yesterday evening since seeing England do so poorly in their World Cup game basically meant I had no interest in watching us getting hammered. Seriously, we're terri...
by Trivun
Tue Jun 17, 2014 4:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)

If you have a cell phone, you may want to investigate putting PDANet on both it and your computer for in-a-pinch situations just such as this. Thanks for the suggestion! Unfortunately I'm not sure, looking at the site, if that works in the UK (where I am), and my phone's pretty old so it doesn't ge...
by Trivun
Mon Jun 16, 2014 4:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)

Hi all! Just a quick update as it's gone past the time that I normally get a new chapter uploaded, so I think I should let everyone know what's happening (and reassure everyone that I am still alive. Please ignore the maggot in my eye socket, that's completely unrelated.). I understand you may be di...
by Trivun
Wed Jun 04, 2014 11:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)

My point precisely :) Also, not entirely sure why you're dreading the H-scene, but glad to see you look forward to it as well xD. Because it was awkward as hell. And I meant that it was true more for Lilly THAN Hanako, not and. While Hisao's fitness level isn't improved in Hanako's route, it doesn'...
by Trivun
Wed May 21, 2014 6:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)

Hanako's voice is one of my voices of choice, and I'm always glad to see her developing at the hands of a skilled crafter. Thanks for the latest update! Not really sure if I'm THAT skilled, but thanks all the same :) What a fantastic surprise to come home to today! Excellent work, as always Trivun....
by Trivun
Sat May 10, 2014 12:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 03/04/2014)

sanduba wrote:I realised I haven't read this chapter yet.

Good work, as always :wink:
Thank you my friend! Always good to see a satisfied reader :)
by Trivun
Sat May 10, 2014 12:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 10/05/2014)

This one's a bit longer than my recent chapters, about four times as long in fact, so I'm fairly glad it didn't take me four times as long to upload! Act 4 – Chapter Five, Third Branch: Lost in the City of Angels Even I'm not entirely sure why I'm in the city. I suppose it was the need for a break,...
by Trivun
Tue May 06, 2014 12:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87251

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 03/04/2014)

I've been meaning to reply to the comments for ages now and only just gotten around to it - damn 5000 word essay getting in the way of stuff... apologies all, and in addition, an update will be forthcoming :D Good update! I agree with Atario (what a surprise), in that this feels appropriate - and it...