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by CaptainFalcon
Tue Aug 04, 2015 12:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 304655

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.60 posted 8/3

Congrats for reaching 60 chapters! I have to say that in all honesty, this is easily one of my top 3 favourite fan fics on this site, right along with Scissorlips's Suzu route and Thanatos's Akira route. Thank you for producing something so moving and amazing :)
by CaptainFalcon
Sat Jul 04, 2015 12:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 35911

Re: I can't sleep

I HATE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW
Ok I really don't because it was well written, but goddamnit I shouldn't be reading this sorta stuff after a night out drinking
by CaptainFalcon
Thu Jul 02, 2015 12:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 81819

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 1/7/15]

I gotta say before I started reading this I wasn't sure what to expect, Taro is someone that has barely crossed my mind within the KS world. But your portrayal of him is excellent and i'm enjoying the story more and more as I go along. Consider me hooked and a fan!
by CaptainFalcon
Sun May 25, 2014 4:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 372829

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]

Bravo! That was a perfect way to end such an amazing and emotional story. Furthermore congrats on finishing the route! I've been on board from the beginning and it was such a joy and privilege to be able to read that. So thank you
by CaptainFalcon
Sat Dec 21, 2013 8:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira-pseudo route [12/21]
Replies: 26
Views: 4448

Re: Akira-pseudo route [12/21]

I'm going to have to agree with almost everyone who has commented here thus far. Writing something like this right off the bat is tough, especially since your're essentially comparing your future story to what is one of the finest pieces of fan fiction on this website, due to your chosen girl. It's ...
by CaptainFalcon
Tue Dec 10, 2013 11:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)
Replies: 1057
Views: 294842

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 12/9)

Thanatos's Akira pseudo-route should also be completed soon enough too by the looks of things (considering it's in act V currently) Anyway I am very much enjoying this so far, i've seen a fair few fics start off shaky but you've built a solid foundation here and as such I look forward to the next in...
by CaptainFalcon
Wed Nov 27, 2013 11:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two halves make a whole [Iwanako pseudo route] [on hold]
Replies: 75
Views: 10021

Re: Two halves make a whole [Iwanako pseudo route] [on hold]

Personally I think once everything is done and dusted, arguments are solved and everything is sorted, this thread could possibly be deleted and then started over again once the author is properly ready to write the story. Just a suggestion though, but it seems the most logical thing to do, lest peop...
by CaptainFalcon
Wed Nov 13, 2013 12:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 17148

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (11/12)

And the crowd begins to go wild! An enjoyable chapter and I liked the banter between Hisao and Kenji (i'm always a sucker for anything Hisao-Kenji)
I'm excited for part 2!
by CaptainFalcon
Sun Nov 10, 2013 8:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 17148

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (11/9)

I'm liking the current pacing of this story, it's leaving me with a lot of anticipation about who Karen is and how a proper interaction between her and Hisao will go. It's only 4 chapters in, so give it a bit more time methinks and then we will see her. Plus I get the feeling Karen will be a rather ...
by CaptainFalcon
Mon Aug 26, 2013 9:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 155391

Re: The great fan fiction archive

I just wanted to add (in-case there are still any concerns about this) that neither Thanatos's Akira pseudo-route nor ProfAllister's Misha route (For Want Of A Nail) are abandoned, both authors just take time to update due to time constraints/busy schedules and all that jazz. I'm not sure how many a...
by CaptainFalcon
Mon Aug 26, 2013 7:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rooftops (An Emi Story)
Replies: 32
Views: 6479

Re: Rooftops (An Emi Story)

I rather enjoyed that, even if I am usually a sucker for happy endings :lol: That aside though I like how you perfectly blended in the past/what happened in the actual VN to the main story you created, which was very well written in my opinion If you put any more work up in the forums I shall defini...
by CaptainFalcon
Sun Aug 18, 2013 9:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
Replies: 32
Views: 4917

Re: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC)

Woot, more OC goodness to feast my eyes upon! A good start so far, you certainly have piqued my interest
by CaptainFalcon
Fri Aug 02, 2013 12:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Waiting (Chapter Ten, 7/15)
Replies: 72
Views: 16498

Re: Waiting (Chapter Two, 8/1)

That would be a feat, since 3-1 is for he hearing impaired ;-) I just assumed that it was one of those silly jokes, like "That was so loud a deaf person could hear it" That's the kind of vibe I got from that line but that could just be me Anyway I enjoyed this chapter, i'm looking forward to seeing...
by CaptainFalcon
Mon Jul 29, 2013 5:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 372829

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 7/28]

Well my day has officially been made now :D
A fantastic update as per usual. And Jigoro vs. Mr. Satou hey? I'd pay very good money to see that fight!
by CaptainFalcon
Wed Jun 19, 2013 1:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 97719

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 6/18]

Hooray, an update! Another great chapter as per usual and it was nice seeing Ito again. You've created some wonderful characters here and as per usual I look forward to the next installment!