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by Mistoffelees
Thu Aug 30, 2012 6:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 408301

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/27)

Well enjoy your vacation then! Don't feel obligated to a bunch of anons on the internet, haha! As long as we know you're alive I think we can all keep our Suzu route cravings in check.
by Mistoffelees
Thu Aug 30, 2012 6:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 225206

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/29

Hello again! Great chapter, love the character development, etc, etc. Although I personally don't think it breaks the suspension of disbelief, about this seafood in Japan discussion- having lived in Tokyo for a few years, I can definitely attest to fresh fish being everywhere. You'd have to actively...
by Mistoffelees
Fri Aug 24, 2012 9:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cureless, a (really short) one shot.
Replies: 4
Views: 1146

Re: Cureless, a (really short) one shot.

My only complaint is you spelled Lilly wrong... Oops. TIL I've been reading her name wrong this whole time. Fixed that! Shouldn't happen again! Perhaps I'm just picking nits, but I'm not fond of repeating the same two words like that in any context of prose; though it does make sense on second glan...
by Mistoffelees
Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 225206

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/22

Tired of having me post here yet? Haha, no misc. or nits to pick at this time. Just writing in to say I enjoyed the newest addition to this story, although you seem to get that a lot already! I figured I owed it to you though. Cheers.
by Mistoffelees
Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cureless, a (really short) one shot.
Replies: 4
Views: 1146

Re: Cureless, a (really short) one shot.

Haha, truth be told I was almost a little glad at first. At least I could let myself down lightly. Thank you. . . I honestly didn't really expect much in terms of positive reaction. But here I am pleasantly surprised! I've been thinking about it, but I don't know if I really have a story worth writi...
by Mistoffelees
Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cureless, a (really short) one shot.
Replies: 4
Views: 1146

Cureless, a (really short) one shot.

Hello all! I'm a newbie here, and to writing anything fictional, for that matter. (Unless you count some of my lab data, harr harr.) I fully realize I've nothing to do here in a forum of people who can legitimately put their thoughts into funny little words that somehow invoke feelings in us -other ...
by Mistoffelees
Thu Aug 16, 2012 3:34 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Why is Katawa Shoujo so beautiful?
Replies: 22
Views: 2778

Re: Why is Katawa Shoujo so beautiful?

I don't know who said this first, I will make no claims at being clever enough to dream this up- but I believe it was something along the lines of "whilst most characters seek our attention because they are different, the characters of KS seek it despite it". I think KS just hits certain archetypes ...
by Mistoffelees
Thu Aug 16, 2012 11:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 408301

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/16)

That chapter is just about the cure for Type II Diabetes. :\ Thank you for saving the good end for last, though. Always want the bad news first!
by Mistoffelees
Thu Aug 16, 2012 12:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 225206

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/15

Time for me to wear out my welcome in record time! I'm fairly certain this isn't an intended bit of character development- but if it is, feel free to slap me silly. I found it actually fairly amusing that as much as Aiko states she "lost" the allelic gamble, in some ways, she was actually relatively...
by Mistoffelees
Wed Aug 15, 2012 12:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 408301

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

Not much deep plot inspection in this post. Just want to thank you for writing. Others have already covered/debunked all my concerns and/or nits to pick countless times. No need to add my voice to the choir! Just want to be blatantly 1D and say I've very much enjoyed it all. :P
by Mistoffelees
Tue Aug 14, 2012 11:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 225206

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/10

At risk of rampant fanboyism, I've just made an account now to comment on how great this is. That aside, I do have one minor (read: superfluous) critique on your work here, as an unedjumacated unwritery folk. All the adult characters seem jarringly flat compared to your adolescent ones, although per...